Hottie in the Mirror part 3 Final Draft
Added 2024-04-18 16:33:06 +0000 UTCHello everyone.
I'm in the middle of drafting Commission Project 2 right now.
I submitted the final draft of Hottie in the Mirror 3 to literotica several days ago, but the approval process may be backed up again, so I am dropping the final draft here in case anyone is interested.
No big plot changes, but smoothing and grammar/punctuation fixes throughout.
Happy reading!
Comments
Yes! HitM 4 is on my list right now! I can't say exactly when it will be done, but I will be posting it here before anywhere else. I'm glad you enjoy the story. It's one of my favorites that I've written too!
Rabble Laid
2024-07-11 00:38:57 +0000 UTCHi! This was the first story I ever read of yours and I’m absolutely enthralled. I love HitM any chance you’re working on a part 4? I’d love to reread and get lost in them
Jason Carusso
2024-07-11 00:36:54 +0000 UTCI really enjoyed writing a more complex hypnosis story! I love the freelancer series, but the fact thar they are usually one and done gives me a lot less wiggle room for complexity. Spreading the story of HitM out over several parts let me go a lot deeper.
Rabble Laid
2024-04-24 02:39:31 +0000 UTCYes, excellent. What makes this story so good is the push and pull. Lexi is getting turned into a slut but at the same time Anton is becoming a better boyfriend. Claire is working overtime so she isnt just enthralled to a jerk face. Kinda hoping lexi finally stands up for her own slut rights where SURE anton is her daddy but she can get fun elsewhere. Only fair if he gets two girlfriends
Plutoburns
2024-04-23 17:49:06 +0000 UTC
