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Senseofbeing
Senseofbeing

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Apology Message

Dear Readers,

Today’s been a bit of a tough one — I’ll admit I felt a little down and burnt out after reading some of the comments on yesterday’s post. It threw me into a bit of a creative slump. To get back on track, I revisited and reworked some plot points to tighten the pacing and stay true to my original vision.

That said, the process took longer than I expected, so I was only able to release one chapter today. I truly appreciate your patience and understanding.

I’ll do my best to make it up to you by releasing the next chapter as soon as possible by tomorrow. Thank you, as always, for your support and for sticking with me on this journey.

Take care,
Senseofbeing

Comments

Don’t put so much pressure on yourself. You have a good story with tremendous potential. You will always have critics. Just keep writing and it will all come together. Read the comments and farm for good suggestions. Ignore the rest. There will always be “plot holes” that people will find. That is what the editing process is for. Most of the people who subscribe to you are more interested in your story and the ability to imagine themselves in the world you created. Don’t stress and let the words flow.

Binge Watcher

I can guess how it must have felt for you and I am sorry about that. It was never meant as a personal attack or „hate“. You are a young author and I believe I should have been bit kinder in my message as spoke without a filter. If it wasn’t helpful at all, but just hurtful I won’t do that again. You have a great story to tell and there is a reason why I paid for your Patreon on the first day. Don’t let these comments get to your head, maybe take some inspirations here and there, but never let them get to your „heart“. Best wishes.

Philreads2

Pacing has been good for me. Don't need a world shattering evil 5 minutes into a book. Take the time to make people care about the characters so that stakes matter when you need it. We've already had plenty hinted at in the outside universe. People are just a little brainrotted for dopamine in this genre.

Justin

Everything is gonna be alright. People can be cruel... is what I would comment if I was your mother but I'm ME!! So, go eat some beacon with honey you ruppelsnooper!!!🥓🍯🐝🔥

Sambor P

Happy to be here :) Criticism, most of the time, is there as feedback and not intended as "Let's hate on the Author!" 🙈 Sorry if it bothered you. It really was honest, nothing else. Never meant offensive. Take your time. Some feedback is valid, some not. Stay true to your own goal and vision. But read feedback a little bit clinical and objective. From afar. I think the story can be awesome 😎 Only the concerns stated in the comments before needed to be addressed. I think it's way more unfair to just be silent, and then maybe going without ever telling others how you felt and why. 😊 Cheers! Don't be down! It's normal and it's a way of learning. Just ignore people who are really hating and just want to offend you :)

EsZeus

Hay I'm happybas long as you're happy with your work. And if it helps. Your writing has inspired me to start my own writing.

Neptunesaywha

Don't worry, take your time and be sure to properly rest to avoid burnout. You are writing a great story, there is not need to rush!

Melkyal

Just Happy to be along for ride. Take your time. You’ll find no rush from me at least.

Rein Warner


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