Desolation ~ Chapter 28!
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Interesting. Cal has now created a pyramid scheme of dungeons. That's kinda frightening.
Montgomery Box
2018-09-14 23:48:02 +0000 UTCTypos: โCartographer Bob has spotted her and two others flying toward us with all haste. There seems to be some form ofโฆ atmospheric disturbance behind them.โ Bob finished the last sentence hesitantly. (Might want to use "her" name here.) Also you're missing a quotation mark when she lands and starts talking to Cal.
Justin Pieratt
2018-09-14 21:07:39 +0000 UTCYou made my day! Thank you!! =D
Xan
2018-09-14 18:51:14 +0000 UTCHey man! I re-uploaded from 25, cause I missed one. Added a bonus chapter for the week as an apology!
Dakota Krout
2018-09-13 14:38:13 +0000 UTCNo hashtags for the chapter?
Da Worst John
2018-09-12 16:08:03 +0000 UTCI think this one may be the same chapter as last time. :-)
Steven Willden
2018-09-12 15:48:12 +0000 UTC
