I'm a little mixed between one strip vs multiple strips for the gag moving forward; on one hand, I think it leads to a cleaner look, but on the other, I know that one strip isn't going to do anything : P I think I will go back and add more strips.
I also think I might re-do the first panel text bubble and just write out the Mmmph!! to create a larger impact for it.
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