A Young Couple's Journey part 16 / TNT 25
Added 2025-07-20 18:24:02 +0000 UTCFirst off, I just want to respond to the "Luna"
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Kim has gone full psychopath.
MM
2025-11-11 17:39:44 +0000 UTCThis has gone from a loving wives cucking story to a horror story focused on rape and abuse. Kim doesn't seem like she could possibly have ever been the character she was at the start of this series, yet alone the first series. As @Catlin pointed out, Toby no longer has a personality other than rape and dominate. Sigh. I'd hoped this could have ended up as a story about a young marriage with people who slowly (and painfully realize their love has ended as they've gone in different directions/discovered new things about themselves), but it's mostly just Kim's bizarre justifications and hate towards Josh and Toby's psychotic rapist thoughts. Not for me.
Your Best Supporter
2025-08-22 16:13:51 +0000 UTCToday is the day !!! Team Toby
Chris N
2025-08-20 19:30:00 +0000 UTCNo Mastiff will ever come to any harm in any of my stories.
Antarctica77
2025-08-02 21:22:03 +0000 UTCI love this story, from chapter 1 until now, Kim is completely lost, I don't want Josh to lose his sister, and Linda, but I know in the end some form of loss has to happen. and I swear if anything happens to the dog I'm completely done, because I feel that's the only thing that could save Josh, Linda, and Luna is the huge dog. Right now with the dog, Linda, and Amanda , Josh has some huge wins in life already, so just has to cut Kim off and bam end of story lmao.
David JC
2025-08-02 07:09:13 +0000 UTCAm I the only one (un)patiently waiting for the 12rd and the 20st.
Chinookfan72
2025-08-01 08:25:38 +0000 UTCLester? Sarah? Do you happen to have a different author in mind? 😆
bab fake
2025-07-29 17:22:32 +0000 UTCHave you thought of writing a story where Toby and Lester meet in the future ? Maybe they both meet while Kim and Sarah are both pregnant and they swap or use both of them?
Chris N
2025-07-29 16:00:36 +0000 UTCI’m the same way. This is one of the few stories I hope the husband wins. I would actually much prefer to see Toby and Kim have a miserable life together when they fail.
Watch out
2025-07-21 10:39:10 +0000 UTCVery hot read! Always feel like the odd one out, since I am definitely not as interested in a Tony ‘win’ as everyone else seems to be 😅 Definitely interested to see where it all goes! Great writing too
Bryce Johnson
2025-07-21 05:44:05 +0000 UTCFucking Amazing! This was incredibly hot!!! I’m looking forward to seeing Toby and Kim work their plans.
bab fake
2025-07-21 02:47:08 +0000 UTCHaving taken a long break from this series and recently catching up, I'm of the full belief Josh was never right for Kim, but at the same time the fetish driving Kim isn't what everyone else wants. Kim if she was a person, has every right as a person to realize she can change, and what she wanted back then isn't what she wanted now, but honestly not sure if she gets a pass for willingly let a basement dweller like Toby get ahead. And I call him a basement dweller in that, he has no real character in a literal but also critical sense of the story. Like it's almost like he is a magical tulpa that was filled with Josh's fetishes, and then got sick and his directive is now fucked up. Even grand characters Edmond Dantes; one of the most revenge driven and written characters in existence, had development enough to not only justify to an objective degree his hatefulness, but showed he was still a person. At this point it feels like Toby is Neil from Cassandra's adventures. Which that series is my favorite of yours, but Neil was never a real person, but an outlet for a fetish, and it ended perfectly without much thought or need of Neil to make it to the end. Toby has had so much put into him, it feels like he needs a reason to exist, otherwise I don't see how he doesn't end up basically getting his ass beat again/gets arrested for rape/losing again. If he actually "wins" it tanks the story and makes it a cuckold's overdose/hangover of a story. I only write this to say this isn't a small period piece someone fingers/jerks off to on literotica, it's actually an erotica series. I'm curious to see how it ends, I hope it actually has characters that change, but also go in the directions they should go. Not to say there shouldn't be loss either, as the end of the day, Kim is unfulfilled with Josh, and Josh is slowly realizing he has compartmentalized Kim into a life style he doesn't fully agree with. He has fetishsized her, and is losing his love for her, and Kim is being written as an object that chooses pleasure over oxygen. Out of the last 3-4 chapters this was probably the best of the bunch, but it is definitely a defining point as well depending how long you intend to stretch this. I remember almost a year ago you talking about not sure where you want to take things, or possibly taking a break, but I think your work/time to construct these series shows you still have a great deal of effort/ability left. All the best~
Caitlin
2025-07-21 00:12:57 +0000 UTCFantastic work A77 thought this was the best chapter in the series since before Josh went to Italy in TNT. Loved all the hot nasty sex between Kim and Toby, but it was also nice to see Kim with some talk some sense into Toby as well. Really like the idea of Toby being on board with keeping Josh around. Would love to see a reenactment of that same scene they brought up in this chapter where Josh attempts to put on a show in front of a Toby only to fail and have Toby get a bj from Kim and almost fuck her. The only change in the new scenario would be for Toby to succeed in fucking her as well as getting the bj. As for Luna, my prediction is when Kim and Luna cosplay Kim will bring up Toby and Luna will admit she had a crush on him. Kim convinced Luna to go on a date with Toby, saying Toby was asking about her at the gym recently and is interested in her. Then Kim can give Toby more pointers for the date and then let the seduction go from there. I don’t think it’s smart to include Kim in a 3 way until Luna is well under Toby spell as her loyalty to Josh wouldn’t allow Kim a new dick without Josh’s permission. So the threesome should wait until Josh is back and Kim can convince him to allow the threesome or perhaps Toby walks in on Luna and Kim fucking and joins, but only fucks Luna. Kim can tell Josh about it and ask if Toby can join again in the future (not specify whether she seems for Toby to fuck them both or for him to just focus on Luna again.) Josh will say yes assuming she means for Toby to only focus on Luna, but Kim will tell Luna Josh is okay with it and Luna will confirm and he’ll say sure. Then it’s off to the races. Eventually Luna will be the bottom of both Kim and Toby and she will be more than happy watching them fuck and have no issues of them fucking on their own. As for Linda I don’t see Toby ever seducing her directly. I think that seduction will happen based on her feelings for Josh changing. Currently in Florida she is anticipating Josh confronting Kim and getting everything out in the open. But I still think Josh doesn’t want to Amit his cuckold feelings or how he handled the Toby situation the first time so when he sees Luna and Toby together he is going to hide in his turtle shell and not call anyone out. This will piss off Linda. As Toby gets more and more power in the house Linda will get more and more pissed at how adverse Josh is at conflict. Perhaps Josh walks in on the threesome with Luna, Toby and Kim while To y is fucking Kim. Later he talks To Kim about it and she can convince him to put on another show in front of Toby (just like in TNT) only this time Toby also fucks her, also Linda walks in and see Josh watching and doing nothing and this is her final straw. She basically says fuck it and either joins in with Kim and Toby or fucks Toby by herself later as she is tired of dealing with Josh’s passivity.
Chinookfan72
2025-07-20 23:44:06 +0000 UTCThis is the best story by far I’m so routing for him to win Luna and Kim at least. I wouldn’t mind Josh and Linda leaving but I want him to just take everything. Having Kim help him makes the story that much better. I’m not sure who’s worse her or Toby and that makes it so much better
Chris N
2025-07-20 19:09:25 +0000 UTCFirst and finally !!
Chris N
2025-07-20 18:34:02 +0000 UTC
