MTWY Chapter 24 - Public Release

Chapter 24: Mimulus Cardinalis

One more "Book 2" chapter to go, and it's gon' be big!

All previous links to Chapter 24 will be taken down; please download this one instead. I had to input one of Rion's scenes again (I removed it from the final cut). Also, please note that it's the off-screen chapter that will be released to the public once Chapter 25 is exclusively available.

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Beyond this has been mentioned in the exclusive posts.

This chapter was nerve-wracking for me; even when I posted it, I got jitters. EO, though, did a great job this chapter on his side of things; props to him.

Technical Update

-1055 Renders, 15 animations

-Removed the input name at the start of Book 2 to lessen the immersion break since I'm sure the "None None" name error won't appear anymore, and if it does, we have the name changer feature.

-New choices and exit screen UI; still WIP.

Chapter Update

I have deeply mixed feelings about this chapter. On the one hand, I like it, on the other, I dread the time when the monkeys are all together in one scene. Still, the group scene in this chapter isn't the most difficult to pull off.

This is probably the most I've worked on a chapter script-wise. I kept reading it over and over, but only now, as I woke up and started posting this, did I realize there is one small scene to be added; it's really small and will only add a little, so this chapter is still good to go. Edit: I have added it now, as mentioned above.

There are a few choices to make in this chapter that will affect future scenes. The walkthrough is attached below.

Dev comments

Where do I begin? Excited to proceed forward, I have everything ready after all.

I have completed the story to tell, the only question that I keep asking is: how do I tell it?

Then I tell myself, it's an ongoing story, I'll figure it out. As long as I follow my continuity rule, that nothing published/released storywise will ever be revised, I hate when that crap gets pulled; from anyone. It shows the lack of integrity and dedication in the writing, IMO. Making up as I go along is not my style, that's why even at multiple requests from various people I have not entertained the idea of supporters having any hold on the reins to the plot at all, except for the minor details with little-to-no plot relevance. So please stop asking and wait for Book 4, I'll be happy to collaborate with people and take suggestions then.

Anyway, Chapter 25 will be a breeze, aside from a scene or two that will be quite difficult to pull off.

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