Downward Dog Part 2 Rough Draft!

Hello!

I have here, hot of the presses, the alpha draft of Downward Dog part 2.

A quick programming note: because of the unexpected length of the scenes I intended to include, I have decided to make Downward Dog a three part series rather than a two part series (and it started out as a stand alone story. Ugh. Story of my life.)

NOT TO WORRY: I have learned my lesson, and I intend to finish the story right away. Instead of moving part three to the end of my work queue, I will be finishing it next, so the story can be complete without having to wait months and months.

I would love to get any feedback you have. Please vote in the poll below and comment if you have the time.

I have included some questions that I asked when I released the first chunk in case they spark discussion.

1. This part represents a time jump from the last story, as is common in my freelancer stories. Does it feel like things have moved forward too far in Jackie and Heather's relationship?

2. Downward dog focuses on two main components: Petplay and Cuckqueaning. The first section focuses more on the petplay, with the next part focusing more on cuckqueaning. Which aspect of the plot is more interesting to you? Or are they equal?

3. Heather is asked in this part to participate in her own degradation by choosing a puppy name for herself. I haven't definitively chosen one yet. Any ideas? It should be feminine and sound like a dog name. Leaning toward "Daisy" but I feel like there could be a better option.

4. Rick Carver will continue to be a problem. I find it sort of interesting: a lot of authors focus on women being seduced and humiliated by disgusting, brutish men. I, on the other hand, tend to focus on women hooking up with men who are mean, but often suave and handsome. Rick Carver is my attempt to dip my toe into that other kind of plot. What do you think? Do you prefer erotic stories were women have sex with unattractive men, or with cruel handsome men?

5. I'm curious about your thoughts in general. Did you like this chapter? Dislike it? Are there parts that could have been better? Keep in mind that this is an alpha draft, and if you did have feedback, it could really help improve the final story!

What did you think of the story?