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My Neighbor - Part 12 *UPDATED VERSION*

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FWIW, consequences are not sexy. Fucking up the ending could retroactively ruin the story. Don't How-I-Met-Your-Mother the story.

Czoftw

I want to see L knocked up ends up having complications losing T’s kid and her life. Then J takes comfort from E who has been getting fuck regularly by T, but she’s smart enough to stay on birth control. After fucking John and wanting to stay in the states she convinces him to marry her. She is an alpha female and controlls her sexual appetite and the men that service her. Then with very little fanfare she cockolds John not just with T but who ever she wants.

FU

I can’t believe how stupid this bitch is that she would jeopardize everything just to get fucked, but I know women do it all the time. I would love to see a threesome between the two women and Tony and then doing it on John’s marital bed, I think it would be a thrill for John to be tied to a chair at the end of the bed with a ball gag and a cock gage on While Emily and Louise got fucked into oblivion and sucked and fucked each other. I hope she gets knocked up and John makes her have an abortion but then again he’s too weak to do anything about it. You know a fitting ending to the story would be her having Tony’s baby while he’s away at college, but she dies in childbirth and because John is married to her under the law he is considered the father, then he has to take child and raise it as his own.

FU

Agreed. I wish for the same as it would be a bit of poetic justice if L were to see John in the throes of complete passion and sexual lust while inside Emily...only with Louise more as the thirds wheel, watching it all happen but unable to be involved. L loves when Tony takes control making her do things, but it would be so hot if Emily and John were to turn the tables on her.

Jay Muney

I used to hope that Tony would expand his harem with Emily and others, but now I'm not so sure that would suffice. The characters have grown more 'dimensional' and neither of the women are just 'holes to fuck' anymore. That said - this chapter was beyond hot regarding relationship development between Tony and Louise. I guess the biggest angst-inducer for John is that other people know of their situation, and we are heading there full speed. Looking forward to the 'reveal'. <3

Shando Fenindra

I want Emily to use her knowledge to get into John's pants but after, I want her to have a FFM with them and after...as Louise begins to look at Emily differently...sexually and as a woman, Emily reveals she has had sex now both with her AND with her husband shocking L to the core. So hot this series is!

Jay Muney

I really hope that Emily's demand is that Louise convince John to have sex with her. But I suspect it'll be FFM with Tony which sucks because as hot as this story is, Tony is kind of a detestable person and I kind of want to see Emily being immune to him. But, she'll probably faint for his big cock since that's how these stories tend to go.

Wendy Thorne

I kinda hope the story stay focused on tony and louise, with louise getting more ad more into tony and eventually getting knocked up. I kinda like when there's a happy ending for anyone but the husband, sorry lol.

Loredana Simonetti

I’d like to see Louise get knocked up and all the dynamics flowing from that event.

Ike turner

Better. Hotter.

John Lewis

The new version is even hotter

Kind

Completely agree

Bryce Johnson

Honestly, it makes little difference to me whether it will be an open marriage or not, simply (at least for me) stories that end with the hotwife who divorces her husband because she's in love with the bull's cock they are tired and repetitive

Davide Vinciguerra

Or with Emily’s path to John cleared of the Louise obstacle, John and Louise transition to an open marriage for at least the time being.

J Lewis

I think it is obvious that there will be an FFM, I hope that in the next ones dynamics will not be repeated.For example Louise sneaking up on Tony who tries to convince her to to cum inside or the usual cliché of the hotwife who starts spending all her time with her lover forgetting about her husband and he remains alone and disconsolate giving himself a handjob. I hope for a happy ending (which happens very rarely in this type of story) Tony and Louise continue to fuck, she does not deny John sex and their marriage continues normally

Davide Vinciguerra


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