III : A Familiar Stranger (1/3)
Added 2023-01-16 17:00:05 +0000 UTCBy now you should have noticed two things already: The first is that Hadrian talks to himself a lot and the second is that he enters in the car of random strangers.💀
P.S.: III part (2/3) will not be up on next Monday (23rd January), but next Friday (27th January)
P.S.2: Any typos/corrections are welcome 🙇♀️💀
P.S.3: Don’t be like us, don’t enter in car of perfectly strangers. 💀
Comments
It's all good! I'm happy to help. 🥰
Chai
2023-01-23 14:46:27 +0000 UTCAlso, when the stranger puts it together and exclaims, "You are the Duchess's son!" it feels a little wordy for his established speech pattern? It threw me for a second because I was expecting "You're the Duchess's son!" but maybe that's just me 😅
Chai
2023-01-17 06:01:34 +0000 UTCDon't get into cars with strangers, Hadrian! What are you doin!? XD Typo Time Suggestions: - "or to die" could be simplified as "or die" - "Look how tall you've got" could be "Look how tall you got" or "Look how tall you've grown" - Should there be a ? in the panel the old man offers Hadrian a ride?
Chai
2023-01-17 05:51:22 +0000 UTC
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