Slapstick Together Chapter 1 REBOOT (45)
Added 2024-11-12 00:47:56 +0000 UTCwha-bam! one more! we're now nearing the end of the bar date, and we'll be heading to the apartment soon! exciting!! hopefully that'll make pages come out a bit quicker since, the apartment IS a lot easier to draw, and i'm more familiar with it! We'll see!
as for the pages, they've once again stayed mostly the same, aside from the second panel, which i've shifted a bit to be a little more lighthearted! Even though i think the original was fine, and it'd be very on character for Leo to step forward and "be a gentlemen" by offering to pay for the drinks, i think this new one just keeps things a tiny bit sillier, which i prefer!
Also did a tiny clean up on the panel layout to keep them all nicer and more lined up!
Oh, and dialogue tweaks. Can't forget those!
Onto the next one!
Comments
Don’t worry, I appreciate the observations 🙂 Thanks for helping out to the best of your abilities😊
Marco Antonio Dominguez Cid
2024-11-12 01:22:25 +0000 UTCit's mainly just Leo as a Duck, no duck in particular, though i agree he does have a Daffy Duck vibe to him! He's definitely a big inspiration whenever i draw any one as a duck, especially Leo! As for doing an impression, i find that Sylvester uses his tongue a LOT more than Daffy does. Daffy's a bit more nuanced and only has a little bit of tongue towards the end of certain words, while Sylvester is quite aggressive with his tongue usage! But i'm no expert, personally, i'm sure you can find some good tutorials out there to get a better result!
Leo Fry
2024-11-12 01:11:54 +0000 UTCYou know, I’ve actually been kinda curious, I don’t know if this is Daffy Duck or a different duck, but I’ve been wanting to do a good impression of the former, are there any tips you’ve noticed about him? Cause I’m worried that my use of tongue under mouth have turned into Sylvester🤔🙂
Marco Antonio Dominguez Cid
2024-11-12 01:02:00 +0000 UTC
