Slapstick Together Chapter 1 REBOOT (73)
Added 2025-07-10 23:38:56 +0000 UTCBack to business indeed!
As i mentioned in the previous post, this page was going to undergo a bit of a tone shift, well here you have it!
Without Leo's "i love you" being cut off, i thought i was gonna have to redraw and restructure a ton of stuff here, but it turned out that a simple dialogue shift was all i needed! All hail the dialogue tweaking!
Quite honestly, it's a symptom of having to write such a long comic over such a long period of time! i end up falling back a lot into the lovey-dovey-ness of my characters, which can be a little repetitive, especially when we've been following them for an extended period of time like in this comic (even if there IS a bit of time skip early on), though it's not really out-of-character enough that it needs fixing! Leo IS a big romantic lovey-dovey idiot, and he's a single man at this point, he doesn't know when to stop flirting with a lady! He can't be letting his guard down and mess everything up!
Thankfully, Magna's here to shut him up and yank him back on track!
That sweet love ain't gonna make itself!
