Hottie in the Mirror part 4 Rough Draft (Minus Epilogue)
Added 2024-09-19 18:23:40 +0000 UTCHello!
Below, I have attached the rough draft of Hottie in the Mirror part 4!
The only thing it is missing now is the epilogue, which I will be writing over the next few days.
I would be thrilled to receive any feedback you might have, positive or negative.
Although this story hits all the emotional and dramatic beats that I set out to, I do think it needs a little spicing up. I plan to expand some of the erotic scenes, especially in the first half, and add at least one scene during the sleepover to increase the proportion of kinky fun in a fairly drama-heavy chapter.
Any other ideas you have to improve the draft would be welcomed!
Keep an eye out for the epilogue, which I plan to post here soon!
I hope you enjoy!
