Hatsukoi BSS Complete
Added 2023-03-27 19:57:06 +0000 UTCFull comic finished! I tried to make it seem like a genuine doujin to the best of my ability. Being a commission, page limits and and such had an impact on format and pacing which I think is the biggest weakest of this as a comic trying to tell a story. However, it was a lot of fun to make and good practice if I ever make my own!
No one ever tells you how cringey it feels writing dialogue like this.
Also I need to find a better font, comic sans is OK but it just doesn't feel right.
Lastly, I'm going away for a few days so this will be that last post for about a week. when I'm back I will open up some commission slots with the new format whilst I work on the Ryza animation and see how it goes!
