Desolation ~ Chapter 28!
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Comments
Interesting. Cal has now created a pyramid scheme of dungeons. That's kinda frightening.
Montgomery Box
2018-09-14 23:48:02 +0000 UTCTypos: βCartographer Bob has spotted her and two others flying toward us with all haste. There seems to be some form ofβ¦ atmospheric disturbance behind them.β Bob finished the last sentence hesitantly. (Might want to use "her" name here.) Also you're missing a quotation mark when she lands and starts talking to Cal.
Justin Pieratt
2018-09-14 21:07:39 +0000 UTCYou made my day! Thank you!! =D
Xan
2018-09-14 18:51:14 +0000 UTCHey man! I re-uploaded from 25, cause I missed one. Added a bonus chapter for the week as an apology!
Dakota Krout
2018-09-13 14:38:13 +0000 UTCNo hashtags for the chapter?
Da Worst John
2018-09-12 16:08:03 +0000 UTCI think this one may be the same chapter as last time. :-)
Steven Willden
2018-09-12 15:48:12 +0000 UTC
