Those two pages are the most vulnerable to have major text changements. I also didnt add big sound effects (yet ?). So i guess it's still really wip.
I maybe made her hair a bit too long/dark, not sure if i'd keep this design for the whole doujin, don't hesitate to say what you think about it too :)
Next two pages will be sex beginning, i'll try my best with finishing it earlier than those one c:
jacklt13
2019-06-28 17:48:40 +0000 UTCYuki Hayato
2019-06-27 19:41:07 +0000 UTC