TIMEBOUND CHAPTER 1 - PAGES 23,24
Added 2025-05-27 21:42:42 +0000 UTCWOAH! SURPRISE APPEARANCE!
not too happy with 24 yet, I think i'll change some stuff later
Comments
Interesting, thanks for the input! it's supposed to be him busting through the door and doing a 180 but I guess it didn't translate well enough
Timebound
2025-05-28 18:34:05 +0000 UTCoh trust me it gets WORSE.
Timebound
2025-05-28 18:30:52 +0000 UTCI WANT TO SEE TERRY DO A FLIP!!!! Ok i knew Ryzz was going to make a mess but I didn't know he was going to make such a big one, poor little baby he just got scared
Emilionvmm
2025-05-28 01:47:11 +0000 UTCGreat job! Things are moving quickly! My only issue is with the last 2 panels of 24 : Ryzz being spotted from behind and then going through the door with his back first felt weird. Plus, I didn't notice Ryzz's shadows at the beginning of 23. Maybe make his eyes glow or put more focus on him? Aside from that, the comic's rhythm and graphic quality are still top-notch!
Daigoro100
2025-05-27 23:15:15 +0000 UTC
