A Young Couple's Journey Part 13 / TNT 22
Added 2025-04-17 18:51:01 +0000 UTCHey folks. I’m posting this early becau
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Josh is addicted to being cuckold by Kimberley and he really wants Kimberly to make Linda fuck him in the ass, for me for me to poo poo and man’s kink, but that would be a step too far for me. Kim is just a slut she’ll never be trueto Josh, or any other man as far as that concerns, she just likes to fuck. Kim’s problem is she is to careless and she’s going to end up pregnant. Of course she’ll have an abortion, or she has a life long supply of morning after pills so she won’t. This was a more interesting chapter, mainly because I’m not into the guy sucking cock, even if it is on a half woman’s body.
FU
2025-05-22 17:26:30 +0000 UTCI don't get how you read these lines and think Josh deep down wants Kim to cuck him openly. "Truth be told, from everything that had happened, I was scared she'd abuse that control, that she would use it to hurt me or to push her own agendas regardless of what was best for us or me." "I was scared to take quite another leap with Kim that I had no appetite for. I couldn't even bring myself to think it. How could Kim treat me so badly after everything we had been through together? Couldn't she just accept my needs or respect when I said no? I knew we started this journey as a young couple that wanted to discover new things, and perhaps Kim was already bored and would eventually find herself manipulated into something 'fun' on the side regardless, but hadn't we gone far enough? Didn't we love each other enough not to hurt one another?" "She'd have me lose complete control, and I'd love it, I knew it. I was scared of giving up so much control, but I also knew that power in the hands of Linda would be administered wisely. I trusted her completely. I knew I could give myself to her, and she'd never hold it against me, never abuse that control, and she'd certainly never shame me or make me feel like less." Seems pretty clear on what he enjoys and doesn't enjoy. Josh just wants to be dominated in bed, have his wife be happy as can be, and be in an equal relationship where he isn't abused mentally/emotionally which Linda fulfills. Kim would abuse and ruin it all, especially with Toby back in the picture and how much he hates Josh. Even in the previous chapter Josh basically got negged into allowing Kim to tease and talk to other men, because he is trying to extend her more trust for her own happiness, he isn't doing it because he truly enjoys it emotionally - only physically - Who knew Humans could be horny but also unhappy. It's why he was getting mad at her taunting and teasing because it was abusing his trust/emotions. He then immediately sought out Amanda to comfort him over how shitty Kim made him feel. To me it seems like you just want the most unhappy ending to occur because you don't like any of the characters outside of Toby and you aren't vibing with the futa tag. The only people that could be happy in that end is basically Toby and maybe Kim, depends on how much her slut overrides being an actual human being without severe mental and emotional problems.
Keen
2025-04-23 03:47:56 +0000 UTCI feel like if Luna is written like she has presented herself this entire story, she should be checking Kim's Onlyfans page soon. Should be afraid Kim is lying, like she's done so much to her already, about not uploading the video to OF. Then she also clearly suspects that she put out for Vincent, which should already be screaming alarm bells in her head and she should let Josh know/threaten Kim, and she was ditched in LA by Kim as well, where she never got a straight answer for why. Should make her suspect Kim was meeting up with Vincent, when it was really Alex. This is assuming Luna has a brain, considering she doesn't trust Kim at all anymore and suspects her of infidelity. If Josh drives all the way down to Florida, while feeling all these good feelings about Linda and dislike for Kim, just to deny Linda, it would just be so unrealistic imo. There is almost nothing tying him to Kim at this point outside of being married and used to be great friends. Everything he said/thought in this chapter about their relationship was just spot on, with how terrible Kim treats him compared to Linda, and how it makes him feel. He even knows/suspects that Kim will just keep pushing and will eventually break his trust and the relationship all over again, whereas he would never worry about that with Linda. If Josh somehow chooses Kim here over Linda, it just blatantly makes no sense and is done just to keep tension/novel going. The more we get thoughts from Kim the more she legitimately just feels like a Doujin NTR woman. The only thing she can think of is dick and pleasure, and ignores every other goal & meaning in life just to get it. So scared of entering Toby's(Sarahs) apartment, because she knows the moment she gives it up, she will just constantly be in his bed getting railed and doing nothing else. Honestly I hope she ends up with Toby at the end and loses Josh to Linda, and loses all her friends(which she basically already has) in the process. Toby has like seemingly no prospects in life, guy is just going to dead end somewhere and Kim can join him with her non existent career at this point. It would be pretty poetic. I disagree on thinking there is no stakes if Linda and Josh start hooking up for real, as they still would need to come to terms with talking to Kim about it, Kim crashing out -> going on a fuck spree, Josh still caring to try to help her, potentially them reconciling or Kim learning how to be a better person. This is not even talking about the progression of Toby + Kim and Linda + Josh progressing their own relationships taking up a good part of the chapters.
Keen
2025-04-23 02:37:42 +0000 UTCThis was one of the better chapters in this story for a while for me. It focused more on Kimmy’s cheating/cucolding stuff rather than the Josh/Linda stuff and the less back and forth made for a more coherent story.. the wrap up of the LA dude was convenient, but I suppose it was a lose end that had to be dealt with and clears the road for the Kimmy and Toby arch to start. However that arch to me is only luke warm because there is a lack of stakes as the Josh and Kimmy relationship seems like it over anyway. Before Kimmy and Toby get together I believe it would be best to wrap up the Linda storyline. Preferably where Josh picks Kimmy and agrees to allow her to cuck him as that is what he truly wants deep down. Then while Kimmy and Toby are reconnecting the Josh Kimmy relationship can be repaired enough for Toby to try and kill it again. Otherwise who cares is Kimmy and Toby hook up her and her husbands relationship is already over anyway.
Chinookfan72
2025-04-19 00:09:47 +0000 UTCI can’t wait for her to submit to Toby she’s so close it’s driving me nuts.. the story was pretty good fast paced great sex scenes
Chris N
2025-04-18 05:06:38 +0000 UTCFirst !
Chris N
2025-04-18 02:19:47 +0000 UTC
