Ring Toss - Chapter 6
Added 2020-10-29 03:01:39 +0000 UTCHi, if you are not up to date on Ring Toss, read the previous chapters here:
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1jaJyxh99feCWYyY77VtKuhsLtxzeMWLq?usp=sharing
Sorry about the delays, I should have the next episode of Hot Tub Love Machine out before the month ends as well.
Thank you all for the support!
Comments
Glad you liked it, but I do like the manic pace as well.
Neal Johnstone
2020-10-29 15:09:09 +0000 UTCAlways appreciate these little corrections. 1 Wrong There, corrected. 2 You got the gist of sentence 2 but seeing it isolated from the rest of the text, I can see how stilted it is. I'll pick at that whole paragraph and make it better. Thank you!
Neal Johnstone
2020-10-29 14:55:51 +0000 UTCDeanne is the calming influence. Master of housework, keep the flow. That’s her. A nice break after last chapters manic pace.
HardhatDoozer
2020-10-29 09:41:02 +0000 UTC
