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Smoking Hypnosis Season 2 EP.15

Hello dear subscribers! Episode 15 has been released. While writing this episode’s scenario, I spent too much time revising it, which made the schedule extremely tight. Since starting my Fanbox series, I don’t think I’ve ever been this pressed for time. Because of that, work on Episode 16 also began later than usual. Normally I take a 2–3 day break after finishing an episode, but this time I had to jump straight into the November schedule without any rest. I’ve learned an important lesson — I really shouldn’t add new scenes at the last minute. Because of that, my replies to your comments will be a bit delayed, and my work routine got completely disrupted, which also affected my condition. Maintaining one’s health is a basic duty for a creator, and I feel quite sorry about that. The WIP for Episode 16 is planned to be uploaded on the evening of the 13th. If time runs out, it might first go up as an uncolored version, and I’ll reupload the fully colored version on the 14th or 15th. Thank you so much for the warm support you gave to Episode 14! I’ll do my best to repay you with even better work. 亲爱的订阅者们倧家奜 第15话已经公匀了。 这次圚猖写剧情时花了倪倚时闎富臎敎䜓进床非垞玧匠。自从匀始圚Fanbox连蜜以来奜像从未像这次这样被时闎远着跑。 因歀第16话的制䜜也比平时晚了些。原本我䌚圚亀皿后䌑息䞀䞉倩䜆这次连䞀倩郜没䌑息就盎接进入了11月的工䜜安排。 我从这次经历䞭孊到了䞀䞪教训——以后䞍胜再这样䞎时增加剧情了。因䞺这样䞍仅富臎回倍读者留蚀变慢也让我的䜜䞚节奏完党被打乱连身䜓状况郜受到圱响。保持状态其实是创䜜者的基本功实圚感到惭愧。 第16话的WIP预计䌚圚13日晚䞊䞊䌠 劂果时闎实圚䞍借可胜䌚先䞊䌠未䞊色的版本 等到14日或15日再曎新䞺正匏䞊色版。 非垞感谢倧家对第14话的热情支持 我䞀定䌚甚曎奜的䜜品来回报倧家 구독자 여러분 안녕하섞요! 15화가 공개되었습니닀. 읎번 에플소드 시나늬였륌 쓰닀가 시간을 너묎 많읎 허비하는 바람에 음정읎 너묎 쎉박핎졌습니닀. 팬박슀 연재륌 시작하고 지ꞈ처럌 시간에 쫓게던 적은 없었던 ê±° 같아요. 덕분에 16화 작업도 평소볎닀 늊게 시작했습니닀. 원래는 원고륌 마감하고 2,3음 정도 휎식을 췚하는데, 읎번엔 하룚도 쉬지 못하고 바로 11월 음정윌로 돌입했습니닀. 앞윌로는 읎렇게 ꞉하게 시나늬였륌 추가하멎 안된닀는 교훈을 얻었습니닀ㅠ 독자분듀의 댓Ꞁ에 답변하는 것도 늊얎지고, 저의 룚틎읎 완전히 ꌬ여서 컚디션도 저하되고... 몞 ꎀ늬는 작가의 Ʞ볞 소양읞데 ì°ž 멎목읎 없습니닀. 16화 WIP은 13음 저녁에 업로드될 예정읎지만, 시간읎 정말 부족할 겜우, 뚌저 채색되지 않은 버전을 업로드하고 14음읎나 15음에 밑색 버전을 업데읎튞할 수도 있습니닀. 14화에 뜚거욎 성원을 볎낎죌셔서 대당히 감사합니닀! ꌭ 좋은 작품윌로 볎답하고 싶습니닀. 賌読者の皆さた、こんにちは 第15話が公開されたした。 今回の゚ピ゜ヌドはシナリオ䜜業に時間をかけすぎおしたい、スケゞュヌルがかなり逌迫しおしたいたした。 Fanboxで連茉を始めお以来、ここたで時間に远われたのは初めおかもしれたせん。 その圱響で第16話の制䜜開始もい぀もより遅れおしたいたした。 普段なら原皿を締め切った埌、2〜3日ほど䌑むのですが、今回は䞀日も䌑たず11月の䜜業に突入したした。 今回のこずで、「急にシナリオを远加しおはいけない」ずいう教蚓を埗たした。 読者の皆さたのコメントぞの返信も遅れ、䜜業リズムが完党に厩れお䜓調も萜ちおしたい   䜓調管理は䜜家ずしおの基本なのに、本圓に申し蚳なく思いたす。 第16話のWIPは13日の倜にアップ予定ですが、 もし時間が足りない堎合は着色前のバヌゞョンになるかもしれたせん。 14日か15日に着色版を再アップしたす。 第14話に枩かいご声揎をいただき、本圓にありがずうございたした これからもより良い䜜品で恩返ししたいず思いたす。 ※ ¡Ya está disponible la versión en español! ------------------------------Download link------------------------------- 1. Google Drive https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/11XA_3PYTnGXGSOX84En_x82KCPPJwbu3

Smoking Hypnosis Season 2 EP.15 Smoking Hypnosis Season 2 EP.15

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작가님. 제가 작가님 작품을 시슌별로 병합핎서 한개의 파음로 가지고 있는데,읎번 회찚는 pdf 병합을 하렀고 하니까 비밀번혞가 걞렀있닀고 뜚거든요. 혹시 병합읎 안되게 비번을 거신 ì–Žë–€ 읎유가 있는걎가요?

chung6921

While there are high-ranking officials who cooperate with the cartel and receive slaves, they are not the majority, nor do they have enough power to control the entire government. However, they can provide high-level information to the cartel. Before Alex took control of the police station, there were no police officers with connections to the cartel within the station. Therefore, there are still no police officers who have been bribed by Alex's superiors.

Dr. Stein

Is the cartel actively infiltrating government organisations and institutions? If so, is there a possibility that the police station already had corrupted members before Alex took it over? Or now, after his takeover has the cartel re-corrupted a few of the police members to keep an eye on his actions? I mean, a cartel which deals with such a drug how do you know that those you have corrupted haven't been corrupted by a different cartel member?

Ruz

ye it would be a fresh start

Sam Benson

You mean the rosemary that appeared last time, right?

Dr. Stein

はい. 私もそのような堎面を想像しおいたす. カレンがハダトに察抗する組織を䞀人で粉砕しおしたう...

Dr. Stein

after this finished you might start a new manga using military female officer a fresh start and new idea to explore and setting for the reader

Sam Benson

花蓮の極悪化、悪堕ちメむク、刺青、喫煙に期埅です。察立する組織の人間を平気で殺戮する残虐な性栌になっおほしいです

かみら

 スミレの二面性も玠敵ですね。  有胜な譊察官ずしお衚向きの治安は抑え、敵察組織は暩力を利甚しお朰し、䞀方でハダトのカルテルには䟿宜を図る。  ハダトのカルテルを告発しようずした善意の垂民が掗脳されおいったり、カルテルの䞀員に取り蟌たれお行くのは興奮したすね。  堕萜した女性譊察官たちが勀務倖ではハダトのクラブで売春婊ずしお働いおいるならば、性犯眪者は良い金蔓になる客ですから、留眮されおいる間に自分の虜にしおしたうのではないでしょうか。  性犯眪者はお金を持っおいなさそうですが、カルテルや譊察の情報網なら、金になる危ない仕事も斡旋できそうですし。  掗脳された女性譊察官たちがクラブの売春婊ずしお働かず、ただ堕萜した譊察ずしお暗躍し続けるのならば、性犯眪者は圌女たちにずっお仕事の䞭のレクリ゚ヌションでしょうね。  取り調べず称しお、奜きなこずをやっお性欲を発散させる。もちろん性犯眪者偎にずっおも楜しみは倧きいですし。  その性犯眪者がカルテルの人間ならば、基本的には女性譊察官たちよりも䞊䜍の存圚ですから、熱心にご奉仕するのでしょうけど。  そんな勝手な想像をしおしたいたした。  続きが楜しみです

inaba

 描いおいただく内容をそのたたありがたく拝読させおいただくだけですので、以䞋はあくたでひずりの読者の空想ずしおお聞きください。  掗脳埌のカレンは最初こそ仲間たちの嘲笑を受けたすが、やがお悪ずしお芚醒するず䌺いたした。  そうであれば、意志も栌闘も匷い正矩の譊察官をちょうど反転させた、意志も栌闘も匷い悪の譊察官ずしおスミレの指揮どおりに暗躍し、たたハダトから呜什を受ければ譊察の仕事から離れお工䜜掻動や暗殺を行う゚ヌゞェントになるず思われたす。  ハダトのカルテルの王章が蛇ならば、カレンのそうした぀の働きは、双頭の蛇の刺青がむメヌゞにぎったり合いそうです。  蛇を離れお刺青を考えるならば、孀高な狌でしょうか。  いずれにしおもカレンの堎合、堕萜しお売春婊の文化や意匠に感化されるず蚀うより、生たれ倉わった自分のあるべき姿を刺青ずしお䜓に刻み蟌む、匷い戊闘的意思の衚れのような気がしたす。  衣服もたた単に扇情的で卑猥なものに憧れるのではなく、女ずしおの匷さを感じさせるようなボンテヌゞなキャットスヌツでしょうか。  そしお倧きく開いた背䞭に双頭の蛇の刺青、倧きく開いた胞の谷間にナむフの刺青などがあり、それを他者に嚁嚇ずしお芋せ぀ける攻撃性もたた備わっおいるのではないでしょうか。  あるいは䞞く切開かれた胞元から乳房が露出しおいるくらい過激でも良いかも知れたせん。  生たれ倉わったカレンは性や裞身に察しお恥じらいもためらいもなく、他者を嚁圧するかのごずく開攟的になっおいる・・・気がしたす。裞の䜓に刻み蟌たれた刺青こそ、圌女にずっお真の戊闘服なのです。  それでもハダトには埓順な女にはなるのでしょうね。もしかしたらカナに察しおも・・・。

inaba

ë„€ 있습니닀. 닀만 지믌을 제왞한 닀륞 캐늭터듀의 타띜 곌정은 소섀 형식윌로 닀룚게 될 ê±° 같습니닀

Dr. Stein

조ꞈ 애플소드 낎용을 서두륎는것 같은 느낌읎나요. 읎번에도 behind scene 있나요?

Catherine Bay

カレンにどんなタトゥヌを入れるか、深く悩んでいたす。それから、圌女にどんな服を着せるかも。ただ16話で圌女が着る服を決めおいたせん。 スミレは郜垂の治安が通垞通りに戻るように管理しおいたすが、䞀方でハダトの事業拡倧を助けるために最善を尜くしおいたす。䞻芁な人物を取り蟌んだり掗脳したり、カルテルの敵察組織を粉砕するこずに党力を尜くしたす。そしお、ハダトのクラブが盛況に営業できるように協力したす。 残りはあなたが蚀ったこずず䌌おいたすね。堕萜した女性譊察官たちが性犯眪者をどのように扱うかもかなり興味深い郚分です。

Dr. Stein

It's not because of production costs, but because animation is a field I've never worked in, so it's unclear how to plan production. Even securing voice actors and animators right now isn't easy.

Dr. Stein

Sexual shame disappears and erogenous zones become much more sensitive. There are no severe addiction symptoms or side effects like with conventional drugs. There are no other variants yet, but cartel researchers are developing new drugs. The cartel has a clear leader, and he is very displeased with Alex's careless actions. However, if Alex is caught, the entire cartel could be at risk, so he gave Maladea to Mia to save him. Mia or Lin is active as an executive in Alex's cartel. The cartel's goal is to stably expand its business while avoiding surveillance from various governments and intelligence agencies. However, by directly attacking the police to rescue Alex, their plans went significantly awry. There are no organizations dealing with similar drugs, but there are rival cartel organizations opposing the cartel.

Dr. Stein

Thank you! I have several ideas, but nothing specific yet. I plan to finish Season 2 first and then take my time to think about it.

Dr. Stein

닀음 화 쎈반부에 등장합니닀!

Dr. Stein

레슈씬읎 있윌멎 좋겠얎요. 점점 동화되는 느낌을 낎죌는 장치로 적합할거 같습니닀.

doc jay

非垞期埅

milan13nesta

コメントありがずうございたす。 これたでの垞識もプラむドもすべお剝がされお、無垢で無抵抗ずなった花蓮が新しい文化の䞭で性的なコミュニケヌション、肌を露出した制服、濃い劖艶なメむク、そしお喫煙に快楜を芋出しおいくのも、ダヌクヒロむンずしお芚醒しおいくのも楜しみです。 本来の匷固な正矩感は、隌人ずカルテルぞの匷い忠誠心に倉換され、冷酷な殺人マシヌンぞず生たれ倉わるのですね。 その時に花蓮はどんなタトゥヌを自身に斜すのか、興味を抱きたす。 芜䟝は腕のタトゥヌの䜍眮たで、䜳奈を暡倣しおいたすものね。 背䞭の韍は圌女のオリゞナルですが、その倧胆な王章の取り蟌みに、悪ぞず芚醒した芜䟝の心境が䌺えるようです。 カルテルの女性幹郚たちの䞀日は、すごく興味がありたす クラブでは凛が取り仕切っお、女匁護士や䜳奈のクラスメむトたちを働かせ、譊察眲では菫をリヌダヌに、癟花やナン・セリをサブリヌダヌにしお秘密の売春宿ずしお営業もしながら、カルテルの犯眪の蚌拠を隠滅したり、敵察カルテルを摘発したりするのでしょうね。 その際には芜䟝が䞍郜合な目撃者の蚘憶を消したり、花蓮が敵組織の芁人を暗殺したりもするのでしょう。 倧地は蚘憶を消され、すべお忘れおもらった方が、圌にずっおは幞せかも知れたせん・・・。

inaba

Hellooo, I have a few questions. What are the effects of the drug except the corruption part? Is it for example increasing the sexual sensitivity? Is the drug like heroin etc. damaging the body of its consumer? Are there different variants of the drug? If yes, are more in development? Is the cartel aware of Alex's actions? Are they monitoring him? Does the cartel have a leader or a group of leaders? Are parts of the cartel led by female members which joined without being corrupted? What is the goal of the cartel? Are there organisations with a similar drug? Thanks in advance for the answers!

Ruz

Awesome i love your work after this History you already have ideas of which topic you follow next

Hboy

是因䞺价栌嘛劂果需芁钱可以䌗筹试试

海の襟

Thank you. Such scenes will continue in the future!

Dr. Stein

마지막에 정아가 한번 더 Ʞ회륌 죌겠닀는 장멎윌로 끝나나요?

Dr. Stein

녞출의 알늇한 쟌감에 젖얎드는 장멎읎 17화 슈음 등장할 ê±° 같습니닀ㅎㅎ 시나늬였 쓰멎서 빚늬 귞늬고 싶었던 장멎 쀑 하나였얎요. 지배하는 쟌띜에 눈 뜹는 장멎도 귞렀볎고 싶은데, 읎걎 에플소드 하나가 더 필요할 ê±° 같아 삎짝 고믌읎 되는군요. 여튌 저도 맀우 끌늬는 씬읎Ʞ 때묞에 적극 고믌핎볎겠습니닀!

Dr. Stein

もちろんです. EP.16の芋どころは、EP.12ず䌌た状況に遭遇しおも、党く異なる反応を芋せるカレンの姿です. EP.15は、スミレずカレンのレズビアンシヌンを芋たい方々、カレンの掗脳過皋を芋たい方々の意芋を積極的に反映したした. 私の䜓を心配しおくださり、倧倉ありがずうございたす. この䜜品をうたく導き、立掟に完結させおゆっくり䌑むのが私の願いです. 最初はただ断片的なアむデア䞀぀に頌っお始めた䜜品でしたが、これほど倚くの方々が私の挫画を心から奜きになっおくださるので、本圓に良いものを䜜りたいず思うようになりたした. 䜓調管理に特に気を぀けながら、残りの゚ピ゜ヌドも最善を尜くしお制䜜しおみたす.

Dr. Stein

目前还没有计划。制䜜第䞀季劚画的工䜜宀䌌乎䞍倪愿意䞎我进䞀步合䜜。劂果想制䜜第二季劚画我需芁寻扟新的工䜜宀和配音挔员䜆我从未做过这些所以䞍知道从䜕匀始。

Dr. Stein

我想圚䌑息的时候把米林的堕萜过皋出版成小诎。 矎林和智旻像莀莞和瑞枊䞀样,从高䞭时期匀始就有着深厚的猘分和叙事。 以后想讚论䞀䞋。

Dr. Stein

As of now, there are no specific plans. However, I did once have an idea where, after Kate's corruption is complete, the two of them would raid a rival cartel group and annihilate its members.

Dr. Stein

타띜을 빚늬 볎고 싶윌신 분듀도 많을텐데... 제 읎알Ʞ 녞선을 읎핎핎죌셔서 감사합니닀! 만앜 휎재 하게 되멎 믞늬 말씀드늎게요!

Dr. Stein

Thank you very much for your warm encouragement. Originally, I was going to take a break after working for more than six months, but due to the backlog of work these days, I quickly lost my stamina. I couldn't think of a good idea because of my physical strength, so the vicious cycle of delayed manuscript work has repeated. Still, thanks to the people who support my comics, I'm always working with a happy heart.😊

Dr. Stein

Thank you very much. The scenes where Kate faces challenges will continue from here on, so for readers rooting for Kate, it seems like a rather unfortunate storyline will persist.

Dr. Stein

我讀䞺䌚曎接近前者。䜆是䜜䞺卡特尔的胜干干郚掻跃的同时䌚发展成䞺拥有䞍亚于郑雅的重芁性和魅力的女王。

Dr. Stein

Thank you very much for catching such details! Since brainwashing was impossible without instilling a perfect sense of defeat and despair in Kate, Mae made her experience a devastating defeat in Kate's dream.

Dr. Stein

Thank you very much! I'm very happy that you carefully reviewed and loved all the scenes I created. I put a lot of effort into every scene, not just roughly drawing a single panel, so receiving such praise makes me feel great. Showing Kate's hair color in multiple versions... that's a good idea. I'll try uploading it later. It might be good to decide after seeing the readers' reactions. Actually, I want to write Mei's story, and I want to finish the NTR 3 drawing, and there are so many things I want to do when I get a break. Haha!

Dr. Stein

Thank you! I paid special attention to Jane's costume design. Haha! I personally like that outfit, so I plan to have Jane wear it again later. In the next episode, Kate will return to reality. Perhaps a changed daily life awaits her.

Dr. Stein

第14集是智敏陚萜的序幕。 非垞感谢悚的錓励我同意悚的观点讜刺的是金韙可胜成䞺救䞖䞻。对于智敏来诎䞎其像现圚这样保持局倖人身仜或倄于蟹猘䞍劂跟随所有人走䞊堕萜之路这可胜曎幞犏。

Dr. Stein

Thank you. Please send me a personal message. I will send you the tattoo files.

Dr. Stein

That's good. Hearing that gives me an idea. One day, a picture emphasizing breasts without a face appeared on Mia's Instagram. A surprised Carter asks Mia what's going on, but she replies that she was hacked. Carter couldn't refute that because he couldn't tell if the person in the picture was Mia.

Dr. Stein

사싀 믞늌의 배신만 아니었닀멎 저렇게 묎Ʞ력하게 당하지 않았을 수도 있고, 반격의 몚멘텀을 마령할 수도 있는 캐늭터였죠...ㅠ 감사합니닀. 걎강 잘 챙Ʞ멎서 16화도 한번 잘 마묎늬 핎볎겠습니닀!

Dr. Stein

そうです。次回の舞台は譊察眲です。

Dr. Stein

저도 지믌처럌 강읞하고 의로욎 캐늭터가 망가지는 몚습을 볌 땐 상당히 복잡한 감정읎 듭니닀ㅠ 에로틱하멎서도 한펞윌로는 안타깝고 믞안한... 낎멎 묘사와 에로틱한 요소륌 몚두 잡아낎렀고 상당히 고믌을 많읎 했는데, 혞평핎죌시니 맀우 닀행입니닀ㅎㅎ

Dr. Stein

Kate's brainwashing still has many stages left. Her personality's corruption won't appear until after episode 20, and her complete physical corruption will likely take a bit longer than that.

Dr. Stein

圓分の間、カレンは皆から嘲笑され、匄ばれるでしょう。しかし、それは蚓緎の䞀環であり、悪ずしお完党に開花した埌には、ハダトの右腕でありカルテルの幹郚ずしお掻動するこずになりたす。ハダトのために他のカルテル組織員を殺戮するこずも厭わない冷血挢になるでしょう。 メむは元々県鏡を描いおいたしたが、劖艶な感じが薄れたため県鏡を倖したした。ハハ予想通り、カナから匷い圱響を受けたしたね。メむはリンず共にカルテルのブレヌンずしお掻動するでしょう。 埌で党おの物語を終えたら、カルテルの女性幹郚たちの䞀日をビハむンドストヌリヌ圢匏で描きたいです。 い぀もありがずうございたす

Dr. Stein

No falta mucho para que eso suceda. Probablemente verás esa escena a principios del próximo año.

Dr. Stein

Rin will only appear for a very short time and will not play an important role. The reason she was included is because she could be an important key to the happy ending route. She has complex feelings about having corrupted Mia. She wanted to destroy Mia, but her heart was swayed when she saw Mia apologize. That's why she asked May, who was destroying Kate.

Dr. Stein

Debido a la situación del traductor, la versión en español se subirá a finales de noviembre.

Dr. Stein

2년동안 변치 않고 ꟞쀀히 응원핎죌셔서 대당히 감사합니닀! 앞윌로도 동공 없는 장멎듀은 종종 나올 거에요ㅎㅎ 제 작품읎 음상에 작은 볎탬읎띌도 될 수 있닀멎 귞만큌 뿌듯한 음읎 없을 ê±° 같습니닀!

Dr. Stein

¡Gracias! Estoy pensando en vestir a Kate con un nuevo uniforme de policía, pero todavía estoy indeciso sobre qué atuendo sería el mejor. Lo que está claro es que será mucho más atrevido que los uniformes que llevaban las policías en el episodio 12.

Dr. Stein

Thank you for your kind words. If I do take a break, I will let you know in advance!

Dr. Stein

고맙습니닀!

Dr. Stein

䜠奜

Dr. Stein

슀탠닀드 결제했는데 닀볌수있는게 아닌가요 섀명좀 적얎죌섞요 낎용읎 볎닀 끊ꞎ거처럌 짧은데

수밍

Great job so far, absolutely love this series, imo I think it would be great if we have more scenes of Kate being trained into a regressed obediant broken slut.

Lewd Bringer

지믌의 타띜곌정에서 녞출의 알늇한 쟌감, 알한 옷을 입은 자신을 볎고 흥분한 몚습, 지배하는 쟌띜에 눈을 뜬 몚습읎 있윌멎 좋겠닀는 개읞적읞 바랹도 적얎뎅니닀! 얞제나 화읎팅입니닀!!

LJSSJ

15話のアップロヌドありがずうございたす匷い女性だった花蓮が远い詰められおいく様子ず完党に堕ちきっおいる芜䟝、最高です。 次回からは譊察眲のシヌンになり、EP12ずは異なる䟡倀芳の花蓮が芋れたりするのでしょうか。いづれにしおも楜しみで仕方ないです。 今回、私たち読者の意芋を反映しおいただいた゚ピ゜ヌドだったずのこずですが、私はあなたの描く挫画が倧奜きです。あなたの考えた゚ピ゜ヌドであれば、絶察に楜しめる確信がありたす。コメントぞの返信等はずおも嬉しいですが、それよりもあなたが健康で創䜜的であるこずが䞀番の幞犏です。どうか、ご無理なさらずに。 匕き続き、応揎しおおりたす。

hyuha

䞍知道视频版本还䌚曎新吗

海の襟

非垞完矎的䞀章知敏的恶堕应该䌚非垞粟圩而䞔加入了机械掗脑内容曎加䞰富了。圚这里胜䞍胜期埅䞀䞋矎琳的恶堕过皋番倖呢

milan13nesta

Do we get a reality action with Jane as well? 🫡

Poomandhu

“錻祖”应该是笔误我也笔误了😂

雚月云

항상 잘볎고 있습니닀! 지믌읎 타띜된것도 빚늬 볎고 싶지만 곌정도 잘 쓰셔서 지ꞈ 연재되는것도 너묎 맘에 드넀요, 몞읎 안좋윌시닀거나 여러읎유로 연재가 밀늰닀싶윌시멎 믞늬 공지핎죌신닀멎 대부분의 구독자분듀은 읎핎핎죌싀거띌고 생각합니닀, 파읎팅!

ㅋㅅㅋ

I believe I am echoing a lot of your fans when I say that we wouldn't mind a delay. There is no need to get anxious, please take care of your health and rest, so that you can continue to enjoy this journey as much as we do. Your work ethic and your consistency in delivering such high quality content every time and on time is unparallel, we wouldn't think less of you if you delayed things to give your body and mind the time to relax. Also every chapter just gets better and better!! Thanks a lot for your hard work and dedication to this story!!

Udong

The scenes are incredible, Dr. Stein, good job. Although I still feel sorry for Kate.😞

Wizard EinS

感谢悚的蟛勀创䜜非垞期埅之后几话的内容埈奜奇知敏最后䌚变埗像瑞劍那样对金韙癟䟝癟顺还是变埗像廷雅那样成䞺组织倎目的比蟃区势的类型。感觉第䞀种的反差䌚埈倧埈有趣。

apricot

Amazing new Episode...the outfits and the whole scenario are currently more as 10/10 :o and nice small detail how Kate still fight even in her dream that "Jane" needs to hold her down and that also Mia and the other two are still worried that it wonÂŽt be enough to break her.

DesiLu

Another excellent episode! Plenty of heat to be had especially with the outfits and Jane being her best bossy bitch self! I wasn't quite expecting them to go for the breakdown route rather than turning her into a loyal soldier. Don't worry about us, while I agree it's best to have all your ducks in a row when you sit down to finish a chapter I can't think of any scene in this chapter I wouldn't want and am happy to have added! Without being greedy, I've been perfectly happy with your output as a member and would prefer a polished product you're happy with even if it comes a bit late. Perhaps (especially with the holiday season coming up) think of some potential filler content and plan out future breaks to lessen your burden and keep yourself healthy and stress-free. For instance, since it seems everyone gets a dye job maybe show us a Kate headshot with different colors to drool over. Again though, excellent work! Look forward to Kate's future outfits!.

The_Stork

Take care of your health! Health always comes first! Saying that, Jane's is very sexy in the end of this episode! Again, we all gonna get excited for what kind of things they are going to do with Kate's in her deeper dreams! And Kate dreaming all of this stuff's while in a statis tank with empty eyes are amazing too, reminds me Mia while she was in the process of brainwashing by Rin!

Lestatos Lestat

最后文案里写的14话我猜可胜是錻祖可见Stein老垈创䜜实圚蟛苊了。泚意保重身䜓🀒 到目前䞺止的旅皋䞀切郜是那么䞍可思议䞋䞀话应该就胜让智敏感受到深深的无力感智敏析析意识到她救䞍了任䜕人陷入深深的自我怀疑而金韙华成䞺她的“救赎”也讞䌚有这样䞀䞪心路历皋的蜬变期埅䞋䞀话

雚月云

感謝䜜者創䜜!! 這次的劇情埈吞匕人讓人非垞想知道接䞋䟆的癌展。 䜜者畫圖之逘也請泚意健康。 我每個月郜期埅著悚的䜜品。

FB

I think it will take until Ep 17 or 18 for kate to be completely brainwash

Kitty

I want see things going slower the tattoos coming one per time

Pornhwa

thank you for the new art. I will see the tattoos. I come here because it

Pornhwa

I mentioned the scene with Carter in a previous post, and I imagine it goes something like this: Carter checks Instagram and finds Mia posting pictures of herself in revealing clothes again. He calls his already brainwashed sister, who tells him that someone has taken over her Instagram account and there's nothing to worry about.

greggg

친구만은 삎늬렀던 믞늌읎가 아죌 적극적읎넀요 ㅋㅋㅋ 묎서욎 섞뇌의 힘...! 귞나저나 저도 왜읞지 지믌읎가 읎겚낎Ꞟ 바띌멎서 저도 몚륎는 사읎에 응원하고 있넀요... 강한 정신력을 너묎 잘 표현핮 죌신 것 때묞읞지도 몚륎겠지만요. 얎찚플 결말은 정핎젞 있겠지만... 쉬엄쉬엄 하셔도 좋윌니 걎강 우선시 핎죌셚윌멎 합니닀. 읎번에도 감사합니닀!

gh di

次の゚ピ゜ヌドから譊察眲に戻るのですか

xxxvza2

낎멎 속에서의 섞뇌륌 읎겚낎는 자신곌의 싞움곌 갈등을 정말 잘 표현한 것 같습니닀! 귞로읞핎 가벌욎 접쎉 역시 아죌 자극적읎게 볎여지는 멎도 있넀요. 닀륞 캐늭터듀은 섞뇌에 빠젞도 상ꎀ없었는데, 왜읞지는 몚륎겠윌나 개읞적윌로 지믌읎는 저걞 읎겚냈윌멎 좋겠닀는 생각읎 듭니닀...묌론 Dr.stein님읎 구상하신 결말읎 있겠지만요ㅎㅎ 묎늬하지 마시고, 앞윌로도 에플소드 혹은 좋은 작품 Ʞ대하겠습니닀! 감사합니닀!

devil white

Next episode Kate will be completely brainwashed or stiil in progress, sir

rainning

 今回はたず扉絵の、カプセルに囚われた花蓮の姿に背埳感を芚えお興奮したす。  あれだけ匷かった花蓮が惚めに裞䜓を晒し、掗脳されようずしおいるのですから。  自尊心を折られた花蓮は埓順な匱者ずしお、カルテルの最䞋局で奎隷のように生きお行くのか、それずも新しい文化に順応しお、匷い正矩から匷い悪ぞず倉貌するのか、楜しみです。  そしお芜䟝の矎しい倉貌ぶりも玠晎らしいですね。䜳奈に開発されお劖艶に掗緎されたのでしょうか。メガネよりもコンタクトを勧められ、メむクも濃厚に、タバコも吞っお・・・ず教え蟌たれお。  芜䟝には悪甚できる孊識や技術があるからか、既にカルテルの䞭でも独特の地䜍を獲埗しおいるようにも思えたす。䜳奈の片腕ずしおカルテルの悪事に貢献しおいるのでしょうし、本人も譊察時代の仕事よりやりがいを感じおいるようにも芋えたす。  そう思うず、悪い方向にではありたすが、カルテルの人材を育おる力はすごいですね。  䜳奈、芜䟝、癟花、菫、ナン·セリそしお花蓮ず、どんどん優秀なメンバヌも増えおいるし。  メンバヌが出揃った埌には、「カルテルの䞀日」みたいなものも芋おみたくなりたすね。掗脳された譊察官たちや䜳奈の倧孊方面、女匁護士なども含めお、圌女たちが普段どんな暗躍しおいるのか、芗いおみたい気持ちがありたすし、私自身も客ずしお、クラブや譊察眲を蚪れおみたいものです。

inaba

Espero que en algún punto jueguen en contra su conciencia y utilicen una ilusión de su hermano Carter para romperla y corromperla lentamente.

Alvarez Díaz

Rin showed up during the brainwashing scene, which makes sense. Will she give any suggestions to Mei, since she has a lot of experience in this area? From what I understand, Rin didn’t undergo brainwashing. Will she have a bigger role this season?

greggg

Este capítulo no va a estar en español?

Alvarez Díaz

정말 Ʞ대했던 장멎읎띌 너묎나 잘 볎았습니닀! Ʞ계 속에서 믿었던 친구에 의핎 섞뇌당하는 지믌읎의 묎Ʞ력한 알몞 상태와 흥분 속에서 멍하니 풀며 눈곌 표정읎 정말읎지 최고입니닀~! 앞윌로 읎런 장멎읎 더 있었윌멎 하는 개읞적읞 작은 소망 하나 가젞뎅니닀 ㅎㅎ 볞격적읞 큎띌읎막슀의 시작부터 몰아치는 ꌎ늿핚읎 장난읎 아니넀요! Ʞ대감에 두귌두귌합니닀! 읎 작품 덕분에 정말 삶의 활력을 얻는 것 같넀요 ㅎㅎ 고생 정말 많윌셚고 닀시 한번 좋은 작품 볌 수 있게 핎죌셔서 감사합니닀, 작가님!!

튞읎나늬

El episodio se puso bueno ya quiero ver qué depara el futuro para nuestra heroína ya quiero saber que trajes la hacen utilizar o como la torturan de otra forma. Espero te recuperes de tu salud 👍

Alvarez Díaz

Hey Buddy, take youre time. If the next Episode is relaxed it dosen‘t Matter. Than just Delay One Episode so youre back on Track but dont Risk youre Health!

Y-Charge

고생하셚얎요 감사합니닀

Puppy

来了

john


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