Commission 5 Sneak Peek!

Good Evening Everyone!

I’m a little over halfway done with drafting Commission 5. It has turned into quite a long story (current word count is about 35,000 words) and is taking me longer than average to write. In order to keep you guys in the loop, I’ve decided to give you all a little sneak preview of the story today with the commissioner’s permission.

All plot details are subject to change!

Tentative Title: Love the Sinner

Seth and Nina, a young couple in college, have a great relationship, barring one little point of tension: Nina was to explore clubbing, while Seth would much rather stay home and play video games.

When Nina goes out on her own, she befriends Celine, a tall, gorgeous French exchange student. Celine has always been a lone wolf, breaking hearts and moving from man to man without lasting attachments. When she sees that Nina is shackled to a loser like Seth, she can’t help but pity her naive new friend. So Celine hatches a scheme. She tempts Nina into cheating on Seth, showing Nina how pleasurable casual hookups can be while humiliating Seth and teaching him a lesson for daring to hold back a woman like Nina.

It all goes off without a hitch. Nina brutally cuckolds Seth. Seth is humiliated. The couple breaks up, and Celine wins…

But that isn’t the end of the story.

Months later, Seth isn’t doing so hot. He can’t get over his public humiliation, and his performance as a teacher’s assistant is slipping. He is given one last chance: tutor a scholarship student to improve her grades. The student he has to help tutor, is, of course, Celine.

Although both of them loathe each other, neither has any choice but to accept the arrangement: if Celine fails, Seth will lose his TA position, and Celine will lose her dance scholarship. They must put aside their disdain for each other and work together.

But something strange happens to Celine after weeks of working closely with Seth. He isn’t the worthless nerd that she assumed from her conversations with Nina. Seth is smart, passionate, and instinctively kind, unlike a lot of the douchebag men that are always clamoring to get into Celine’s pants. Celine finds herself developing a desperate little crush on the man who she utterly ruined.

But Seth is never more than coldly polite to her. No matter how beautiful she might be, Seth is absolutely sure that Celine is pure evil, and won’t allow himself to warm up to the woman who ruined his life. Can Celine change his mind? Is it even possible for a man to forgive the unforgivable? Can he put the past in the past and hate the sin while loving the sinner?

Does Celine even deserve it?

That’s right, this story is a brutal cuckold story that changes into an enemies-to-lovers romance. I would describe it as a major writing challenge!

It may seem like I gave a lot of plot details, but trust me when I say that this is still just the plot setup, with a lot more plot coming after the details mentioned here.

Let me know what you think in the comments!