My Neighbor - Part 8
Added 2024-06-17 11:37:03 +0000 UTCSorry for the delay folks. I got stuck between
Comments
I'm starting to root for John to get Emily. I think he needs a girl like her in his life. And I think Louise needs to feel what she is making him feel.
Wendy Thorne
2024-09-18 15:07:36 +0000 UTCBiggest risk John could insert unknowing to Louise and scenario is replacing birth control pills with some or all placebos, depending on circum
WILLYBOY
2024-07-13 17:43:02 +0000 UTCOther smaller guy as surprise for initial anal more forceful for Tony and realistic due to Tony size which should have been much more painful.
WILLYBOY
2024-07-11 17:12:07 +0000 UTCI second h mon, birth control change discussion or action coming.
WILLYBOY
2024-07-11 17:09:19 +0000 UTCLouise is ready for DP, Tony needs to bring another guy on
h mon
2024-06-26 00:52:02 +0000 UTCNot my chapter. Butt stuff doesn't do much for me, I expected the birthday celebration this chapter, and I think the lack of interactions between the husband and wife were a missed opportunity. There were hardly any of the reconnecting, comparing, teasing between the couple that I expected between the weekend and birthday. Feels like we are time-skipping important elements
James
2024-06-22 12:43:26 +0000 UTCI'm still waiting for the "Coming off the BCP" and new level of risk
neegan
2024-06-21 02:50:33 +0000 UTCFantastic story and well written! Now the real turning point comes where John begin realize that L is T women yet he can’t admit it. The talks between L and J absolutely hot but not enough of it like in the beginning of story and I kind of miss that element. Also sex scenes are super hot. I would like to see tony become more meaningful to L and encouraged by John to be her actual boyfriend. I want L to fall for tony emotionally I also want to see John willing to do extremely erotic things to satisfy them both like eating cream pies maybe cleaning tony . The humiliation part is good but I don’t think it would be wise to go too far that road . Last thing is pregnancy risk issue which is highly intense I want for L to play Johns mind with it . Maybe for her to stop taking pills but the best thing would be for her to convince John and make him think that this is his idea Excellent work 👿
Migmig
2024-06-17 21:15:54 +0000 UTCI really dislike these characters at this point.
TimothyS
2024-06-17 18:47:49 +0000 UTC
