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Changelog 109-115

109: Mostly just changed some wordings and made things clearer.

110: I changed a lot of wordings, made a lot of things clearer, the flashback sequence is less jarring.

111: Mostly just fixed wordings, some of them were confusing. This is about the point where my meds were kicking in so a lot of stuff was written really fast and passionately, but not proofread by me so well. Chapters like this one are why I finally agreed to let a beta help me.

112: Fixed a lot of small things, made a foreshadowing thing a little clearer. Not that anyone missed it the first time as it's a canon event...

113: Added some stuff about Kabuto to fix a plot hole caused by my early meds.

114: Barely had to do anything at all. This is when my beta first started and the difference is noticeable.

There was a small plothole that needed fixing but I doubt anyone noticed it and it didn't exist when this chapter came out so...

A few lines really, don't worry about it.

115: I added a bit where Sakura tells Naruto to send info to the Hokage about Kabuto via clone, cleaned up a little of the language, added a few hundred words.

All in all, a pretty uneventful change log. I want to do this every 3 weeks or so, come to expect them. But uh, they're mostly to inform you of changes the public versions got.

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