My Neighbor - Part 7
Added 2024-05-16 05:48:03 +0000 UTCI havent read through it yet, so apologies for
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Please release part 8 to King Penguins as promised on your schedule!!!!
Marc
2024-07-15 23:11:45 +0000 UTCHonestly, I kinda hope Louise dives headfirst over the edge into real and more openly trashy beahviour - possibly with life-destroying consequences - over the teenage crush that doesn't go anywhere from John's perspective. Love her as a character, but I've run like hell whenever I've learned that someone I know is so willing to edit reality to excuse themselves. Anyway, fantastic update. Much appreciated.
Barry Green
2024-05-28 13:01:41 +0000 UTCAmazing story i am curious what happens next
Tim Aschenbrenner
2024-05-20 06:01:07 +0000 UTCI loved it. Didn't notice many cleanup needs. Johns run of fantasies make it plausible he'll enjoy the gift. I like that it's taking a more cheating direction. To fulfill the humiliation, John can't get Emily. Tony must get them both. All in all, I feel that the chapter dragged out with the same scenes sort of repeating and not progressing. The anal intermission could have been built more upon, although I realize that the acceptance of no video is a progression as well. Excited to see where this leads. I like how she submits more and more, and it's still one of the hottest pieces I've ever read. Thanks!
Jon Boge
2024-05-17 22:36:18 +0000 UTCThat was amazing! Your correct it need some cleanup here and there. No change in plot or content needed.
RCH
2024-05-17 21:40:19 +0000 UTCI don't know. This clearly is an interesting chapter regarding Louise and her mindset. I'm really curious as to how this plays out especially if John doesn't exactly like the gift. It has really been all talk to this point between the husband and wife with John assuming she is playing the "role" to make their sex life hotter. I kinda believe she has led herself to feel this is what John wants when in reality she is trying to justify cheating which is what she is doing basically. Please don't go the route of TNT. She wants Tony and his big dick, let her have it. Let John have the french girl, who probably knows what's going on between Louise and Tony.
achilles
2024-05-17 01:15:38 +0000 UTCYou may have out done your self
John Lewis
2024-05-16 23:31:43 +0000 UTC
