The alien pregnancy comic has become more...
Added 2023-04-21 15:06:03 +0000 UTCI've seen that there are a lot of fetish comics out there that as they get popular get unnecessarily long, feeling pointless and empty, and noticing that this story is only a little less than halfway into its adaptation and that already consists of almost 300 pages for this point, I want to know what you think of it
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As long as each chapter has its own little contained mini story that involves pregnancy/expansion/stuffing I donβt think it will ever feel boring.
Simple Pleasures
2023-04-23 02:54:19 +0000 UTCI don't have the gene that makes me bored when something hangs out in the moment for a bit. Obviously, it means that the experience of something takes a while to get out there, but when all of it is finally in front of us, it makes that experience so much more detailed. I love it, personally, both experiencing something live and then coming onto stuff that is already finished and hundreds of pages long.
DA
2023-04-22 13:29:52 +0000 UTCIt bothers me that its is long but must that its disgust not rained you can always take a break and continue pregnant with the devil I loved to see the continuation
Iruoy
2023-04-21 18:45:20 +0000 UTCIt bothers me that its is long but must that its disgust not rained you can always take a break and continue pregnant with the devil I loved to see the continuation
Iruoy
2023-04-21 18:45:17 +0000 UTCI definitely think you have made a great adaptation of the OG Story. There is a great balance between keeping the original ideas & story along with adding your own ideas and expanding it. Not to mention your art style is so expressive and helps push the expansion elements, and its really cool to see how it has improved over time in the comic. I'm very much invested in this story, and I find it even more impressive because I have read the OG Story and I look forward to how you've adapted it. The only real "Issues" I see is that because of the expanded story parts and because of the "Page-a-day" format of it, sometimes it feels like the story gets a little flat because we may have to wait for an expansion moment, a key story moment, or stuck between a sequence. It's like Tuning in to TV-Show when it airs Vs. Binging a TV Show all at once. TL;DR - You made The Last of Us TV show of "The Alien Pregnancy Story".
MLock
2023-04-21 17:26:50 +0000 UTCSorry for the deleted comment lol, response was too long. But I honestly think the way you expanded upon certain parts have been great while the pacing (while a bit slower to focus on others) still get the point across nicely without being drawn out. Maybe it's the page releases but reading it as a whole, nothing really feels out of place. Which is why I can't wait to see you tackle the later half. π
SoulSurvivur
2023-04-21 16:05:13 +0000 UTC
