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Smoking Hypnosis Season 2 EP.14

1. Hello dear subscribers! Episode 14, which youโ€™ve been waiting for, has been uploaded! I was truly delighted to see so many of you give positive feedback on the Episode 14 preview. Honestly, I was really worried about how it might be received, but thanks to your warm responses, I gained great courage! Since Thanksgiving Day is coming up, I created a special cover illustration. While working on it, a rather quirky idea came to meโ€”I thought it might be fun to make a historical-drama version of the smoking hypnosis theme. Imagine Mia, the noble familyโ€™s young lady, Carter, the loyal servant who secretly loves her, and Alex, the shady peddler dealing in mysterious pillsโ€ฆ haha. If I get the chance, Iโ€™ll also upload some character illustrations in this historical-drama version. 2. Iโ€™m currently struggling a lot with how to shape Episode 15. Originally, I should have started working on the storyboard at the end of September, but since I havenโ€™t finalized the scenario yet, I havenโ€™t been able to draw a single page ๐Ÿ˜ข. The draft script I had prepared didnโ€™t feel right, and as I kept revising it, things got even more tangled. Because the scenario work has been delayed more than ever before, the schedule for Episode 15 has become extremely tight. I think I can post the WIP on the 13th, but the preview might be slightly delayed. Iโ€™ll do my best to meet the 23rd deadline. If it ends up being late, Iโ€™ll inform you in advance. Last month, I was under heavy stress due to issues with leaks, but thanks to all of you, I was able to recover my energy. Thank you sincerely. I truly want to repay your support with a great work! 1. ไบฒ็ˆฑ็š„่ฎข้˜…่€…ไปฌ๏ผŒๅคงๅฎถๅฅฝ๏ผ ๆœŸๅพ…ๅทฒไน…็š„็ฌฌ14่ฏๅทฒ็ปไธŠไผ ๏ผ ็œ‹ๅˆฐๅคงๅฎถๅฏน็ฌฌ14่ฏ้ข„ๅ‘Š็š„ๅฅฝ่ฏ„๏ผŒๆˆ‘็œŸ็š„้žๅธธ้ซ˜ๅ…ดใ€‚ๅŽŸๆœฌๅพˆๆ‹…ๅฟƒไผšไธไผšๅๅ“ไธๅฅฝ๏ผŒไฝ†ๅคšไบไบ†ๅคงๅฎถ็š„ๆ”ฏๆŒ๏ผŒๆˆ‘ๅพ—ๅˆฐไบ†ๆžๅคง็š„ๅ‹‡ๆฐ”๏ผ ๅ› ไธบไธญ็ง‹่Š‚ๅฟซๅˆฐไบ†๏ผŒๆˆ‘็‰นๆ„ๅˆถไฝœไบ†ไธ€ๅผ ็‰นๅˆซๅฐ้ขใ€‚ๅœจ็”ปๅฐ้ข็š„ๆ—ถๅ€™๏ผŒ็ช็„ถๅ†’ๅ‡บไบ†ไธ€ไธชๆœ‰็‚น็ฆปๅฅ‡็š„ๆƒณๆณ•โ€”โ€”ๅฆ‚ๆžœๅšไธ€ไธชๅค่ฃ…็‰ˆ็š„ๅธ็ƒŸๆด—่„‘๏ผŒไผšไธไผšๅพˆๆœ‰่ถฃๅ‘ข๏ผŸๆฏ”ๅฆ‚็‘žๅฆ๏ผŒ่ดตๆ—ๅฐๅง๏ผ›ไฟกๅ‹๏ผŒๆš—ๆ‹ๅฅน็š„ๅฟ ่ฏšไป†ไบบ๏ผ›่ฟ˜ๆœ‰้‡‘้พ™๏ผŒ่ดฉๅ–ๅฅ‡ๆ€ช่ฏไธธ็š„ๅฅธๅ•†โ€ฆๅ‘ตๅ‘ตใ€‚ ๆœ‰ๆœบไผš็š„่ฏ๏ผŒๆˆ‘ไนŸไผšไธŠไผ ๅค่ฃ…็‰ˆ็š„ไบบ่ฎพๆ’็”ปใ€‚ 2. ๅ…ณไบŽ็ฌฌ15่ฏ็š„ๆž„ๆˆ๏ผŒๆˆ‘็Žฐๅœจ็œŸ็š„้žๅธธ่‹ฆๆผใ€‚ ๅŽŸๆœฌๅบ”่ฏฅๅœจ9ๆœˆๅบ•ๅฐฑๅผ€ๅง‹15่ฏ็š„ๅˆ†้•œๅทฅไฝœ๏ผŒไฝ†ๅ› ไธบๅ‰งๆƒ…่ฟ˜ๆฒกๆœ€็ปˆ็กฎๅฎš๏ผŒๆ‰€ไปฅๅˆฐ็Žฐๅœจ่ฟžไธ€ๅผ ้ƒฝๆฒก็”ป๐Ÿ˜ขใ€‚ไน‹ๅ‰ๅ†™ๅฅฝ็š„่‰็จฟไธๅคชๆปกๆ„๏ผŒไฟฎๆ”นไบ†ๅพˆๅคšๆฌก๏ผŒ็ป“ๆžœๅ่€Œ่ถŠๆ”น่ถŠไนฑไบ†ใ€‚ ็”ฑไบŽๅ‰งๆƒ…ๅˆ›ไฝœๅ‰ๆ‰€ๆœชๆœ‰ๅœฐๆ‹–ๅปถ๏ผŒ็ฌฌ15่ฏ็š„่ฟ›ๅบฆๅ˜ๅพ—้žๅธธ็ดงๅผ ใ€‚WIPๅคงๆฆ‚ๅฏไปฅๅœจ13ๆ—ฅไธŠไผ ๏ผŒไฝ†้ข„่งˆๅฏ่ƒฝไผš็จๅพฎๅปถ่ฟŸใ€‚ๆˆ‘ไผšๅฐฝๅŠ›่ตถไธŠ23ๆ—ฅ็š„ๆœŸ้™ใ€‚ๅฆ‚ๆžœ็œŸ็š„ๅปถ่ฟŸ๏ผŒไผšๆๅ‰ๅ‘Š็Ÿฅๅคงๅฎถใ€‚ ไธŠไธชๆœˆๅ› ไธบๆณ„้œฒไบ‹ไปถๅŽ‹ๅŠ›ๅพˆๅคง๏ผŒไฝ†ๅคšไบไบ†ๅคงๅฎถ็š„ๆ”ฏๆŒ๏ผŒๆˆ‘ๆ‰่ƒฝ้‡ๆ–ฐๆŒฏไฝœใ€‚่กทๅฟƒๆ„Ÿ่ฐขๅคงๅฎถใ€‚ๆˆ‘ไธ€ๅฎšไผš็”จไผ˜็ง€็š„ไฝœๅ“ๆฅๅ›žๆŠฅไฝ ไปฌ๏ผ 1. ๊ตฌ๋…์ž ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„ ์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š”! ๊ธฐ๋‹ค๋ฆฌ์‹œ๋˜ 14ํ™”๊ฐ€ ์—…๋กœ๋“œ ๋˜์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค! ๋งŽ์€ ๋ถ„๋“ค์ด 14ํ™” ์˜ˆ๊ณ ํŽธ์„ ํ˜ธํ‰ํ•ด์ฃผ์…”์„œ ์ •๋ง ๊ธฐ๋ปค์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ˜น์‹œ๋‚˜ ๋ฐ˜์‘์ด ์•ˆ์ข‹์œผ๋ฉด ์–ด์ฉŒ๋‚˜ ๋งŽ์ด ๊ฑฑ์ •ํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ, ๋•๋ถ„์— ํฐ ์šฉ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์–ป์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค! ๊ณง ์ถ”์„์ด๋ผ ํŠน๋ณ„ํ•œ ํ‘œ์ง€๋ฅผ ์ œ์ž‘ํ•ด ๋ณด์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ‘œ์ง€๋ฅผ ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๋‹ค๊ฐ€ ์•ฝ๊ฐ„ ์—‰๋šฑํ•œ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๊ฐ€ ๋– ์˜ฌ๋ž๋Š”๋ฐ, ์‚ฌ๊ทน๋ฒ„์ „ ํก์—ฐ์„ธ๋‡Œ๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด๋„ ์žฌ๋ฐŒ๊ฒ ๋‹ค๋Š” ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ค์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ท€์กฑ ๊ฐ€๋ฌธ์˜ ๊ทœ์ˆ˜ ์„œ์—ฐ๊ณผ ๊ทธ๋…€๋ฅผ ์ง์‚ฌ๋ž‘ํ•˜๋Š” ์ถฉ์งํ•œ ํ•˜์ธ ์‹ ์šฐ, ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊ธฐ๋ฌ˜ํ•œ ํ™˜์•ฝ์„ ์ทจ๊ธ‰ํ•˜๋Š” ์žฅ๋ฌผ์•„๋น„ ๊น€์šฉ..ใ…Žใ…Ž ๊ธฐํšŒ๊ฐ€ ๋˜๋ฉด ์‚ฌ๊ทน๋ฒ„์ „ ์บ๋ฆญํ„ฐ ์ผ๋Ÿฌ์ŠคํŠธ๋„ ์˜ฌ๋ ค๋ณผ๊ฒŒ์š”. 2. 15ํ™”๋ฅผ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๊พธ๋ฐ€์ง€ ๊ณ ๋ฏผ์ด ์ •๋ง ๊นŠ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์›๋ž˜๋Š” 9์›” ๋ง๋ถ€ํ„ฐ 15ํ™” ์ฝ˜ํ‹ฐ์ž‘์—…์— ์ฐฉ์ˆ˜ํ•ด์•ผ ๋งž๋Š”๋ฐ, ์•„์ง 15ํ™” ์‹œ๋‚˜๋ฆฌ์˜ค๋ฅผ ํ™•์ •์ง“์ง€ ๋ชปํ•ด ์•„์ง๋„ ํ•œ ์žฅ๋„ ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ์ง€ ๋ชปํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹คใ… ใ…  ๋ฏธ๋ฆฌ ์จ๋‘” ์‹œ๋‚˜๋ฆฌ์˜ค๊ฐ€ ๋งˆ์Œ์— ๋“ค์ง€ ์•Š์•„ ์ˆ˜์ •์„ ๊ฑฐ๋“ญํ•˜๋‹ค๋ณด๋‹ˆ ์˜คํžˆ๋ ค ๋” ๊ผฌ์ธ ๊ฑฐ ๊ฐ™์•„์š”. ์‹œ๋‚˜๋ฆฌ์˜ค ์ž‘์—…์ด ์ „๋ก€์—†์ด ๋ฐ€๋ ค๋ฒ„๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋ฐ”๋žŒ์— 15ํ™” ์ผ์ •์ด ์—„์ฒญ ๋น ๋“ฏํ•ด์กŒ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. WIP์€ 13์ผ์— ์˜ฌ๋ฆด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ, ํ”„๋ฆฌ๋ทฐ๋Š” ์•ฝ๊ฐ„ ๋Šฆ์ถฐ์งˆ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ๋“  23์ผ ๊ธฐํ•œ์— ๋งž์ถ”๋„๋ก ๋…ธ๋ ฅํ•ด ๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งŒ์•ฝ ๋Šฆ์–ด์ง„๋‹ค๋ฉด ๋ฏธ๋ฆฌ ๋ง์”€๋“œ๋ฆด๊ฒŒ์š”. ์ง€๋‚œ ๋‹ฌ์— ์œ ์ถœ ๊ด€๋ จ ์ด์Šˆ๋กœ ์ƒ๋‹นํžˆ ์ŠคํŠธ๋ ˆ์Šค๊ฐ€ ์‹ฌํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ, ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„ ๋•๋ถ„์— ๋‹ค์‹œ ๊ธฐ์šด์„ ์ฐจ๋ฆด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ง„์‹ฌ์œผ๋กœ ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ผญ ์ข‹์€ ์ž‘ํ’ˆ์œผ๋กœ ๋ณด๋‹ตํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค! 1. ่ณผ่ชญ่€…ใฎ็š†ใ•ใพใ€ใ“ใ‚“ใซใกใฏ๏ผ ใŠๅพ…ใกใ‹ใญใฎ็ฌฌ14่ฉฑใŒใ‚ขใƒƒใƒ—ใƒญใƒผใƒ‰ใ•ใ‚Œใพใ—ใŸ๏ผ ็ฌฌ14่ฉฑใฎใƒ—ใƒฌใƒ“ใƒฅใƒผใซๅคšใใฎๆ–นใ€…ใ‹ใ‚‰ๅฅฝ่ฉ•ใ‚’ใ„ใŸใ ใใ€ๆœฌๅฝ“ใซๅฌ‰ใ—ใ‹ใฃใŸใงใ™ใ€‚ใ‚‚ใ—ๅๅฟœใŒๆ‚ชใ‹ใฃใŸใ‚‰ใฉใ†ใ—ใ‚ˆใ†ใจๅฟƒ้…ใ—ใฆใ„ใŸใฎใงใ™ใŒใ€็š†ใ•ใพใฎใŠใ‹ใ’ใงๅคงใใชๅ‹‡ๆฐ—ใ‚’ๅพ—ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใŒใงใใพใ—ใŸ๏ผ ใ‚‚ใ†ใ™ใ็ง‹ๅค•๏ผˆใƒใƒฅใ‚ฝใ‚ฏ๏ผ‰ใชใฎใงใ€็‰นๅˆฅใช่กจ็ด™ใ‚’ๅˆถไฝœใ—ใฆใฟใพใ—ใŸใ€‚่กจ็ด™ใ‚’ๆใ„ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ†ใกใซๅฐ‘ใ—็ช้ฃ›ใชใ‚ขใ‚คใƒ‡ใ‚ขใŒๆตฎใ‹ใ‚“ใงใใฆใ€ใ€Œๆ™‚ไปฃๅЇใƒใƒผใ‚ธใƒงใƒณใฎๅ–ซ็…™ๆด—่„ณใ€ใ‚’ไฝœใฃใฆใฟใฆใ‚‚้ข็™ฝใ„ใ‚“ใ˜ใ‚ƒใชใ„ใ‹ใจๆ€ใ„ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚่ฒดๆ—ใฎๅฎถใฎไปคๅฌขใƒปไฝณๅฅˆใ€ๅฝผๅฅณใ‚’ๅฏ†ใ‹ใซๆƒณใ†ๅฟ ๅฎŸใชไธ‹ๅƒ•ใƒปๅคงๅœฐใ€ใใ—ใฆๅฅ‡ๅฆ™ใชไธธ่–ฌใ‚’ๆ‰ฑใ†้—‡ๅ•†ไบบใƒป้šผไบบโ€ฆใตใตใ€‚ ๆฉŸไผšใŒใ‚ใ‚Œใฐใ€ๆ™‚ไปฃๅЇใƒใƒผใ‚ธใƒงใƒณใฎใ‚ญใƒฃใƒฉใ‚ฏใ‚ฟใƒผใ‚คใƒฉใ‚นใƒˆใ‚‚ใ‚ขใƒƒใƒ—ใ—ใฆใฟใพใ™ใญใ€‚ 2. ไปŠใ€15่ฉฑใ‚’ใฉใ†ๆง‹ๆˆใ™ใ‚‹ใ‹ใซใคใ„ใฆๆœฌๅฝ“ใซๆ‚ฉใ‚“ใงใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚ ๆœฌๆฅใชใ‚‰9ๆœˆๆœซใ‹ใ‚‰15่ฉฑใฎใ‚ณใƒณใƒ†ไฝœๆฅญใซๅ…ฅใ‚‹ในใใงใ—ใŸใŒใ€ใพใ ใ‚ทใƒŠใƒชใ‚ชใ‚’็ขบๅฎšใงใใšใ€1ๆžšใ‚‚ๆใ‘ใฆใ„ใพใ›ใ‚“๐Ÿ˜ขใ€‚ไบ‹ๅ‰ใซๆ›ธใ„ใฆใŠใ„ใŸใ‚ทใƒŠใƒชใ‚ชใŒๆฐ—ใซๅ…ฅใ‚‰ใšใ€ไฟฎๆญฃใ‚’็นฐใ‚Š่ฟ”ใ™ใ†ใกใซใ‹ใˆใฃใฆๆททไนฑใ—ใฆใ—ใพใฃใŸใ‚ˆใ†ใงใ™ใ€‚ ใ‚ทใƒŠใƒชใ‚ชไฝœๆฅญใŒๅ‰ไพ‹ใชใ้…ใ‚Œใฆใ—ใพใฃใŸใŸใ‚ใ€15่ฉฑใฎใ‚นใ‚ฑใ‚ธใƒฅใƒผใƒซใŒ้žๅธธใซใ‚ฟใ‚คใƒˆใซใชใฃใฆใ—ใพใ„ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚WIPใฏ13ๆ—ฅใซๅ‡บใ›ใใ†ใงใ™ใŒใ€ใƒ—ใƒฌใƒ“ใƒฅใƒผใฏๅฐ‘ใ—้…ใ‚Œใ‚‹ใ‹ใ‚‚ใ—ใ‚Œใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚ใฉใ†ใซใ‹23ๆ—ฅใฎๆœŸ้™ใซ้–“ใซๅˆใ‚ใ›ใŸใ„ใจๆ€ใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚ใ‚‚ใ—้…ใ‚Œใ‚‹ๅ ดๅˆใฏใ€ไบ‹ๅ‰ใซใŠ็Ÿฅใ‚‰ใ›ใ—ใพใ™ใ€‚ ๅ…ˆๆœˆใฏๆตๅ‡บใฎไปถใงใ‹ใชใ‚Šใ‚นใƒˆใƒฌใ‚นใ‚’ๆŠฑใˆใฆใ„ใพใ—ใŸใŒใ€็š†ใ•ใพใฎใŠใ‹ใ’ใงใพใŸๅ…ƒๆฐ—ใ‚’ๅ–ใ‚Šๆˆปใ™ใ“ใจใŒใงใใพใ—ใŸใ€‚ๆœฌๅฝ“ใซใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚ๅฟ…ใš็ด ๆ™ดใ‚‰ใ—ใ„ไฝœๅ“ใงใŠๅฟœใˆใ—ใŸใ„ใจๆ€ใ„ใพใ™๏ผ ------------------------- S2 EP.14 Download link-------------------------- 1. 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Smoking Hypnosis Season 2 EP.14 Smoking Hypnosis Season 2 EP.14

Comments

I'd like to picture Jane's husband licking her feet.

Dr. Stein

There are still nine episodes left.

Dr. Stein

I also wanted to learn another language while doing this job.

Dr. Stein

Thank you too! I'll do my best until the end.

Dr. Stein

Thank you!

Dr. Stein

Great

ๆตทใฎ่ฅŸ

Staying with the bad ending and im all for it magnificent work and ty for ur efforts working on these stories

Obsidian

The scene where Rin uses her foot to reactivate Mia's brainwashing was so hot! Hopefully we can see something similar happening to Kate!

orange1025

this make me wanted learn korean

Pornhwa

In my opinion Alex is the perfect villain for this story. As Dr. Stein said, the whole point of the mind-control genre is that an incopetent or ugly man gets to rule over the strongest and smartest women. If Alex was handsome and intelligent, why would he need to use the mind-controlling drug to get women?

Lord Darkar

How many chapters do you plan on season 2 having? Is it near the end or there is still more to go?

Kazuto

Yes, the season 1 ending was pretty good and what most people would expect. So I do hope the ending of season 2 would be the same

Kazuto

It worked in the first season. But know it is a big deal: international cartel, GMO, foreign mercenaries, an entire cops department, attorney, maybe politicians.You've created a beautiful, but much more complex, work. At this point, perhaps Alex's character, as described, isn't worthy of being the main villain. Alex that doesn't have any mental or physical skills isn't able to stay on the top of cartel. We need someone smarter behind him. It would work in my opinion if he is just a puppet manipulated from behind by someone who actually holds the strings and uses his puppets. Take care and still my compliments, excellent work

ggggggggggggggg

Thanks a lot! If you can include Jane's foot scenes somwhere, it'd be awesome. We haven't seen her feet yet, and she's supposed to be the sporty type of women, which should have pretty sweaty feet. That's something to take advantage of when it comes to foot licking and smelling scenes. Just my 2 cents. Great work as always!

Sebby L

That story would be fine too. Or perhaps the story of the reporter who helps the sisters briefly featured in S2 EP.2 would work well. A story where a reporter extends a helping hand to the victim's family who received no assistance from the police.

Dr. Stein

ไป–ไปฌๅฐ†ไผšไธๆ—ถๅœฐไฝœไธบไธดๆ—ถๆผ”ๅ‘˜ๅ‡บ็Žฐ๏ผŒๅนถๅ‚ไธŽๆ€ง่กŒไธบ๏ผ

Dr. Stein

mmm... I'm going to start when I come up with a good idea for a happy ending.

Dr. Stein

ใใ†ใงใ™ใ€‚ใใ‚ŒใŒๆœ€ใ‚‚ไธ€่ˆฌ็š„ใช่งฃ้‡ˆใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใงใ™ใ€‚ ้“ๅพณใจๅ€ซ็†่ฆ็ฏ„ใ‚’็ ดใ‚‹ใ“ใจใ‹ใ‚‰ๅฟซๆฅฝใ‚’ๆ„Ÿใ˜ใ‚‹ๆ€งๆ ผใซๅค‰่ณชใ—ใŸใŸใ‚ใ€็คพไผšใงไธ่‰ฏใ ใจๆ€ใ†่กŒๅ‹•ใจๆœ่ฃ…ใ‚’ใ™ใ‚‹ใฎใซๆ†šใ‚ŠใŒใชใใชใ‚‹ใฎใงใ™ใ€‚ ็งใฎ่ฉฑใ‚’ๆŒใฃใฆๆƒณๅƒๅŠ›ใ‚’ๅบƒใ’ใฆใใ ใ•ใฃใฆใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ™๏ผ ใ“ใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใช่ฉฑใ‚’ใ™ใ‚‹ใจใ€็งใ‚‚ๆƒณๅƒๅŠ›ใ‚’ๅˆบๆฟ€ใ—ใฆใ‚คใƒณใ‚นใƒ”ใƒฌใƒผใ‚ทใƒงใƒณใ‚’ๅพ—ใ‚‹ใฎใซๅฝน็ซ‹ใกใพใ™๏ผ

Dr. Stein

It seems a bit difficult to conduct a public opinion poll at this point. The story has already passed its turning point and is heading toward its conclusion.

Dr. Stein

I saw that the story of the most beautiful and outstanding women kneeling before a worthless person like Alex amplified the eroticism. I thought the ironic pleasure derived from this absurdity was the essence of this genre. However, I agree with the point that Alex is not a very appealing character. If I get to write another series, I will try to make the male character more charming as well.

Dr. Stein

That's a pretty good idea too! After finishing Season 2, I had planned to create backstories for the characters to fill in the gaps. Through these backstories, I intended to depict the police station's complete corruption or the changing relationships among the surrounding characters. It would be fine to have a character like Jia or Mei narrate that story.

Dr. Stein

Thank you! Since I also enjoy foot fetish scenes, I'll be sure to draw more of these scenes going forward!

Dr. Stein

็”ฑไบŽๅทฅไฝœ็งฏๅŽ‹ๅคชๅคš,ๆˆ‘่ฟ˜ๆฒกๆœ‰ๅฎŒๆˆWIPใ€‚ ๆ™šไธŠ8็‚น30ๅˆ†ไธŠไผ ๏ผ

Dr. Stein

่ƒŒๆ™ฏๆ˜ฏ18ไธ–็บช็š„ๆœ้ฒœใ€‚

Dr. Stein

์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹คใ…Žใ…Ž

Dr. Stein

์ž‘๊ฐ€๋‹˜ ์ผ๋ณธ์ธ์ด์‹œ์ ธ?

๋ฏผ

ไธ็Ÿฅ้“็•ถๆ‚จๅค่ฃ็‰ˆ่ฆ็”จ้‚ฃ็จฎ่ƒŒๆ™ฏ๏ผŸๆ˜ฏๆฑไบž่ƒŒๆ™ฏ้‚„ๆ˜ฏๆญๆดฒ่ƒŒๆ™ฏ๏ผŸ

VOQ

You're welcome. Most released comics from major publishers never release individual pages. Personally, I prefer the PDF version.

SF666

It would be cool if the reporter was a successful and famous milf. Mia admired her as her mentor. This reporter even came to Mia's university to inspire students, to talk about her job and to give them some tips. The reporter also recognized Mia's talent, but was left speechless when she saw Mia's transformation. The reporter then decided to investigate the case herself, and discovered Alex's business.

Lord Darkar

ๆƒณ่ฏดๅŽ็ปญๆœ‰ๆฒกๆœ‰ๅฐนไธ–่މใ€ๅด”ๆœ‰ๅจœ็ญ‰ๅŒไบ‹ๅœจๅŠžๅ…ฌๅฎคๅ‘็”Ÿๅ…ณ็ณป็š„ๅœบๆ™ฏ๏ผŒๆˆ‘่ง‰ๅพ—่ฟ™ไบ›ๅŒไบ‹็š„ๅค–่ฒŒไนŸๅพˆnice

Pk

ไปŠๅคฉ00:00ไผšๆ›ดๆ–ฐๅ—

john

ใ€€ไฝœๅ“ใŒ็ด ๆ™ดใ‚‰ใ—ใ„ใฎใงใ€ใคใ„่ชญ่€…ใจใ—ใฆๅ‹ๆ‰‹ใช็ฉบๆƒณใ‚’ๆฅฝใ—ใ‚“ใงใ—ใพใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚ ใ€€ใ€Œใชใœๆด—่„ณใ•ใ‚ŒใŸใ‚ญใƒฃใƒฉใ‚ฏใ‚ฟใƒผใŸใกใฏใ‚ฟใƒˆใ‚ฅใƒผใ‚„ๆฟƒใ„ใƒกใ‚คใ‚ฏใ€้Žๅบฆใซ้œฒๅ‡บใ—ใŸๆœ่ฃ…๏ผˆไป–ใซใฏใƒœใƒ‡ใ‚ฃใƒ”ใ‚ขใ‚นใชใฉใ‚‚๏ผ‰ใ‚’ๅฅฝใ‚€ใฎใ‹ใ€ใซใคใ„ใฆใ‚‚ใ€็ขบใ‹ใซๆด—่„ณใฎๆ–ฝ่ก“่€…ใ‚„ใใฎๆ–นๆณ•ใฏ็•ฐใชใ‚‹ใ‚‚ใฎใฎใ€ๅ…จๅ“กใŒไบบๆ ผใซๅฃฒๆ˜ฅๅฉฆใฎ่‡ชๆˆ‘ใ‚’ๅŸ‹ใ‚่พผใพใ‚Œใ€ใพใŸ็คพไผš้€šๅฟตใ‚„ๅ€ซ็†ใ‚ˆใ‚Šใ‚‚่‡ชๅˆ†ใฎๅฟซๆฅฝใ‚’ๅ„ชๅ…ˆใ•ใ›ใ‚‹ๆ€งๆ ผใซๅค‰ใ‚ใฃใŸใฎใงใ€ๅฃฒๆ˜ฅๅฉฆใฎใ€Œ่จ˜ๅทใ€ใงใ‚ใ‚‹ใใ‚Œใ‚‰ใ‚’่บซใซไป˜ใ‘ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใŒใ€่‡ชๅˆ†ใ‚’ๅ……ๅฎŸใ•ใ›ใ‚‹ใจใฆใ‚‚ๆฐ—ๆŒใกใฎ่‰ฏใ„่กŒ็‚บใ ใ‹ใ‚‰ใƒปใƒปใƒปใจ่€ƒใˆใพใ—ใŸใ€‚ใ‚ฟใƒˆใ‚ฅใƒผใฏ็‰นใซๅ้“ๅพณใช่ฑกๅพดใซใ‚‚ใชใ‚Šๅพ—ใพใ™ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€็”Ÿใพใ‚Œๅค‰ใ‚ใฃใฆๆ‚ชไบ‹ใ‚’ๅฅฝใ‚€ใ‚ˆใ†ใซใชใฃใŸๅฝผๅฅณใŸใกใฎใ‚ใ–ใ™ใƒญใƒผใƒซใƒขใƒ‡ใƒซใชใฎใงใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใญใ€‚ ใ€€้šผไบบใ‚„ใ‚ซใƒซใƒ†ใƒซใซๅพ“ใ†ไปฅๅค–ใฏ็คพไผšใฎๆŸ็ธ›ใ‹ใ‚‰่งฃๆ”พใ•ใ‚Œใ€่‡ช็”ฑใซใชใฃใŸๅฝผๅฅณใŸใกใฏๆด—่„ณใ•ใ‚Œใฆๅนธใ›ใ‚’ๆ„Ÿใ˜ใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใฎใงใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€ใพใ™ใพใ™้šผไบบใ‚„ใ‚ซใƒซใƒ†ใƒซใธใฎๅฟ ่ช ๅฟƒใŒ้ซ˜ใพใ‚‹ๅฅฝๅพช็’ฐใ‚’็”Ÿใ‚“ใงใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚ ใ€€ใใ—ใฆใ€ใ‚‚ใฃใจใ‚ซใƒซใƒ†ใƒซใฎๅ‹ขๅŠ›ใ‚’ๅข—ใใ†ใจๆด—่„ณใ•ใ‚ŒใŸๆง‹ๆˆๅ“กใ‚’ๅข—ใ‚„ใ—ใฆ่กŒใใ€‚่ช ใซ็”Ÿ็”ฃๆ€งใฎ้ซ˜ใ„ใƒ“ใ‚ธใƒใ‚นใƒขใƒ‡ใƒซใซๆ€ใฃใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚ ใ€€ใใ‚“ใช็ฉบๆƒณใ‚’ๆŠฑใ‹ใ›ใฆใใ‚Œใ‚‹ใ“ใฎไฝœๅ“ใฏใ€ใจใฆใ‚‚็ด ๆ™ดใ‚‰ใ—ใ„ใงใ™ใญใ€‚

inaba

As a foot fetish passionist, this is perfection! This chapter as well as Chapter 2 are two of the hottest to me. Please keep smell/foot fetish around if you can. You are a master in it! And it just makes everything so much hotter!

Sebby L

Do you have a plot for season 3? If not, then please use your character episodes to expand on the current lore. We were introduced to many new characters in this season and seeing more of them would be great. You could show us a day in the corrupted police department through Jia's POV. The corruption process of Mei to show us how tattoos, piercings and outfits are chosen. Including a training session (maybe with Hye-jin Choi as teacher?) so she knows the basic skills of a prostitute.

Ruz

Oh great hehehe (^โ–ผ^), I didnโ€™t know there would be a good ending version. Will the good ending be released at the end of the season or later?

Wizard EinS

I would like atleast the main ending to be like Season 1, a proper bad ending. I think that is the expectation with which I have followed the comic from the beginning

SL

That sounds perfect!

Lestatos Lestat

I do love this chapter, maybe one of the best so far. Especially because my best fetishes are corruption, feet and threesome. My only issue is that after all this time ( more than 1 year) I don't feel any empathize with Alex then I don't like the idea that someone stupid like him got a fucking hot harem and wish in a grey ending. In order to have the chance to have a better "villain" who can to empathize in season 3. I don't know if I made myself clear enough. English isn't my first language. In case I will try again to explain Better my thought

ggggggggggggggg

I think it's best to have a bad ending and adding extra chapters for alternative endings. I'm not a huge fan of when a corruption story takes a turn and the antagonist gets what he deserves. Still, might be better to create a poll or something to see what others think.

Kazuto

I can't wait to see her downfall. The strongest of them will be given to the weakest type of men

tychj9m

That's one way to look at it. Kate thought she was fine, but the influence of Maladea might still have lingered, clouding her judgment. However, Kate believed that her best friend, whom she knew best, couldn't completely deceive her. Still, just in case, she searched Mae's desk but found nothing unusual. (This part was not drawn separately in the main comic.) And crucially, there was nothing peculiar about Mae's attire, appearance, or manner of speaking. It would be interesting if the setting you mentioned were included!

Dr. Stein

When I was writing Season 2, I told the readers that this story was created with tragedy as its premise, so I intend to faithfully fulfill this promise. I did briefly consider a gray ending instead of one where everyone is happy. For example, Alex meeting their end through Carter's mutual destruction.

Dr. Stein

ใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ—ใŸ๏ผ ใใ†ใงใ™ใ€‚ๅฝผๅฅณใฎๅผทใ„ๆญฃ็พฉๆ„Ÿใจ่ฒฌไปปๆ„่ญ˜ใ€ๅ‘จๅ›ฒใฎไบบใ‚’ๅŠฉใ‘ใŸใ„ใจใ„ใ†ๅ–„่‰ฏใชๅฟƒใŒๅ่ปขใ™ใ‚Œใฐๆใ‚ใ—ใ„ๆ‚ชๅฅณใซ็”Ÿใพใ‚Œๅค‰ใ‚ใ‚‹ใงใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใ€‚ ใ‚‚ใ—ๅพŒใงใ‚ทใƒผใ‚บใƒณ3ใ‚„ใƒ“ใƒใ‚คใƒณใƒ‰ใ‚นใƒˆใƒผใƒชใƒผใ‚’ๅˆถไฝœใ™ใ‚‹ใ“ใจใซใชใฃใŸใ‚‰ใ€้šผไบบใฎๅ‘ฝไปคใซๅพ“ใฃใฆไป–ใฎใ‚ซใƒซใƒ†ใƒซ็ต„็น”ๅ“กใ‚’ๆฎ‹้…ทใซ่™ๆฎบใ™ใ‚‹ๅ ด้ขใ‚‚ๅ…ฅใ‚ŒใฆใฟใŸใ„ใงใ™ใญใ€‚

Dr. Stein

ใƒกใƒฉใƒ‡ใ‚ขใฎ้–‹็™บ่€…ใฏ่Šฝไพใงใฏใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚ใ‚ซใƒซใƒ†ใƒซใซๆ‰€ๅฑžใ™ใ‚‹็ ”็ฉถ่€…ใŸใกใŒ้–‹็™บใ—ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚ ใชใœๆด—่„ณใ•ใ‚ŒใŸใ‚ญใƒฃใƒฉใ‚ฏใ‚ฟใƒผใŸใกใฏใ‚ฟใƒˆใ‚ฅใƒผใ‚„ๆฟƒใ„ใƒกใ‚คใ‚ฏใ€้Žๅบฆใซ้œฒๅ‡บใ—ใŸๆœ่ฃ…ใ‚’ๅฅฝใ‚€ใฎใ‹โ€ฆโ€ฆ้ข็™ฝใ„ใƒ†ใƒผใƒžใงใ™ใญใ€‚ๆญฃ็›ดใ€ใ“ใฎ็‚นใซใคใ„ใฆ่ฉณใ—ใ่€ƒใˆใŸใ“ใจใฏใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚ใ—ใ‹ใ—ใ€ใ‚‚ใ†ๅฐ‘ใ—่€ƒใˆใ‚Œใฐใ‹ใชใ‚Š้ข็™ฝใ„่ƒŒๆ™ฏ่จญๅฎšใŒ็”Ÿใพใ‚Œใ‚‹ใฎใงใฏใชใ„ใ‹ใจๆ€ใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚ๆœ€ๅˆใฏใƒใƒคใƒˆใŒๆœ›ใ‚€ๅ—œๅฅฝใซๅˆใ‚ใ›ใฆๅฅณๆ€งใฎๅค–่ฆ‹ใ‚’ๆ”น้€ ใ™ใ‚‹ใจใ„ใ†่จญๅฎšใงใ—ใŸใŒใ€ใƒใƒคใƒˆใŒๆด—่„ณใ—ใฆใ„ใชใ„ๅฅณๆ€งใŸใกใ‚‚ๅŒใ˜ๅ—œๅฅฝใ‚’ๆŒใคใ‚ˆใ†ใซใชใฃใŸใฎใงใ€ไฝ•ใ‹ๅˆฅใฎ็†็”ฑใŒๅฟ…่ฆใงใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใญใ€‚

Dr. Stein

Haha! Thank you! I'll work hard to bring you even more addictive episodes in the future! ๐Ÿ˜

Dr. Stein

Thank you! In the happy ending version, Alex will pay the price he deserves. I also feel quite sorry about bringing Kate down. She's such a great character.

Dr. Stein

I haven't confirmed it yet. He's a brave and strong man, so he might not have fallen into masochism.

Dr. Stein

Thank you for liking that character! While I haven't created a separate story for her, she's set up as a mercenary who's extremely arrogant and has a fierce temper. She was hired by a group that was in conflict with the cartel.

Dr. Stein

ไธๅฅฝๆ„ๆ€๏ผŒๆˆ‘ไธๆ˜Ž็™ฝๆ‚จ็š„ๆ„ๆ€ใ€‚ ๆ˜ฏๅœจ่ชชๆ™บๆ—ปๅœจ่พฆๅ…ฌๅฎค็™ผ็”Ÿๆ€ง้—œไฟ‚็š„ๅ ด้ขๅ—Ž๏ผŸ

Dr. Stein

้žๅธธๆ„Ÿ่ฌ๏ผ

Dr. Stein

That's right. Mei was not brainwashed by Maladea. This happened before Mia got Maladea. Mei just became a pervert; she didn't lose her intellectual abilities. Mei's story will be covered separately someday. I was already thinking about such side stories. Looking at comments on other sites, I saw a comment that said, "Wouldn't it be easy to publicize if the victims' families reported it to the media? Why didn't anyone choose to do that?" Reporters cannot write articles based solely on the claims of victims' families; they must conduct interviews and gather evidence, so they can only circle around the cartel. I would like to write a story about a reporter who gets caught trying to do that.

Dr. Stein

ใ„ใคใ‚‚ๆš–ใ‹ใ„ใ‚ณใƒกใƒณใƒˆใงๅฟœๆดใ—ใฆใใ ใ•ใฃใฆใฉใ†ใ‚‚ใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ™๏ผ ใ‚ซใƒฌใƒณใฏๅฎŒ็’งใซๅ‚ฌ็œ ใซใ‹ใ‹ใฃใŸใฎใงใ€ใ“ใ‚Œใ‹ใ‚‰ใฏใ‚ซใƒŠใจใƒกใ‚คใซ็ฟปๅผ„ใ•ใ‚Œใ‚‹ใ“ใจใซใชใ‚‹ใงใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใ€‚

Dr. Stein

่ฐข่ฐข๏ผไปฅๅŽไนŸไผš็ปๅธธ็”ป็š„๏ผ

Dr. Stein

ๆฒก้”™๏ผŒๅพๅฆๅ—ๅˆฐ็š„ๆด—่„‘ๅ’Œ่ญฆๅฏŸๅ—ๅˆฐ็š„ๆด—่„‘ๆ˜ฏไธไธ€ๆ ท็š„ใ€‚ ๅŽ่€…ไธไผšๅฝขๆˆๅŒ้‡ไบบๆ ผใ€‚

Dr. Stein

๋ณ€ํ•จ์—†์ด ์‘์›ํ•ด์ฃผ์…”์„œ ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹คใ… 

Dr. Stein

Thank you, and I really wanted to design a dress like this!

Dr. Stein

Thank you for your understanding. Just as you said, in times like this I should focus on the people who give me strength. I also think that scene in Chapter 4 is the most erotic one. Someday, Kateโ€”completely corruptedโ€”will recreate that moment again. Youโ€™re right. There may be no one who can save Carter, but Alexโ€™s kingdom will not last forever. I did plan this story as a bad ending, but I donโ€™t want Alex to enjoy a peaceful long life and die comfortably.

Dr. Stein

Thank you! Some of them are the designs I sent to you before.

Dr. Stein

Oh... I've already finished writing the scenario, but that's a pretty interesting idea, too!

Dr. Stein

Thank you very much! That drug is a special hypnosis inducer developed by Mei. Its effect is far stronger than NGT-93, and it takes effect immediately. Mia went to see Mei right after she left the police station. (This happened before Kate instructed Dalia to follow Mia.)

Dr. Stein

Thank you!โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

Dr. Stein

Thank you very much for your thoughtful advice. Indeed, if someone is determined to leak it, there's nothing I can do. I am just one person, and the internet is a vast ocean. I can't go around to every port trying to stop someone from releasing it into the sea. And on the other hand, if my comic truly had no value, no one would bother sharing it. In such times, I think it's a better choice to focus on trying to repay my subscribers who love my work and consistently support me. Seeing myself still dwelling on unnecessary things when I already know the answer shows I still have a long way to go. Haha!

Dr. Stein

Thank you for your encouragement! It's a great help. I'm always deeply contemplating how to create good work, but ultimately, I think I need to find the answers myself. I will deeply engrave the advice to trust my own intuition. I was going to dress Kate in traditional attire, but Rin would also look great!

Dr. Stein

Thanks a lot! I'm so grateful that you promote my comics widely!

Dr. Stein

Thank you very much! I'm so happy! The ones corrupting Kate are May and Mia, but the one tormenting and training Kate is Jane. Not in reality, but in Kate's subconscious.

Dr. Stein

Whether Mei wore stockings or not was an intentional choice, but the color of her coat wasn't meticulously planned. Still, I'm very happy that you noticed and appreciated such small details! For people like you, I try to put effort into every single prop, not just glossing over them. Mei's story will be published someday. I plan to upload it when I have time and good ideas come to mind. The scene where Rin and Mei meet appears in episode 15, so please look forward to it! Rin's story will also be made into a PDF and uploaded to Fanbox later.

Dr. Stein

Thank you so much for your advice! I didn't realize those methods existed. I'll have to consider them. Since some people wanted to download individual panels, I've always uploaded them separately until now. I'll have to think about that a bit.

Dr. Stein

้žๅธธๆ„Ÿ่ฐข! ๅœจ็ฌฌไบŒๅญฃไธญ๏ผŒๅพๅฆๅฐ†ๅ–ไปฃ้‡‘้พ™ๆˆไธบไธป่ฆๅๆดพใ€‚ ๅพˆ้ซ˜ๅ…ดๆ‚จๅฏนๅฐ้ข็ป™ไบˆๅฅฝ่ฏ„! ๆˆ‘ไนŸๆƒณๅœจ2026ๅนดๆ˜ฅ่Š‚็”ปๅ…ถไป–่ง’่‰ฒ็ฉฟ็€ไผ ็ปŸๆœ่ฃ…็š„ๆ ทๅญใ€‚

Dr. Stein

Claro. Cuando tenga tiempo, tambiรฉn me gustarรญa convertir la historia de Mei en una novela.

Dr. Stein

ยกMuchas gracias! Claro. Si es posible, me gustarรญa traducir la temporada 1 y el resto de los episodios al espaรฑol tambiรฉn.

Dr. Stein

Thanks a lot! Thank you for consistently loving my comics even if the story doesn't unfold in the direction you want.

Dr. Stein

Thank you for the high praise! Actually, at first, it was a comic that started with a simple inspiration, but unexpectedly, readers liked my work, and they showed deep interest in the world and characters I created, giving me their unreserved support. So, I'm putting much more effort into the scenario and direction, wanting to repay that support. I definitely want to bring it to a great conclusion.

Dr. Stein

Thank you! Originally, the scene you mentioned was scheduled to appear in episode 15, but because some people wanted to see Kate's brainwashing process, it was postponed to episode 16. Like Mia in the Season 1 behind-the-scenes story, Kate will be trapped in a machine and have her mind re-engineered. After the machine brainwashing is complete, Kate will forget everything that happened that day and return to work at the police station.

Dr. Stein

Maybe we get a 'grey' bad ending with Alex in prison, the cartel destroyed but 'cured' characters like Mia etc. are still secretly his bitches? Or everyone stays corrupted but Alex is killed in a revenge plot by Carter or a Rival?

Ruz

ๆ˜ฏ็š„๏ผŒๆฒก้”™ใ€‚ๆ™บๆ•ไผš้€ๆธ่ขซ้ป‘ๆš—ๅžๅ™ฌ๏ผŒๆˆไธบ้‡‘้พ™ๅฟ ๅฎž็š„ไป†ไบบใ€‚ ่ฐข่ฐขๆ‚จ็š„ๅคธๅฅ–๏ผ

Dr. Stein

Thank you! I'll make episode 15 more fun!

Dr. Stein

ๆ˜ฏ๏ผŒๅฏน็š„ใ€‚

Dr. Stein

The more noble character a heroine has, the greater the sense of contrast when she fell.

Dr. Stein

ๅฅนๆ˜ฏ้‡‘้พ™็š„็œŸๆญฃๆŽฅ็ญไบบใ€‚

Dr. Stein

์ œ ์บ๋ฆญํ„ฐ๋“ค์ด ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ํŽจ๋” ์ผ๋ณ€๋„๋ผ๋Š” ์ง€์ ์ด ์žˆ์–ด์„œ ๋งˆ์กฐ ์บ๋ฆญํ„ฐ๋„ ํ•œ๋ฒˆ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด ๋ณด์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹คใ…Žใ…Ž

Dr. Stein

์„œ์—ฐ์ด ๋งˆ์กฐ๋กœ ๋ง๊ฐ€์ง€๋ฉด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ์ง„ํ–‰์ด ์•ˆ๋˜๋Š” ์ธก๋ฉด์ด ์žˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์—, 1๋ถ€์˜ ๊น€์šฉ ๋กค์„ ์ˆ˜ํ–‰ํ•˜๋Š” ํ›„๊ณ„์ž๋กœ ๋งŒ๋“ค๊ณ  ์‹ถ์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹คใ…Žใ…Ž

Dr. Stein

๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค! 15ํ™”์—์„œ๋„ ์นด๋ฆฌ์Šค๋งˆ ์žˆ๋Š” ์„œ์—ฐ์˜ ๋ชจ์Šต์ด ์ด์–ด์งˆ ๊ฒ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!

Dr. Stein

์•„ํ•˜ ์ˆ ใ…Žใ…Ž ๋ช‡๋ช‡ ์žฅ๋ฉด์—์„œ ๋งฅ์ฃผ ๋งˆ์‹œ๋Š” ์žฅ๋ฉด์„ ๋„ฃ์–ด๋ณผ๊นŒ ํ•˜๋‹ค๊ฐ€ ํฌ๊ธฐํ–ˆ์—ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ, ๋‹ค์Œ์— ํ•œ๋ฒˆ ๋„ฃ์–ด๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Dr. Stein

Hellooo! All in all, a great episode. I really like Mei's new, crazy, foot-obsessed personality, it reminded me of episode 4 and 5 where Rin used her divine foot to reactivate Mia's corrupted personality (side note: more lesbian foot-play like in eps. 4 and 5 would be highly appreciated). But it feels off that Kate lets her guard down. I mean the whole police department has been brainwashed but maybe it really was because of Maladea. If Kate succumbs, it would be cool if her corrupted personality is unique, reflecting her resilience. For example, she would get a few personality traits that the cartel didn't intend to implant in her. Like she punishes cartel members who abuse their power whom she deems unjust. Or the traits of the cartel are brought to a excessive level. It would resonate with the cartel scientists who didn't exactly know how a more resilient person would react to Maladea. This could create a plot with the scientist that study Kate's physiological responses to Maladea.

Ruz

๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค! ์‚ฌ์‹ค ๊ฐ™์€ ์˜ท์„ ๊ณ„์† ์ž…ํžˆ๋Š” ๊ฒŒ ์บ๋ฆญํ„ฐ์˜ ํŠน์ง•๊ณผ ์ƒ์ง•์„ฑ์„ ์‚ด๋ฆฌ๋Š”๋ฐ ๋” ์ข‹๊ธด ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ, ๊ทธ๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋ฉด ๋งค๋ฒˆ ๋˜‘๊ฐ™์€ ๊ทธ๋ฆผ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๋А๊ปด์งˆ๊นŒ๋ด ๋‹ค์ฑ„๋กœ์šด ์˜์ƒ์„ ์ž…ํžˆ๋ ค ๋…ธ๋ ฅํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฏธ๋ฆผ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์†Œ์„ค๋„ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ๋  ๋•Œ ๊ผญ ๋ฐœ๊ฐ„ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์–ด์š”. ์•„๋งˆ๋„ 2๋ถ€๋กœ ๋‚˜๋‰  ๊ฑฐ ๊ฐ™์€๋ฐ, ์ฒซ ํŽธ์€ ํ•™์ฐฝ์‹œ์ ˆ ๋ฏธ๋ฆผ๊ณผ ์ง€๋ฏผ์ด ์นœํ•ด์ง€๊ฒŒ ๋œ ๊ณผ์ •, ๋‘ ๋ฒˆ์งธ ํŽธ์€ ์„œ์—ฐ์—๊ฒŒ ๊ฒฐ์‚ฌ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ €ํ•ญํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๋๋‚ด ํƒ€๋ฝํ•˜๊ณ  ๋งŒ ๋ฏธ๋ฆผ์˜ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋  ๊ฑฐ์—์š”.

Dr. Stein

๋นŒ๋“œ์—… ๊ณผ์ •์„ ์˜ค๋ž˜ ๊ธฐ๋‹ค๋ ค์ฃผ์‹œ๊ณ , ์žฌ๋ฐŒ๊ฒŒ ๋ด์ฃผ์‹œ๋‹ˆ ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๊ธฐ์˜๋„ค์š”ใ…Žใ…Ž 15ํ™”์—์„œ๋„ ๊ณผ๊ฑฐ์˜ ๋ชจ์Šต๊ณผ ๋Œ€๋น„๋˜๋Š” ์žฅ๋ฉด๋“ค์ด ๋งŽ์ด ๋“ฑ์žฅํ•  ๊ฑฐ์—์š”. ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค๋ฉด ์„œ์—ฐ์ด ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ”๋˜ ๊ธฐ๊ณ„์— ์ด์   ์ง€๋ฏผ์ด ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ€๊ฒŒ ๋˜๊ณ , ์„œ์—ฐ์ด ๋ƒ‰ํ˜นํ•œ ํ‘œ์ •์œผ๋กœ ๊ทธ๋…€๋ฅผ ๋ฐ”๋ผ๋ณด์ฃ . ์‹œ๋‚˜๋ฆฌ์˜ค๋Š” ์–ด์ฐŒ์ €์ฐŒ ์ผ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค๋งŒ, ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ์ด‰๋ฐ•ํ•ด์ ธ ์‹ฌ์  ๋ถ€๋‹ด์ด ๋งค์šฐ ์ปค์กŒ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹คใ…  ๋ถ€๋”” 10์›” ์ผ์ •์„ ์ฐจ์งˆ์—†์ด ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋ฌด์‚ฌํžˆ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ํ–ˆ์œผ๋ฉด ์ข‹๊ฒ ์–ด์š”ใ…Žใ…Ž

Dr. Stein

ๆฌข่ฟŽๅ…‰ไธด๏ผ

Dr. Stein

๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค! ์„œ์—ฐ์˜ ์ดˆ์ฐฝ๊ธฐ ๋ชจ์Šต์„ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๋ฉด ์žฅ์กฑ์˜ ๋ฐœ์ „(?)์ด์ง€์š”ใ…Žใ…Ž ๊ต‰์žฅํžˆ ์žฌ๋ฐŒ๋Š” ๊ฟˆ์ด์—ˆ๋„ค์š”!ใ…Žใ…Ž ์ €๋Š” ๋งค์ผ ์ž‘ํ’ˆ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ๋„ ์ •์ž‘ ์บ๋ฆญํ„ฐ๋“ค์ด ๋‚˜์˜จ ๊ฟˆ์„ ๊ฟ”๋ณธ ์ ์€ ์—†๋Š”๋ฐ... ํ•œ๋ฒˆ ๊ฟ” ๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋„ค์š”ใ…‹ใ…‹ ์ € ๊ฟˆ์—์„œ๋Š” ์ง€๋ฏผ์ด ๊ต‰์žฅํžˆ ๋ถˆํ–‰ํ•˜๊ตฐ์š”... ๋ชจ๋‘ ๋ฏธ์ณ ์žˆ๋Š” ์„ธ์ƒ์—์„œ๋Š” ๊ฐ™์ด ๊ด‘์ธ์ด ๋˜๋Š” ๊ฒŒ ๋œ ๋ถˆํ–‰ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋‚˜ ์‹ถ๋„ค์š”ใ… 

Dr. Stein

Or maybe create an alternative ending for the good ending. So the canon story and ending is the corruption one, but the good ending can be added as an extra 1 or 2 chapters. That's if enough people ask for it.

Kazuto

๋งˆ์กฐ์„ญ์œผ๋กœ ํƒ€๋ฝ ๋„ˆ๋ฌด์ข‹๋„ค์š”

kewok

Almost everyone wants corruption, bad ending, and the author's original intent. That is what built the author's original following. The few who want different direction in the comic just post about it more often and openly

SL

๊ฐœ์ธ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์„œ์—ฐ์ด๋Š” ๋งˆ์กฐ๋กœ ๋ง๊ฐ€์ง€๋Š”๊ฒŒ ์ข‹์€๋ฐ ์•„์‰ฝ๋„ค์š” ๊ทธ๋ž˜๋„ ๊ฐœ์ทจ๋Š” ์•„๋‹์ง€๋ผ๋„ ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์•ž์œผ๋กœ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๋ ์ง€ ๊ธฐ๋Œ€๋˜๋„ค์š”!

fade

I agree with you hehe

Wizard EinS

I know everyone on here posts a lot of about getting a happy ending. I for one am glad you're sticking to your guns and giving us a corruption ending. I enjoy those endings much more. If a corruption story ends in everyone being uncorrupted, is it really a corruption story or is it an uncorruption story? lol Thank you and keep up the good work!!

AgricultreClash

It would be nice to see Alex demise so much.

SANTORYU1989

ๆ„Ÿๆƒณ้…ใ‚Œใพใ—ใŸใ€‚ ่ญฆๅฏŸ็ต„ใ‚ˆใ‚Šใ‚‚ๅ…ˆใซๅ •ใกใฆใ„ใŸ่Šฝ่กฃ ใ“ใ‚Œใฏๆต็Ÿณใซ็›ฒ็‚นใงใ—ใŸใ€‚ ใใ—ใฆใ“ใฎๅ…ˆ่Šฑ่“ฎใฏใฉใ†ๅ •ใกใฆใ„ใใฎใ‹ใ€ๅผทใ„ๆญฃ็พฉๆ„Ÿใ‚’ๆŒใคๅฝผๅฅณใŒๆ‚ชใซๅ่ปขใ—ใŸใ‚‰้šผไบบใฎๅณ่…•ๅ…ผๆ‹ไบบใ€ใ‚ซใƒซใƒ†ใƒซใจ้šผไบบใฎ็‚บใซใฉใ‚“ใชๆ‚ชไบ‹ใ‚‚ใ“ใชใ™ใ€ใใ‚“ใชๆ‚ชๅฅณใซๆ‚ชๅ •ใกใ—ใฆๆฌฒใ—ใ„ใงใ™ใญใ€‚ ๆ›ดๆ–ฐ้…ใ‚Œใฆใ‚‚่‰ฏใ„ใฎใงใŠ่บซไฝ“ใซใŠๆฐ—ใ‚’ไป˜ใ‘ใฆไธ‹ใ•ใ„

kirito

์ด๋ฒˆํ™” ์„œ์—ฐ์ด ์—„์ฒญ ๋ฉ‹์žˆ๊ณ  ๊ผด๋ฆฌ๋„ค์š”! ์•ž์œผ๋กœ๋„ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์žฅ๋ฉด ๋งŽ์ด ๋ณด์—ฌ์ฃผ์Ž„์š” ์ž‘๊ฐ€๋‹˜!!!!

Hํžˆํ„ฐ

Iโ€™d like to see some aspects of Human Furniture (ไบบ้–“ๅฎถๅ…ท) used while Kate cannot control her body.

c

ใ€€่ญฆๅฏŸใ‚ˆใ‚Šใ‚‚ๅ…ˆใซ่ŠฝไพใŒๅ •ใกใฆใ„ใŸใจใชใ‚Œใฐใ€ใƒกใƒฉใƒ‡ใ‚ขใฎ้–‹็™บ่€…ใ‚‚่Šฝไพใชใฎใ‹ใ‚‚็Ÿฅใ‚Œใพใ›ใ‚“ใญใ€‚ ใ€€็ง‘ๅญฆๆœๆŸปใฎใ‚จใ‚ญใ‚นใƒ‘ใƒผใƒˆใ‹ใ‚‰ใ‚ซใƒซใƒ†ใƒซใฎใƒžใƒƒใƒ‰ใ‚ตใ‚คใ‚จใƒณใƒ†ใ‚ฃใ‚นใƒˆใธใจๆ‚ชๅ •ใกใ—ใŸใƒปใƒปใƒปใ€‚ ใ€€่Šฝไพใฎๆด—่„ณ้Ž็จ‹ใ‚‚ใ„ใคใ‹่ฆ‹ใฆใฟใŸใ„ใ‚‚ใฎใงใ™ใ€‚ ใ€€ใใ‚Œใซใ—ใฆใ‚‚ใ‚ซใƒซใƒ†ใƒซใฎๆง‹ๆˆๅ“กใฏใฟใ‚“ใชใ‚ฟใƒˆใ‚ฅใƒผๅฅฝใใซใชใ‚‹ใฎใงใ™ใญ๏ผˆ็ด ๆ™ดใ‚‰ใ—ใ„ใ€‚ใใ†ใชใ‚‹ๆ€่€ƒๅ›ž่ทฏใ‚’่ฆ—ใ„ใฆใฟใŸใ„๏ผ‰ใ€‚ ใ€€่Šฑ่“ฎใ‚‚่ฟ‘ใ„ๅฐ†ๆฅใใฎใƒกใƒณใƒใƒผใซใชใฃใฆใ€่Šฝไพใ‚„็™พ่Šฑใจใฎๆญชใ‚“ใ ๅ‹ๆƒ…ใ‚’ๅพฉๆดปใ•ใ›ใ‚‹ใฎใงใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใ€‚ใƒฏใ‚ฏใƒฏใ‚ฏใ—ใพใ™ใ€‚

inaba

๋‹ด๋ฐฐ๋งŒ ๋“ฑ์žฅํ•˜๋‹ˆ๊นŒ ์•„์‰ฌ์šด๋ฐ ์ˆ ๋„ ๋“ฑ์žฅํ–ˆ์œผ๋ฉด ์ข‹๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹คใ…Žใ…Ž

๋„ค์ธ์ŠคNeins

Wonderful! Already excited for the next episode! Your episodes are like my own maladea, hahaha.

maruo

My sincere congratulations because the episode was great, but I hope it doesn't end with Kate becoming another of Alex's slaves. I know it will, but I hope someday there's a story or mini-short where Alex gets what he deserves. Oh, and take your time, Dr. Stein. It's better to be sure when creating stories than to rush into them. Good job and have a nice month hehe.

Wizard EinS

Great episode. In the end, will Carter also be brainwashed into a masochist like Jane's husband?

SL

Wish we had a whole part dedicated to Rosemary breaking.

Lewd Bringer

That's a possibility, but I think Mei would have recognized Maladea since she is a neuroscientist. In my opinion it is more plausible if Mia suddenly injected Mei with the syringe when she lowered her guard.

Lord Darkar

and she brought a plant as a "gift" to Mei

caboclo caboclo

Or maybe Mia went back to Mei's lab for a "check" because she was afraid "some traces of the brainwashing may have still remained inside her head".

Lord Darkar

่ฏท้—ฎไปŽๅ“ชไธ€่ฏๅผ€ๅง‹ๅฑ•็ŽฐๅŠžๅ…ฌๅฎค็š„ไธชไบบๅœบๆ™ฏ

Pk

ๅค่ฃไนŸๆ„Ÿ่ฆบๅพˆๆฃ’!! ไฝœ่€…ๅ‰ตไฝœไน‹้ค˜ไนŸ่ฆๆณจๆ„่บซ้ซ”ๅ–”~ ๅŠ ๆฒน!! ้€ฃ่บซ็ตฒ่ฅชๅพˆๆฃ’!!

FB

and other side stories...Maybe a TV crew with a camera and a female reporter going to do a history on the police station on complains from the neighbours....the real "higher-ups" above Alex, and maybe his "too much" expansion....side stories with the amazing characters you already created.

caboclo caboclo

Once again, incredible. Love Mia close exhales on Kate and Mei's submission. I don't know if Mei was subdued with Maladea or other drug, since with Dhalia Mia said that was the first time that she use the new drug. So Mei should be between Dhalia and the police station. And I don't know if Mei still can be a scientist, if she had retain her ability (it seens since she was able to pretend to be ok) together with be Mia's slave. You wanna advance in Kate but you in this season really create a universe. Take care of your health and hope your supporting fan base still growing despite piracy so you can keep going. Hope in the future we see this flashback of Mia, still brunette and pretending to be innocent, betraying Mei inviting her to a "thank you" dinner and them drugging her with a pill and Maladea.

caboclo caboclo

14่ฉฑใฎๅ…ฌ้–‹ใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚ ๆ—ขใซๅ •่ฝใฆใ„ใŸ่Šฝไพใ€ๅฑ•้–‹ใ‚‚ๆœ่ฃ…ใ‚‚ๆœ€้ซ˜ใงใ™ใ€‚ ่Šฑ่“ฎใ‚‚ๅฐ‘ใ—ใฅใคใƒกใƒฉใƒ‡ใ‚ขใซๆŠ—ใˆใชใใชใฃใฆใใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ‚ˆใ†ใงใ™ใญใ€‚ใ“ใ‚Œใ‹ใ‚‰ๅฝผๅฅณใŒใฉใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใซๅ •่ฝใ—ใฆใ„ใใ‹ๆฅฝใ—ใฟใงใ™ใ€‚ ๅผ•ใ็ถšใใ€ๅฟœๆดใ—ใฆใ„ใพใ™๏ผ

hyuha

ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ž˜ ๋ณด๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์ž‘๊ฐ€๋‹˜!! ์ €๋Š” ๋ฏธ๋ฆผ์ด๊ฐ€ ์ง€๋ฏผ์ด ํƒ€๋ฝ ํ•  ๋•Œ ์ฆˆ์Œ์— ๊ฐ™์ด ํƒ€๋ฝํ•  ์ค„ ์•Œ์•˜๋Š”๋ฐ ์—„์ฒญ๋‚œ ๋ฐ˜์ „์ด๋„ค์š” ใ…‹ใ…‹ ํŠนํžˆ ๋ƒ„์ƒˆ๋ฌ˜์‚ฌ๋„ ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ์ข‹์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ใ…Žใ…Ž ๋ฏธ๋ฆผ์ด์˜ ํƒ€๋ฝ๊ณผ์ •์ด ๋‹ด๊ธด ์†Œ์„ค๋„ ๋‚˜์™”์œผ๋ฉด ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฐœ์ธ์ ์ธ ์†Œ๋ง์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ใ…Žใ…Ž ๋˜๋‹ค๋ฅธ ํฌ์ธํŠธ๋Š” ์ž‘๊ฐ€๋‹˜๊ป˜์„œ ์˜์ƒ์„ ๋˜๊ฒŒ ๊ณ ๋ฏผํ•˜์‹œ๋Š” ํ‹ฐ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์ด ๋‚˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์บ๋ฆญํ„ฐ๋งˆ๋‹ค ์•ˆ๊ฒน์น˜๊ฒŒ ํ€„๋ฆฌํ‹ฐ ์ข‹์€ ์˜์ƒ์„ ๋ณผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด ๋” ์ข‹์€ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์š” ใ…Žใ…Ž ์ฐฝ์ž‘์ž์˜ ์ž…์žฅ์œผ๋กœ ๋ณด๋ฉด ์ž‘ํ’ˆ์ด ๋ง‰ํžŒ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒŒ ์ •๋ง ํฐ ์ŠคํŠธ๋ ˆ์Šค์ด์‹ค ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ใ…  ์–ผ๋ฅธ ์ข‹์€ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๊ฐ€ ์ƒ๊ฐ๋‚˜์…จ์Œ ์ข‹๊ฒ ๋„ค์š” ใ…  ๋‹ค์Œ ํ™”๋„ ์žฌ๋ฏธ์žˆ๊ฒŒ ๊ฐ์ƒํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!

๋ฟก๋ฟก์ด

็บข่‰ฒๆŒ‡็”ฒ็š„้ป‘ไธ่„šๅคชๆ€งๆ„Ÿไบ†

ๅคงๅญฆ็”ทๅญๅœจๆ ก็”Ÿ็š„ๆ—ฅๅธธ

์˜ค๋Š˜๋„ ์žฌ๋ฐŒ๊ฒŒ ๋ดค์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์ž‘๊ฐ€๋‹˜. ์ผ์ •์ด ๋Šฆ์ทจ์ง€๋”๋ผ๋„ ๊ดœ์ฐฎ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ํ•ญ์ƒ ์‘์›ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์ž‘๊ฐ€๋‹˜

ํ—ค๊ตฌ

ๆ„Ÿ่ง‰s1ๅ’Œs2็š„ๆด—่„‘ๆœ‰ๆ‰€ไธๅŒ๏ผŒs1็‘ž็ ”็š„ๆด—่„‘ๆ˜ฏๆคๅ…ฅไบ†ไธ€ไธช้‚ชๆถ็š„ๆ–ฐไบบๆ ผ๏ผŒs2ๅฅณ่ญฆไปฌๅ’Œ็พŽ็ณ็š„ๆด—่„‘ๆ›ดๅƒๆ˜ฏๆ‰ญๆ›ฒไบ†ๆœฌๆฅ็š„ไบบๆ ผ๏ผŒs1็š„ๆด—่„‘ๅฏไปฅ้€š่ฟ‡ๅ”ค้†’ๆœฌๆˆ‘่งฃ้™ค๏ผŒs2็š„็œ‹่ตทๆฅๆ˜ฏๆ— ๅฏๆ•‘่ฏไบ†

john

The combination of historical costumes and stockings is absolutely stunning. The clothes of Ep14 is so hot and canโ€™t wait for the historical versions

unclelaw

I agree, now that he will be alone after the fall Kate. I hate that for him so much that he has always done right by his choices. I hope in the future of the series besides the good ending in light novel. That you a plan for the down fall of the Cartel or Alex meeting a misery end.

SANTORYU1989

Leaks always sucks. I see all the hard work you do to create this wonderful story. As a writer myself i find when struggling to continue it's always good to look back at what you achieved. Chapter 4 page 16 is the tease you had that always peeked my curiosity when Kate falls. I love the design you did there. So in all I hope you find that spark cause this chapter heightened me for the curiosity of Kate fall. Deep down I know in the end even if all that fails there's always someone out their to rise up to stop the bad eventually. Don't know who that might be but Carter needs a hero. Keep up the great work and can't wait to read the next issue.

qarlf

its nice that mei got more tattoos and bigger ones than mia

Pornhwa

I got to know his work because of piracy and here I am

Pornhwa

one thing that could be great is see the process of mia and other girls getting tattoos and piercings

Pornhwa

I want see the tattoos and piercings that kate will have. the ideas for both are incredible

Pornhwa

great chapter. I would like see the tattoo designs of the girls in the end of the chapter.

Pornhwa

Since you're having trouble with the next episode, a good idea would be to take advantage of Kate following orders and let her obey Mia to do naughty things, It would be nice to see this version of Kate, the embarrassing one, struggling not to do the things that Mia ask for her. Since we all going to see Kate's downfall, it would be perfect to see her "enjoying herself" against her will.

Lestatos Lestat

Amazing twists again in the Story! hadnยดt thought that we see Mia already now again in person...thought more like a phone call or video chat...so to see her in person...and also in a dom role is really impressive and a nice touch :D And that Mei is already since some Episodes ago in the hand of the cartel :O Wonder also what she had there as "Medice" since Kateยดs Body seems not anymore to be hers since she follow instantly the commands of Mia

DesiLu

<3<3<3

Vandita

Damn, you always manage to outdo yourself every upcoming chapter. Amazing as always! I know you may have heard it many times already and I hope you can get over the stress someday. But I think you'll come to realize that no matter how tough you deal with leak issues, there'll always be a way. And I hope that you also see that no matter what kind of leaks there are, people will still support and appreciate the hard work you put into it, but totally understand if the numbers are still not up to your satisfaction. I know it must suck to see your month's work being put out like that. But that also shows that you have made such a quality work anticipated by everyone, it's bound to happen. I hope you take care of your health. Can't wait for more of your stories.

lannas

Mia coming in hot (in more ways than one)! She has to though, as even with everything that's happened up till this point Kate is still going to put up the most fight out of all her victims. I can also totally understand how the next chapter would be difficult not because you don't know what to do but rather you have so many different options to choose. Go with your gut instinct though! All us readers have our own ideas but there is a reason we support and cheer on each new chapter, so hopefully you can find a path that satisfies you and we're happy to follow along! Speaking of us readers with our ideas though, historical drama Mia is hot as hell and I'm hoping for Rin to make the next appearance in costume! Happy writing and drawing and thanks for another wonderful chapter.

The_Stork

Great analysis! Mei is the character that stands up the most for me. Her concept is so good, and she is the main actress of the best scene of the comic. I didnโ€™t notice all these details, but Iโ€™m sure Dr. Stein carefully planned everything. Meiโ€™s story deserves to be made in comic version, a novel would feel like a bit of a waste of potential to me. I also would love to see an interaction between Mei and Rin. It would be great if Rin and Mei, along the IWA terrorist group took control of the Neuroscience Research Institute, brainwashed all the other scientists and estabilshed there the headquarter of the cartel research, where new brainwashing methods are invented. I hope Dr. Stein can also cover this part later on.

Lord Darkar

Oh, I also want to note that the historical-drama version of Mia is awesome. Doing some of the characters I'm that style sounds like a lot of fun. I appreciate that the story is committing to corrupting Kate and having all the females fall to depravity. It's honestly a great feeling knowing that the story is going to commit to it's corruption themes even by the end of the story. One last thing. Would it be possible to get the Rin backstory web posting converted to a pdf? it's the only backstory, I think, that is still not in a pdf or png. And it would be nice to get it as a pdf to go along with the story collection. Just a thought. Take care of yourself.

Vulcan64

Ahh! You have made yet another awesome chapter Dr. Stein ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธโ€๐Ÿ”ฅ Thank you for all the amazing work so far. Im gonna try to tell all my friends on discord about this series.

CaptainOfNumeno

This is a masterpiece! In my opinion, one of the bests releases by far! The page when Kate listen "SIT" it's amazing! It's the great moment of the heroine's downfall. It all came to this very biggest moment, and I got say, fantastic work that you've done in the previews chapters to came to this! Mei corrupted are incredible sexy! Can't wait to see Mia and Mei "training" Kate!

Lestatos Lestat

So I love the subtle details you put into Mei's outfit that hint that she had been brainwashed. The darker lab coat to contrast with her original white lab coat. The what looks like black stockings on Mei when she was bare legged before. And then the reveal that the stockings are actually a full body slave stocking. Wow. Just wow. It's really a thing of beauty. I'm so excited to see where you go from here with the story. Also, I really think you should consider doing a chapter or two on how Mei was targeted and corrupted by Mia and the cartel. On top of being sexy, it would really drive home the consequences of Kate's actions. Or in this case, her inaction to properly protect Mei from possible cartel retribution. Also, it would be nice to see Rin's perspective as Mei directly was involved in taking corrupted Mia away from her. Also, Rin could have an interesting perspective as a brainwasher meeting a brain specialist in Mei. Anyways keep up the good work.

Vulcan64

I haven't read the episode yet, but my attention was caught by your trouble with piracy. As someone that is considering starting my own monthly corruption story account, I have been thinking about it quite a bit. The first place to start would be to stop providing individual panels - just makes it easier to post them online. The next thing would be to password protect the PDF and not allow it to be edited. You could provide the password in the folder with the PDF downloads. PDF format is not totally secure, but the harder you make the effort, the more someone may give up the attempt. Just some ideas. Off to read the episode now.

SF666

ๆ— ๆฏ”็ฒพๅฝฉ็š„ไธ€่ฏ๏ผ็‘žๅฆ็™ปๅœบ๏ผŒๆถๅ •ๅฅณไบบ่Œƒๅ่ถณ๏ผŒๅ’Œไน‹ๅ‰้ข„ๆƒณ็š„ไธ€ๆ ท๏ผŒ็”ฑๅ…ถๆถๅ •็พŽ็ณไนŸ้žๅธธ็š„้กบ็†ๆˆ็ซ ๏ผๆŽฅไธ‹ๆฅๅˆ่ฏฅๆ˜ฏๆ— ๆฏ”็„ฆๆ€ฅๅ’ŒๆœŸๅพ…็€้‡‘้พ™่ฐƒๆ•™ๆŠฅๅคๆ™บๆ•็š„ๆˆ็ ๅผ€ๅง‹ไธŠๆผ”๏ผŒ่พ›่‹ฆStein่€ๅธˆ็š„่พ›่‹ฆๅˆ›ไฝœไบ†๏ผๅฐ้ข็š„ๅค่ฃ…้ฃŽๆ ผไนŸ้žๅธธ่‰ฒๆƒ…๏ผŒ่ฎฉไบบๆตฎๆƒณ่”็ฟฉ๏ผŒๅ›ด็ป•ๅคไปฃ็š„ๆƒ…่Š‚ๅ’Œไบบ่ฎพๅฑ•ๅผ€ไนŸๆ˜ฏๆžๅฅฝ็š„๐Ÿฅฐ

้›จๆœˆไบ‘

Otra duda habrรก una mini historia donde muestres como corrompieron a Mei?

Alvarez Dรญaz

Increรญble la historia ya quiero ver la cara de carter cuando se quede sin nadie y menos con su hermana, espero que no te estreses trabajando no importa que el capรญtulo lleguรฉ tarde siempre y cuando no se a las carreras las cosas salen bien saludos ๐Ÿ‘ Duda habrรก escena en el club de stripper y los demรกs capitulos como la temporada 1 y parte de la dos se traducirรกn a espaรฑol?

Alvarez Dรญaz

So we finally see the return of Mia and back to her blond self. Kate will eventually fall to the lust and be a loyal bitch to the cartel. You been doing great work and keep up. I enjoy your designs and stuff. Still no matter what happens at the end I still look forward to the good ending light novel story in the future that gaves us hope for our boy Carter.

SANTORYU1989

The best episode of an erotic comic ever published. Mei's betrayal, Mia's return, Kate's defeat... Smoking Hypnosis finally reached its climax. The story started off with a very simple premise and as time went by, it evolved into something much more deep and complex. There isn't a single aspect of this comic that has not improved through time: plot, characters' personalities and designs, world-building, story-telling, sex and action scenes, character management, art... It's almost incredible that this is your first publication. I wonder how far you will go and what heights you will reach. I'm sure a glorious future awaits you. Congratulations for this masterpiece you created, and thank you. Once again.

Lord Darkar

Fantastic as always! I didn't expect Mei to be reduced to such a bitch in heat but it was very hot. I can't wait to see how Kate's corruption will go on. Her expressions as the smoke affected her were really sexy! At first i thought that the drug would also make her forget this day, besides lowering her defenses, so when she got back to work tomorrow, Jane and the officers would slowly work on corrupting and acclimating to the new etiquette but i get the feeling you have something else in mind. I can't wait to see what it is and I am sure it will surpass our expectations just like you do with every chapter. That being said, in which chapter will Kate be going back to the police station? I can't wait to see her interacting with her corrupted colleagues. Also regarding your struggles with the scenario I don't think many of us would mind a delay. Please take care of your health and get the appropriate creative time you need to continue this masterpiece! ๐Ÿ’ช

Udong

็พŽ็ณ็š„ๆœ่ฃ…ๅฅฝ่ฏ„๐Ÿ‘๏ผŒๆ™บๆ•ๅ •่ฝๅŽ๏ผŒๅฏ่ƒฝๆœ€ๅคšๆ่ฟฐไธ‹ไฟกๅ‹็š„ๅฎŒๅ…จๅคฑ่ดฅ่ฟ™ไธช็ณปๅˆ—ๅฐฑๅˆ’ไธŠๅฅๅทไบ†ๅงใ€‚็พŽ็ณ็š„่ฐƒๆ•™ๅฏนไฝ“ๆถฒไธŠ็˜พ็š„ๅ‰งๆƒ…ๅพˆๅƒๆˆ‘็”จAIๅ†™้ป„่‰ฒๅฐ่ฏดๅซAIๆŠŠ่ฎพๅฎš่ง’่‰ฒ็š„ๆ€ง็™–ๆ”นๅ˜็š„่ฟ‡็จ‹๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿคฃใ€‚ๆŽฅไธ‹ๆฅ็œŸ็š„ๅŠ ้€Ÿๅ •่ฝ่ฟ‡็จ‹็„ถๅŽ่ฟ™ไธช็ณปๅˆ—ๅฐฑๅฎŒ็ป“ๅ—๏ผŸ

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excellent work๏ผit is so nice to see mia again๏ผŒcant wait to see the next eposide

gyx

์™€์šฐ.. ๋ง์”€ํ•˜์…จ๋˜๋Œ€๋กœ ๋ณธ๊ฒฉ์ ์œผ๋กœ ํ„ฐ์ง€๊ธฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๋Š” ํ›„๋ฐ˜๋ถ€์˜ ์ž๊ทน์ด ์žฅ๋‚œ์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๊ตฐ์š”! ์„œ์—ฐ์ด์˜ ์„ธ๋‡Œ๋งˆ์ € ํ’€์—ˆ๋˜ ๋˜‘๋˜‘ํ•˜๋˜ ์ ˆ์นœ์˜ ์—ญ์„ธ๋‡Œ์กฐ๊ต๋œ ๋ชจ์Šต๊ณผ ๊ทธ๋กœ์ธํ•ด ๊ทธ ๊ฐ•ํ•˜๋˜ ์ง€๋ฏผ์˜ ์ฒ˜์Œ์œผ๋กœ ๋ฌด๋ ฅํ•ด์ง„ ๋ชจ์Šต์ด ์ •๋ง ์ž๊ทน์ ์ด๊ณ  ๊ผด๋ฆฟํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค! ์ „ํŽธ์—์„œ ํ˜ผ์ž์„œ ํ•จ์ •๋งˆ์ € ๋šซ๊ณ  ํƒˆ์ถœํ–ˆ๋˜ ๋ชจ์Šต๊ณผ ๋Œ€๋น„๋˜์–ด ๊ผด๋ฆฟํ•จ๊ณผ ์ž๊ทน์ด ๋” ํฐ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋•Œ๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•ด ์ฐจ๊ณก์ฐจ๊ณก ์Œ“์œผ์‹  ๋นŒ๋“œ์—…์ด ๋น›์„ ๋ฐœํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๋„ค์š”. ใ…Žใ…Žใ…Ž ๋‹ค์ŒํŽธ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ธฐ๋Œ€๊ฐ์— ๊ฐ€์Šด์ด ๋‘๊ทผ๋‘๊ทผํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ถ€๋”” ์ถ”์„ ์ฆ๊ฒ๊ฒŒ ์ž˜ ๋ณด๋‚ด์‹œ๊ณ  ์‹œ๋‚˜๋ฆฌ์˜ค๋กœ ๊ณ ๋ฏผํ•˜์‹œ๋Š” ๋ถ€๋ถ„๋„ ๋ปฅ ๋šซ๋ฆฌ์‹œ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ”๋ผ๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค~!

ํŠธ์ด๋‚˜๋ฆฌ

ไธ‹ไธ€้›†้’ˆๅฏนๆ™บๆ•็š„ๆด—่„‘ๅฐฑ่ฆๅผ€ๅง‹ไบ†ๅ—

john

Kate doesn't know it yet but she's the perfect slut for fat ugly men. Made to be degraded by the horniest virgin lowlifes

tychj9m

่ฟ™่ฏๅฎžๅœจๆ˜ฏๅคชๆฃ’ไบ†๏ผŒ็‘ž็ ”ๅทฒ็ปๅฎŒๅ…จๆˆไธบไบ†้‚ชๆถๅฅณ็Ž‹

john

์•„, ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋ณ„๊ฐœ๋กœ ์žฌ๋ฐŒ๋Š” ๊ฟˆ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋ฅผ ๊ฟจ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ํ™”๋ž€ ์ œ๋ชฉ์œผ๋กœ ์˜ฌ๋ผ์˜จ ๊ฑด๋ฐ, ์˜ˆ์ „์— ๋‚˜์™”๋˜ ๊น€์šฉ ์ผ๋‹น์˜ ์•„์ง€ํŠธ์˜€๋‚˜, ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๊ณณ์—์„œ ์ •์•„๊ฐ€ ๋‚˜์™€ 'ํ‘œ์ฐฝ ์ˆ˜์—ฌ์‹'์„ ํ•œ๋‹ค๋”๊ตฐ์š”. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋“ฑ์žฅํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์€ ์•Œ๋ชธ์œผ๋กœ ํŒ”๋‹ค๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ฌถ์ธ ์ฑ„ ๊ทธ๊ณณ์„ ํ›คํžˆ ๋“œ๋Ÿฌ๋‚ด๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์ง€๋ฏผ. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๋ˆˆ๋™์ž๊ฐ€ ํ…Œ๋‘๋ฆฌ๋งŒ ๋ถ‰๊ฒŒ ๋ฌผ๋“ค์–ด ์žˆ๊ณ  ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ๋“  ๋ฌถ์ธ ๊ฑธ ํ’€์–ด๋‚ด๋ ค๊ณ  ๋ฐ”๋™๊ฑฐ๋ฆฌ์ง€๋งŒ ๊น€์šฉ ์ผ๋‹น&์˜› ๋™๋ฃŒ๋“ค์€ ๊ทธ์ € ๋น„์›ƒ์„ ๋ฟ. ๋ˆˆ๋™์ž ํ…Œ๋‘๋ฆฌ๋งŒ ๋นจ๊ฐ„ ๊ฑด ์•ฝ์„ ๊ฐœ๋Ÿ‰ํ–ˆ๋Š”์ง€ ์œก์ฒด๋งŒ ํƒ€๋ฝ์‹œํ‚ค๊ณ  ์˜ฌ๊ณง์€ ์ง€๋ฏผ์˜ ์ด์„ฑ์€ ๋‚จ๊ฒจ๋‘์—ˆ๋˜ ๊ฑฐ์˜€๊ณ ์š”. ๊น€์šฉ์˜ ์กฐ์ง์—์„œ ๊ฒฝ์™ธ์‹ฌ1 ์กฐ๋กฑ9 ๋А๋‚Œ์œผ๋กœ ๋งŒ๋“ค์—ˆ๋‹ค๋‚˜ ๋ญ๋ผ๋‚˜ ์–ด์จŒ๋“  ์ •์•„๊ฐ€ ๋‚˜์™€ '์œ„ ๊ฒฝ์ฐฐ๊ด€์€ ๊ตญ๋ฏผ์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ํ—Œ์‹ ํ•œ ๊ฒฝ์ฐฐ๊ด€'์ด๋ผ ๋น„์•„๋ƒฅ๋Œ€๋ฉฐ ์ด์ œ ์ง€๋ฏผ์—๊ฒŒ ํ‘œ์ฐฝ์„ ์ˆ˜์—ฌํ•œ๋‹ค๋Š”๋ฐ.... ๋ง์ด ๋๋‚˜์ž๋งˆ์ž ๋‹ค์€์„ ๋น„๋กฏํ•œ ์œ ๋‚˜, ์„ธ๋ฆฌ, ์ง€์•„ ๋“ฑ ์—ฌ๊ฒฝ๋“ค์ด ๋”œ๋„ ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฑธ ๋“ค๊ณ  ๋‚˜์˜ค๊ณ , ์†Œ๋ผ๋Š” ์•„์˜ˆ ํŽ˜๋‹ˆ๋ฐ˜์„ ์ž…๊ณ  ์ง€๋ฏผ์„ ์—ด์‹ฌํžˆ ๊ดด๋กญํžˆ๋ฉฐย  'ํ‘œ์ฐฝ ์ˆ˜์—ฌ'๋ฅผ ์‹ค์‹œํ•˜๋”๊ตฐ์š”. ์ง€๋ฏผ์€ ์ €ํ•ญํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ํ•˜ํ•„ ์œก์ฒด๋งŒ ํƒ€๋ฝํ•ด ๋งค์ผ ๋ฐค ์ž์œ„๋กœ ์„ฑ์š•์„ ํ’€๋˜ ํ„ฐ๋ผ ๊ธˆ๋ฐฉ ์พŒ๋ฝ์— ํœฉ์‹ธ์ด๊ณ , ์ด๋‚ด ์˜› ๋™๋ฃŒ๋“ค๊ณผ์˜ ์ถ”์–ต๋“ค์ด ์‚ฐ์‚ฐํžˆ ๋ถ€์„œ์ง€๋ฉฐ ๋๋‚ด ๊บฝ์ด๋ฉด์„œ ์ฐจ๋ผ๋ฆฌ ๋‚˜๋„ ํƒ€๋ฝ์‹œ์ผœ ๋‹ฌ๋ผ๊ณ  ์šธ๋ถ€์ง–์–ด๋ณด์ง€๋งŒ.... ์ •์•„๋Š” '๋„ˆ ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฐ•์งํ•œ ๊ฒฝ์ฐฐ์ด ํ•œ ๋ช… ์ •๋„๋Š” ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ์กฐ์ง๊ณผ ์‹œ๋ฏผ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ๋„์›€์ด ๋œ๋‹ค' ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋‹ตํ•˜๋ฉฐ ๊น€์šฉ์„ ์˜๋ฏธ์‹ฌ์žฅํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋ฐ”๋ผ๋ณด๋”๊ตฐ์š”. ์กฐ์ง(ํƒ€๋ฝํ•œ ๊ฒฝ์ฐฐ)๊ณผ ์‹œ๋ฏผ(๊น€์šฉ ์ผ๋‹น)์—๊ฒŒ ์œ ํฌ๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•ด ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ์กด์žฌ๊ฐ€ ์ง€๋ฏผ์ด์—ˆ์œผ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ์š”. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์ง€๋ฏผ์˜ ์ ˆ๊ทœ๋ฅผ ๋์œผ๋กœ ๋งŒํ™”๊ฐ€ ๋๋‚ฌ๋Š”๋ฐ.... ์ •๋ง ์ƒ์ƒํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ง€๋ฏผ์ด ํƒ€๋ฝํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒŒ ๋งˆ์Œ ์•„ํŒ ๋Š”๋ฐ ์„ค๋งˆ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๊ฟˆ๊นŒ์ง€ ๊พธ๊ฒŒ ๋  ์ค„์€ ๋ชฐ๋ž์ง€๋งŒ์š”. ๋‹ฅํ„ฐ ์ŠคํŠธ๋ ˆ์ธ์ง€์—์„œ ๊ฟˆ์€ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์„ธ๊ณ„์˜ ์ œ๊ฐ€ ๋ณด๋˜ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์ด๋ผ๋Š”๋ฐ ์–ด๋А ํ‰ํ–‰์„ธ๊ณ„์—์„œ์˜ ํก์—ฐ์„ธ๋‡Œ๋Š” ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๊ฒฐ๋ง๋กœ ๋๋‚ฌ๋Š”์ง€๋„ ๋ชจ๋ฅด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ใ…‹ใ…‹ใ…‹ใ…‹

gh di

์ƒˆํŒŒ๋ž—๊ฒŒ ์–ด๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์ˆœ์ง„ํ–ˆ๋˜ ์„œ์—ฐ์ด๊ฐ€ ์–ด๋А์ƒˆ ์ €๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ์„ฑ์žฅํ•˜๋‹ค๋‹ˆ... ๊ฐ๊ฐœ๋ฌด๋Ÿ‰ ํ•˜๋„ค์š”(????) ์ถ”์„ ๊ธฐ๋… ํ•œ๋ณต์งค์ด ์˜ˆ์˜๋„ค์š”. ์›๋ž˜ ํ•œ๋ณต์ด ์ฐธ.... ์•ผ๋ฆ‡ํ•œ ์˜ท์ธ๋ฐ ๋ณธํŽธ์—์„œ๋„ ์ž์ฃผ ๋ดค์œผ๋ฉด ์ข‹๊ฒ ๋„ค์š” ์ถ”์„ ์—ฐํœด ์ž˜ ๋ณด๋‚ด์„ธ์š”!

gh di

ๆฅไบ†๐Ÿ˜

john


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