Every Woman Has a Price - 2 - Undervalued
Added 2019-05-20 23:15:54 +0000 UTCAlright! We continue the new story with Owen off to sell the coins. Of course, if you haven't read the first chapter you can catch up here:
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1r9Ugk3EYFL1TurzgulHsycd7PqldTYOx
I was surprised with the feedback of Price when I went public, not one bad word and the worst reader score I had ever been awarded. Hopefully, with the plot better laid out and the harem powers begun to be seen, I'll have turned that around.
Thank you all for your support!
Comments
Definitely, I'll make it happen.
Neal Johnstone
2019-05-22 10:42:08 +0000 UTCI think the story will really get rolling with chapter 3. But yeah a character sheet would help with this one.
HardhatDoozer
2019-05-21 21:47:06 +0000 UTCThanks, I'll put together a character list for when chapter 3 posts. The scope is set. Owen has twelve coins, that means a minimum of twenty four girls. And eighteen recesses, so a maximum of sixty girls. (There won't be sixty girls, I'm thinking thirty to thirty six.). I'm going to keep the major focus on six (Liz, Frieda, the next three bought and one to arrive a bit later.) with the secondary focus on their specific enemies.
Neal Johnstone
2019-05-21 07:12:06 +0000 UTCInteresting addition! Lots of characters to track already, but I’m curious to see where things go!
Istmael
2019-05-21 01:53:37 +0000 UTC
