Constraints - Doujin Project
Added 2024-01-17 14:01:01 +0000 UTCThis is the doujin project that I want to dedicate the first half of this year to completing, the one I had talked to you about last year. Please give it a read and let me know what you think. The message within the doujin is personal to me and is something I've wanted to put out there for awhile now, and I truly hope that it connects with and resonates with others.
You can find the PDF draft of the doujin here: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1aWVKbq-oXGFB5EPdbTb5xhY37Sf9jBii/view?usp=sharing
You can find the script here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MjJTxk8cZZAAGdZrP3r-EYh36YdOuJkb0s5sFckJgEM/edit?usp=sharing
Please let me know where you think the doujin can be improved, panels that need touching up, or just overall thoughts.
What are the next steps for the project?
- Finalizing the character design
- Lining over the draft
- Panel backgrounds
- Drawing the cover and back page
- Revising and adding in sound effects
Comments
This is honestly incredible! I really enjoyed seeing each panel and watching the narrative work with a good amount of struggling on her part, along with her thoughts in writing too. I really like Yuu's design (going off the first page), a very cute school outfit with some thigh highs and her beautiful hair (especially with one of her eyes covered with hair) π²A great amount of emotions she shows while being tape up is very appreciated. It makes me excited to see how she'll look in the final version with all the tape bindings and gag. π Incredible climax to the story with the finishing touches being, Yuu in a tape hogtie. I'm excited to see the panels of tape being pressed against her face with your attention to detail to it and art style π€€ The epilogue is great with her in the bathroom stall. Collecting her thoughts and looking at all the marks left from the bindings that entrapped her. It is a very interesting take with the story of showing what people see/enjoy about bondage. It's explained and shown in a nice simple form factor, while in action and is very well done honestly. The only question I could currently come up with is about the overall story, What was the agenda for this guy to create a damsel in the middle of a public crowd? (Maybe there is a underling theme of exhibitionism involved with this π€) I honestly don't have too many questions as you have stated what the purpose of this story is suppose to tell. So then again, maybe some stuff isn't necessary to explain π€· Overall, saying I'm highly anticipating the finish version of this an understatement! I'm so excited to read the final version in June (or whenever you finish it)! Keep up the fantastic work! Would love to see you post more about the pages in future updates! π
incognito.O
2024-01-17 23:42:44 +0000 UTC
