Monkey Wrench 39 (of 40!)
Added 2019-04-08 23:12:48 +0000 UTCI can't believe I got to the end point of another story. This will be the final month to be updating Monkey Wrench. It's blowing me away, really. I started this story in 2017. Woo, it's been a trip. I'll be honest, doesn't match my original plans much after chapter 3. I'm very happy with the way it's gone.
If you aren't up to date on Monkey Wrench, you can read it here:
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B3_KtJ5IKlKiQTVJQ1RXU0FFb1U
Thank you all for the support!
Comments
True, there is the other planet after all. Yet, Monkey Wrench is about the journey. I hope I do measure up to your expectations, I'm currently happy with how it went but any good story needs to be read before it can be evaluated. Looking forward to hearing everything anyone has to say about it. I know you'll tell me where it succeeds and where it fails.
Neal Johnstone
2019-04-11 23:04:23 +0000 UTCI considered having her go with Dashawn, but I couldn't write it in any way other than her running away or her being a trading piece between the friends. If I wrote the "I trust you with her like she's my family." I couldn't imagine her not pleading her way back into Dean's harem. I didn't want her there as a beggar so I hope it came together in a proper way.
Neal Johnstone
2019-04-11 23:02:00 +0000 UTCI’m a little amazed after all of that that Kia is his girl in the box. It felt like it wouldn’t turn out that way a while back.
HardhatDoozer
2019-04-11 17:11:10 +0000 UTCI hope the next chapter delivers. Still so many things I was looking forward to seeing it feels like.
HardhatDoozer
2019-04-11 17:04:31 +0000 UTC
