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The first pages of the Imperium comic!

So this took a little bit of time to figure out, which means I haven't put out as much content this week as I would've liked to. Everything's now set for the next week though, so bear with me ;)

I wanted to visually update the style from Peak Performance and previous comics. I was never a huge fan of the text bubbles I used there. I tried going to more conventional text bubbles for this one but that just doesn't fit either so I've just been experimenting with a bunch of different designs.

The whole challenge is a balance between readability, guiding the eye, and style. I don't think I'm quite there yet, so I might have a different design again for the next post, but for now this works and I didn't wanna postpone any longer.

The pages are also a little bit more labour intensive since I wanted to do more with overlapping elements to tie each page together into a cohesive whole. I think it looks very nice tbh. Also another cool thing I'll be doing here is swapping perspectives back and forth between Kayla/Yelena and Breanna/Tatiana. Currently I've made a bunch more pages than I've posted today but they don't all have text yet.

So again, bear me with, busier release schedule coming right up, but I just had to get this squared away first since I really didn't wanna wait to start working on the comic any longer.

The first pages of the Imperium comic! The first pages of the Imperium comic! The first pages of the Imperium comic! The first pages of the Imperium comic! The first pages of the Imperium comic! The first pages of the Imperium comic!

Comments

Nice, looking good! The text space looks a lot better than the bubbles, so good choice with that.

TheGreatCornholio

Love the comic to put context into what's happening.

unicorn


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