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Nala WIP! + need help on the text line

I need your help, dear patrons! Is the text on the drawing valid or there're better ways to say it?

Nala WIP! + need help on the text line

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Thank you, it was helpful

delki

It's almost good. The "I" should be "I'm" or "I am" and the rest is grammatically okay. "gonna" is OK to use in informal speak. If you would rather more formal English, "I'm going to use your face as a pillow" is more formal, but "I'm gonna use your face as a pillow" or "I am gonna use your face as a pillow" is fine to use. "Gonna" is essentially equivalent to "going to" in informal speak.

Douglas Carter


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