I think I can definitely improve this page, when I'm going back over the second pass, I think I will add a background to these panels. Please let me know if the flow of the page works, I think the shoe/leg overlapping into the top panel helps guide things along.
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incognito.O
2024-07-24 23:31:17 +0000 UTC