New Short!- Falling in Fall
Added 2024-11-26 22:03:37 +0000 UTCWhat happens when I start a short in autumn LAST year, and have to finish it this year?
It still takes me until nearly December to get it done, lol. But it evolved and got longer, it was originally going to end after the 2nd shot, but I didn't think that was good enough. So I let it sit for a year and came back. Hope you enjoy!
Comments
That short is perfect! Also, Murph plush arrived and he is amazing! Thank you!
Alex F
2024-11-27 17:11:17 +0000 UTCand that's the reason to not play on the street also Murphy's medical bill must be the same as Vivian's ego
MiszczKostuch2007
2024-11-27 04:20:30 +0000 UTCYou were right. Everything after the second shot turned this from a good short into a great short!
Nalrats
2024-11-27 01:50:53 +0000 UTCSometimes I worry my constructive criticism seems a bit too harsh but I feel as though the close-up shot with Mitzi making the silly expression at 0:28 doesn't really warrant being there. Felt like filler and it would've been funnier if it cut right back to the sewer :P
wikiascratchboy
2024-11-26 22:48:13 +0000 UTCWell imo the ending was the cherry on the top so you did everything right with waiting that long and adding more to it
Mende96
2024-11-26 22:24:59 +0000 UTC“Honey, wake up, AJMarekArt just uploaded a video”
TrevorTerror
2024-11-26 22:21:56 +0000 UTCOh man...that last part got me laughing at work..started wheezing. This is gold!
GeminiJC
2024-11-26 22:15:02 +0000 UTC
