You wont notice a whole lot of difference on this page.
I decided that the posing on panels 4 and 6 should switch up, since Tobur's and Nele's orientation towards the viewer and the landscape fit better with the flow of the story.
The only other thing is a slight change in dialogue, which is minor, but I feel the final version carries just that slight bit better - obviously, else I'd have stuck to this version, I guess.