Cross Contamination Part 12
Added 2024-10-22 22:56:17 +0000 UTCGood evening everyone!
I'm pleased to present the rough draft of Cross Contamination part 12: Business and Pleasure! It felt good to get back into the series. This draft might be pretty rough when it comes to typos, so be merciful!
As always, I am absolutely starving for feedback and critique. Was any part boring? Hard to understand? Were there any scenes that you though could have gone further, or tweaks that you think would have made it hotter? I would love to hear about it!
I also love to hear positive feedback of course! Were there any parts you loved or found particularly hot? Hearing about it helps me to know to include more stuff like that in the future!
You can comment feedback below, or email me at grogstoopid32@gmail.com if you have more detailed feedback you would like to give. Thanks!
In my own notes, I do think I might have repeated myself a bit too much when exploring Gina's mental state. I'll be looking to slim things down a little in the edit.
This chapter was Gina heavy, but chapter thirteen is planned to be Cassie heavy, focusing on her cheerleader initiation.
I hope you enjoy the read.
