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Themed Comic Suggestion Thread and News

My recovery has been going well so, to get back into drawing more frequently, for October, I want to do a short comic, around 3 to 5 pages, based on a suggestion (or suggestions) from you, my Patrons. You can post your Halloween comic ideas on this post and I will choose the best one, maybe try to incorporate elements from other suggestions if I can.

In other news, while I was unable to draw as much, I have still been able to work on my writing, preparing to start a longer comic project. Actually, over the past year, I've been working on my writing a lot but most of the stories I tinkered with didn't work out. But that's okay because, with each one, I still learned more about good storytelling.

For example, there was a story I was tinkering with about a couple who are bad at communicating that helped me learn more about giving characters subtext and hidden motives, even though I couldn't decide where the story was going and it wound up kind of running into the ground. And there was a story about a replacement model where I finally wrote what I thought was my first good sex scene, which helped me better understand how to write sexy sex, although, again, I didn't really know where the story would go on that one.

But I learned from those failed stories and the recent character designs I have been posting are for a story I did finish which is basically a sexy sex story. That one I will definitely be posting because I think it's the first really good sexy story I've ever written, although it's not a very deep story and I still need to finish planning the page layouts. I really like this sexy sex story because I think I finally am getting an understanding of how to build sexual tension in a scene so that the action is more exciting. I think it's a bit heavy on the dialogue for a sexy sex story but it works in the context of this story.

Even better, I recently wrote and completed the script for a really good wholesome romance story, which was an even bigger challenge for me. I've tinkered with a dozen romance stories that didn't work out but, somehow, this one came together. I'm really happy with this one. The romance story will be a bigger project than the sexy sex story so I'll start with the sexy sex story first, ideally before the end of the year.

However, before I start on either of those, I need to get back into the habit of drawing more often after my recovery. And focusing on comic page style art seems like a good way to gear up for longer comics.

That's why I want to hear your suggestions for a Halloween comic this year. Like I said, I'm looking for an idea that I can do in 3 to 5 pages. Please do keep in mind the Patreon rules requiring consent so no blackmail or hypnosis but we can do reluctance and seduction and discovering unexpected pleasures. Don't worry too much about trying to keep the story super short because I can always shrink the story by using lots of dense exposition captions, like you used to see in old romance comics from the 1950s. If possible, I will try to incorporate multiple suggestions.

The theme of the comic is simply Halloween so it can be costume parties, spooky monsters, whatever you can associate with Halloween.

Please post your suggestions for the Halloween comic on this post.

Themed Comic Suggestion Thread and News

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Happy about your recovery. A short story idea. A corporate spy breaks into the Vape Vixens lab, gets caught stealing an experimental vape called "Estro-Femme", he is then forced to use it to be part of Vape Vixens "Puff Puff Pretty" Halloween campaign.

John Millington

I'm glad to hear about your recovery and practice! Written word has always been my medium (not enough patience for drawing, haha), and I totally get what you mean. Writing smut is kind of unnatural; making alphabet graphics as sexy as a picture of a big rack is no mean feat! And don't be discouraged if you write hot one day, and got nothing but cold oatmeal on the next. Inspiration comes differently for everyone. But, I've always loved the way you make your pinups into little stories, and I have full confidence in you. Once you put your mind to something longer, I know you'll be writing some amazingly sexy sex!

Kacy Bond

Over the moon to hear that your well on the path to a full recovery I admittedly can't wait to read any comic you producee especially sexy sexy fun time ones :D Georgette and Thomasina are already adorableness overload and I can't wait to see what else you got cooking :D but most importantly I really am ecstatic that you're getting better :D As for an idea I always had the idea of a sissy being brave and building up the courage to go out trick or treating with their friends all dressed up but before they could leave their room they slip on a comically placed banana peel and fall back into their closet which the doors close and after a brief shaking motion they burst out of the closet no longer in a sissy outfit but casual clothes as through a series of unfortunate events of struggling in the closet it just perfectly happened that way and they now again slip on the same banana peel which this time sends him out of their bedroom and into the lounge where their friends are waiting who notice his lack of costume and begin chanting "punishment outfit, punishment outfit" seeing as he was the only one not in a costume and their friends came prepared in case anyone came without a costume. the screen then fades to black as all their friends and them are trick or treating with them totally done up in a sissy outfit anyway and all of them having a great time :D

Hina Yui

Sissy maid, locked into her outfit and dumped on the seedy side of town. She is challged to make her way home without being caught. The last page would have her being caught by a group of friends she knows.

Phillip Kettless

My idea is this. A comic that starts with a phone conversation. "Cinderella's Fancy Dress Boutique. This is Sarah. How may I help you". ""Hi Sarah, this is Laura. Do you still know how to do those card tricks you used to do in college?" Then the text gets smaller "I have an idea..." and then continues with squiggly lines. In the next frame Laura asks her boy: "you know you said you had no idea for a costume this year. What do you think about letting luck decide?". They then go to the Fancy dress shop. The guy is shown costume cards by Sarah. They have pictures and the name on them. It is for costumes like cowboy, cop, astronaut, etc. The guy gets to pick a random card. It turns out to be the Sissy card. Laura then says "you know what, i let you pick my costume card as well". He is shown cards with Pin-up, Maid, Princess, etc. The random card he picks turns out to be the Mistress. The shopkeeper helps them dress into their costumes and they are of to an Halloween party. In comic form this may be done with a split panel where they get into a cab in front of the store and get out of the cab in front of an house covered in Halloween decorations. The end scene shows them on a podium with a banner above them saying "King and Queen of Halloween" only King is crossed out and Queen is put there as well instead.

Eelco

Glad you’re doing well!!☺️ What about a hellraiser kind of theme, with the main character be taken to a “Pleasure Dimension”?

Happily Anonymous

Nothing wrong with that at all! That just means we get to eat our dessert first. :)

Jenny North

Yes, a good story that includes an earned and story-relevant sex scene is a future goal. For now, I have my sexy sex story, which is mostly sex scene, and my wholesome romance story, which has no sex scene.

Dov Sherman

Glad to hear you are feeling better!

TheCybersmith

A husband is convinced to dress in a childish pumpkin themed dress to complete a corn maze in order to earn the key to his chastity cage. He’s hoping for a treat but might end up with a trick instead.

WedgeFel

Possible ideas a soldier costume becomes a sissy sailor, a doctor becomes a slutty nurse, and finally a wizard becomes a sexy goth witch.

WedgeFel

So glad to hear from you! I’d love a comic where a man is dating a witch. He keeps buying masculine Halloween costumes but everytime he tries them on they become sissy girly versions. Until finally he has to give up and go along in a matching girly costume with his girlfriend.

WedgeFel

I am very happy that your health is better with many projects in progress :) Take care of yourself ! Here are a few of my ideas: 1- Costume contest during an evening: Couple costume related to the profession or situation > wife = her job or other situations and husband = objectification costume or related accessories (for example: A hairdresser and her husband transformed into a mannequin head for styling model with a stunning hairstyle, a florist and her husband transformed into a beautiful, sexy flower arrangement, ((a divorced woman and her husband transformed / enclosed in a glass-framed picture dressed with old wedding decorations, an old vintage wedding dress, a piece of wedding cake or other accessories related to their former marriages))) >> To find consent, it can be the motivation of the prize for the winner > a nice trip, a gift voucher in a store, others ! 2- Volunteers (in exchange for a paycheck) to decorate the front of a house for Halloween (context example consent : job-seekers who would do anything to earn money) 3 - Behind the scenes of an amusement park, men agree to be transformed and disguised for the Halloween parade (consent : this working condition was noted on their employment contracts)

Marylou_76fr

A new couple in a country neighborhood. The wife likes halloween and the husband is meh about it. He's convinced they will get no trick-or-tresters. She makes a bet; each group they get she gets to add a piece of a costume to him. After the kids are done coming around they are going to a party. Slow feminization sequence ensues. Eventually they go to the party in matching outfits. As they leave he notices she put up signs advertising big candy bars and kids were coming all over to get them. He is embarrassed about the costume but happy his wife enjoyed her halloween prank.

Andrew

I like the idea of a sociology professor doing a research project where he goes undercover as a curvy ssbbw to understand the culture of the ssbbw community.

Bubba Butts

Glad you are on the road to recovery Dov 🫶 As for an idea, guy intentionally dresses up into a rubber blonde bimbo sexdoll suit and then into a slutty princess peach costume (very high pink heels, white stockings, white lacy panties and garter straps, a corseted tutu like dress with puffy sleeves and shoulder length white gloves) for a Halloween party and finds a hunky prince to hook up with while she is there.

Sam

A comic based on your shemask art you did a a few years ago, a man who is questioning his desires to become a drag queen, finds the mask, entranced into putting it on goes and has a night on the town

A

Wow, Dov, it sounds like you’ve really busy, congrats! I don’t have a suggestion off the top of my head, but I’ll try to give it a little thought. But those are really terrific insights about the writing and sex scenes. To me, sex scenes are like fight scenes…sadly, all too often, writers get to that point and turn off their brains and put the story on hold, like, “Welp, it’s time for teh sexeh.” But the best sex (or fight) scenes stay grounded in the characters and plot. It’s a moment of heightened connection and heightened stakes that can benefit from dialogue and subtext, just like any scene. As I joked to a friend recently, “I harbor no illusions that I write erotica, but that doesn’t mean that the writing has to suck.” :) But, Dov, I feel like that’s especially exciting for you, since you’re already such a gifted artist. Something really magical happens when the story and art come together in a meaningful way, and it sounds like having the opportunity to focus on the story side has helped you to hone the tools to really up your game. That’s really wonderful, I’m excited to see what you come up with!

Jenny North

Also glad to know you're feeling better, and about your writing journey!

A Sad Fat Dragon with No Friends

Guy gets bitten by a werewolf. He expects to turn into a bloodthirsty beast, he instead turns into a big ping fluffy werepoodle. Instead of being a feral wolf he is a cute doggy girl who wants headpats and love. Will he turn back in the morning? Does he want to?

A Sad Fat Dragon with No Friends

Magic costume shop

Sam Rupe-Smith


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