Monkey Wrench - The Journey Concludes
Added 2019-04-29 20:01:01 +0000 UTCWow, 40 chapters! Dean and the girls off to new worlds. This was the story of their journey to Dragon and how they became the family they will be when they land. I hope you liked it. This story changed the most from my initial outlook. I hadn't even planned the waking up on Earth in my original notes. I am ecstatic to have reached this end point.
Read all of Monkey Wrench here:
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B3_KtJ5IKlKiQTVJQ1RXU0FFb1U
How does it read? What did I do wrong? Or right? Did you enjoy it? I hope you did, I truly appreciate the support.
Scheduling note: I aim for 5 updates a month, as there were 5 Mondays in April, Small Town Goddesses 8 will be coming in May.
Comments
Glad you liked it! I'm very happy with how it all came together.
Neal Johnstone
2019-05-05 22:45:54 +0000 UTCI held off reading the last handful of chapters so I could binge right up to the end, and I was not disappointed. Excellent story, fantastic ending... all-in-all just a wonderful work!
Istmael
2019-05-05 14:58:45 +0000 UTCAs always when mixing condoms and oral sex you should have Connie with her wipes or soap and water to get rid of that gross latex taste.
HardhatDoozer
2019-04-30 13:09:43 +0000 UTCWell there’s always lunch break if you wanted to slip in X and Renee briefly.
HardhatDoozer
2019-04-30 13:07:44 +0000 UTCTrue, but there's no real conflict left in the story for Dean, it's just sex, love, and farming simulator from here on out. I'd need to work in Xiomara's moment earlier. Perhaps in the locker room, perhaps in tandem with or in succession to Wanda's first time.
Neal Johnstone
2019-04-30 12:26:27 +0000 UTCWell she said her parents are out until late, so the leisurely sex where he can make love to her. Renee and Wendy for example was still to come tonight.
HardhatDoozer
2019-04-30 09:50:15 +0000 UTCGlad you liked it. It never clicked with me that Xiomara is the main girl and yet I off-screened her. I might have to add a moment to rectify that. I'm going to reread it myself. Thanks for the comments! Glad you liked it!
Neal Johnstone
2019-04-29 23:56:45 +0000 UTCA thrilling update. Two intense updates in a row for this story. Just my luck that all of Xiomara’s leisurely evening of satisfying sex happens off screen. Do I count right? Dean and 12 women plus Zoe and Dashawn. What a complex IRL future is coming for him. I never thought that a morning quickie could involve a man and that many women. Seriously. It’s like the ballet but maybe without as much music. And Dean’s mother ... how will she ever figure out which way is up now.
HardhatDoozer
2019-04-29 21:32:53 +0000 UTC
