Ring Toss - Chapter 8

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

Neal Johnstone

Woooo!! Commence with the sexy stuff!! Great chapter!

Actually, The phone call from Will's mom was the end of DPP... As for Price and Small Town Goddesses (you didn't mention it but it is still very much on my mind.) My goal is to start posting those again in December. I just want to take the rest of November to make sure I have a chapter buffer on Ring Toss and Hot Tub. I still have the engine running well for both of these stories. I know what the family plans are for the holidays, but they could easily get upended if there's another lockdown. The most important tool I can give myself to power through is a hard schedule.

Neal Johnstone

Not that i dont like Ring Toss, but that does not bode well for the finale of Any Woman has a Price and DPP :D

He may have known Michelle for at least 10 years at this point. (They met in first year university, the age of the character is 25-28ish, Win's a few years older than average, Arnie's two years younger than Rosie,, 23-24 for Charlotte) . So yeah, Michelle's been a redhead for most of the time Pat's known her. Copper red to me is a little bit more orange. Her hair's more blood red when it's darkened by water. Her natural color? I like the idea that Pat has never, and will never, seen it live. By the time she was 18, she was a bottle blonde, and the color now is salon augmented. She gets multiple showers in a day, everyday. She definitely doesn't let body hair grow in. The red's the color she's liked and touched up for at least five years now. Does this clear things up or am I scatterbrained?

Neal Johnstone

I have a few questions regarding the continuity of Michelle's hair; is the orangish auburn her natural hair colour? In chapter 1 it's referred to as reddish and dark copper (the latter makes a little more sense as a comparison to the orange auburn, while the former seems more in line with the redder-red it goes when wet in this chapter), but it's also said she dyes it and had it blonde in the past. I don't think it would be "the orange-ish auburn I was used to" unless that was the colour it was for most of the time he'd known her, so that leads me to believe the blonde dye was an experiment and either she usually dyes it red or her natural hair colour is red and that's the hair colour Pat most associates with her as a result. Is that assumption mostly correct (and hopefully not too convoluted to understand)?