Eli McKaber in Sleeping on a Secret - Page 20
Added 2025-02-18 17:40:29 +0000 UTCFinally done! What did you think of this story overall? Do you like the sexy bits? Like the world-building mystery we're getting a peek at? Think I totally bungled it? Let me know! I love to have feedback.
also went back and added some background details to the previous page, don't read into them too much, I just wanted to flesh out some Falluhs details but I realize I made the guy in the ad look a little too much like professor Summer.
Anyway, now that this comic is done, I've got some good ideas percolating on the next comic so I'll start sketching that up, but I also want to do something just for patrons, so I'll be doing something just for you guys before I delve back into the story for our next segue comic. Stay tuned!
Comments
Appreciate the feedback 😜
Shakam
2025-02-20 05:34:54 +0000 UTCI'd love to see a lil more of the sexy bits!
ISB
2025-02-20 05:26:54 +0000 UTCDefinitely like the lore and world building, and a nice mystery to boot.
Allan Meyer
2025-02-19 06:04:28 +0000 UTC
