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Behind the Neighbor's Door - Part 11

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Part of me wants Nolen to kick her to the curb. Grace to end up with the big dick convict old AH. Grace is needs to get set down a peg, trying to screw with another couples marriage.

Mikyl727

You weren't kidding about a slow burn

John Lewis

I enjoy the pace, character development, the knowing loving tease used to arouse, Nolan's perception and excitement are as important to Grace as the great sex delivered from a magnificent cock, the humiliating tease is a wonderful technique. That being said, the 30 day wait for each chapter movement is too long, maybe a 15 or 20 day cycle would fit the pace better.

Michael Haase

I enjoy the pace, character development, the knowing loving tease used to arouse, Nolan's perception and excitement are as important to Grace as the great sex delivered from a magnificent cock, the humiliating tease is a wonderful technique. That being said, the 30 day wait for each movement is too long, maybe a 15 or 20 day cycle would fit the pace better.

Michael Haase

This story is great and I’m loving the pacing. I also really enjoy the small encounters between visits, the little secrets between Grace and Nate, and the texting/pictures really enhances the tension. I’m also glad Josh shut down her advances, I personally think adding a third man in the picture takes away from the build up between Nate and Grace. My favorite thing about your story is the conflict between Grace trying to set firm boundaries while slowly moving the goalposts as Nate takes more of her. Them going from full sex back to no touching, then adding some touching but not too much, to no limits on touching at all, it keeps me excited for the next chapter wondering whats next. Last thing I’m also loving Grace’s growing confidence in her own sexuality and increasing dominance towards Nolan. I’m not into the extreme humiliation or degradation content, or watching a woman lose love or respect for her husband,but I love the idea of Nolan slowly becoming submissive to Grace while she starts getting her primary sexual satisfaction from Nate. Love your content, and this one is my favorite by far!

Jack

Yeah, I honestly forgot

Antarctica77

In terms of a minor continuity issue, at Josh's party, wasn't it referred to that Grace wasn't wearing anything under her dress (ie no underwear), but as part of the scene when they returned home and she was with Nolan, he had to remove her thong?

Gabby

“I have enough drama in my marriage” that leave’s things open to interpretation, what drama and how will that affect Graces interactions with Josh in the future? Grace is more of a control freak than previously thought, now she has no doubt she can do as she pleases and Nolan will still eat her ass and all. As for Nate all he has to do is keep giving her a taste of what’s to come, don’t bad mouth Nolan let her do the Cucking for him. I think on the date she gets an all night fucking to the point that she will never be happy with Nolan’s performance as good as she thought it used to be ever again. I think she wears that swim suit for Josh and we find out about the drama in his marriage and how big his cock is. Nolan is going to get Cockold by both Nate and Josh.

FU

I love the teasing and odd screw between Nate and Grace, also love the control Grace has, the greatness in this story is the tension. Please don't make Grace a slut, ending up screwing everyone while Josh is just a simp/cuck, would ruin the tension, no tension when you know Grace is just going to get down and dirty with no lead up, you just expect Grace to screw anything walking around

Tutai

TBH I was hoping there'd be some sort of beginning of her being physical with Josh, even if it was just making out and her giving a HJ. Just so there were then 3 cocks in the mix making Grace drunk with sexual tension. That being said this is a well paced story, keep i up..

Chescojoe

FUUUUCK YES! 🥵

Speechless

I believe in one of the chapters that Dora is confronted about it. I think in a cafe scene, but I can't remember specifically when, sorry

Antarctica77

Loving this story. And I’m in complete agreement that the sex scenes and the development towards them are perfect pacing. It just makes sense that it is a slow process especially because the effects of Grace losing control and moving more and more towards giving in completely to Nate and she does seem to see that clearly and it’s a real concern for her and she knows it. Also very nice touch adding Kim to this and it angering Grace. I’m not sure where this is headed but I can see it ending positively and negatively for Nolan. It just seems almost inevitable that he is going to regret doing this with Grace and Nate. But can’t wait to see how it builds and how it goes :). One thing though, did I miss Grace finding out about Dora and Nate? I don’t know how she found out and if she did I feel it would have really upset her, based on her reaction about Kim. Did I miss that? But keep up the great story and thanks :)

T-1981

Strong chapter, thank you and some good development. Like Grace becoming more dominant and humiliating with her demands for licking and rimming. Maybe that’s Nolan’s future, a good little pussy licker, brings in creampie cleanup perhaps. Prefer not to have the druggie parts like previous chapter, perhaps they find out Nolan’s infertile. Enjoyed Kim and the jealousy, that’s something which is a great addition; Grace being jealous.

Jack T

It’s a small nitpick too that I agree with. Nate clearly isn’t attractive, and the only he has going for him is that he’s tall and got a big dick (but girls won’t see that). He’s witty but that’s all he has going for him lol But I’ll express a suspension of disbelief and just assume the girl was just horny af and was down to fuck the first person she saw😭

Near River

Honestly I agree that the slight teases of Grace humiliating Nolan is so hot especially when Nolan clearly wants to hide the fact that he enjoys when Grace humiliates him The fact that they’re both still in the stage where they aren’t sure if the humiliation is what they want just makes it hotter to see eventually when Grace acccepts humiliating Nolan more often and it gradually becomes something they both get off on

Near River

Dude to the ppl who keep talking abt not getting enough sex scenes, kick rocks This story has been so well written and the slow burn makes me on the edge tbh. Watching Grace slowly accept Nate’s cocky nature and pleasure is captivating and the dynamic all the 3 main characters share is great to read. Most cuckold stories loses it spark the minute the bull and the girl fuck but Antarctica manages to make the story compelling even when Nate and Grace are only going to 3rd base The last scene where Grace almost loses her cool by letting her jealousy of Kim consume her to almost letting Nate fuck her was really well written and had it not been for Nate’s dumb ass making that comment he would’ve succeeded in making Grace break the rules and have sex with him And what’s interesting is that even though Grace breaks every so often she still ends up being the one in control but I feel like the power play is going to shift to Nate’s court really soon. The end scene where Nate punches the wall tells me he’s getting tired of this built up sexual tension and is finally going to start making his moves instead. He should possibly now lean more into making Grace jealous now that he can see she clearly was upset over him fucking Kim Kim could potentially start getting involved with the plot and Nate could start bringing her over to his house to drive Grace crazy. Maybe have a potential scene where Grace and Nolan overhear Nate fucking Kim and that drives Grace and insists Nolan and she have sex only for her to not finish while Nolan. All the while Nate is still fucking the shit out of Kim which just frustrates Grace even more so to the point that she begins to start letting Nate dominate her in small ways to reconcile what happened at the ending of this chp. He could also mention to her that he can be the only one to give Grace permission to flirt with Nolan’s boss cause in Nate’s fuck up mind, it’s only humiliating when Grace is flirting with Nolan’s boss under Nolan’s terms and not his. That way Nate feels like he has control over her as the primary bull and won’t feel insecure when she teases his boss Having Nolan watch his wife be so frustrated and jealous of Nate fucking another woman just makes him feel humiliated but also has deeply horny inside that his wife clearly is upset that Nate is giving great dick to someone not her

Near River

Great chapter! Without a good story the sex won't be as hot. Apart from the obvious rooting for Nate to win Grace over very slowly, hoping for Grace being more controlling and bitchy with Nolan and humiliating him by talking about Nate.

Reader79

Good chapter. However, one small thing bothers me. It's how easy it is for Nate to fuck young women he doesn't know or barely knows, when he's not supposed to be a handsome or even charming man, so it's not very believable.

Pascal

I really enjoy how you play with our senses. It is what makes this series so great, hearing Grace and Nate's interactions through Nolan's perspective. I enjoy the slow build up with the occasional test of boundaries. Hopefully Nolan will be able at least partially hear Grace lose control of those boundaries without his consent 🙏🏼

gplusp

I wish it would move faster but it doesn’t make the story bad. I hope when the sex does come it’s a lot. Also I’m routing for Nate to win

Chris N

Could you please elaborate?

Antarctica77

I love the slow burn, as it allows for that whole world building, at times it feels once it hits that point of no return story can get lost in the shuffle.

NightSoulvane

Pretty good chapter. I think I like the borderline moments, when it is definitely in this build up stage. I fell though when penetration becomes more normalized, it should be more spontaneous, and almost without warning.

Caitlin

Great chapter loved the addition of Kimmy into this story and also the ending was the perfect amount of tease. Two weeks to go until their next date and who knows maybe she will go visit him more often outside of the once a week stuff as well. If this is you being light on I cannot imagine a reader being upset with the pacing of Nate and Grace. Sure they have only fucked once, but in almost every chapter they are doing sexual acts together so it’s not like they are getting nothing.

Chinookfan72


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