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This time, the scenario starts with Firefly and Caelus at a part-time job.
After Firefly’s small act of rebellion, Caelus discovers it, and the two end up becoming FWB and having a relationship at home.
You could say Caelus found Firefly’s weak point.
That said, arranging the scenes so the story is clearly conveyed is still difficult.
It has improved a lot, though.
Once this step becomes smoother and more natural, I’m thinking about challenging myself by adding dialogue as the next step.
Thank you, as always, for stopping by and supporting my work.
这次的内容是一个关于 Firefly 和 Caelus 的剧情:
从打工现场开始,在 Firefly 的一次å°å°è¶Šè½¨ä¹‹åŽï¼ŒCaelus å‘现了这一点,两人éšåŽå‘å±•æˆ FWB 关系,并在家ä¸å‘生了进一æ¥çš„关系。
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