Beachside Backshots (Updated)
Added 2024-07-26 19:38:51 +0000 UTCEdit: Added some motion lines + dialogue, I feel like this much improves the whole pinup! leaving the original though just for yall to enjoy.
I think this is "mostly" done, thought I need some feedback. I added some characters to the background, but I'm worried they're out of place, it to me kinda made the beach feel more populated, but I'm worried it clutters the page.
The second point of order was, I was debating adding some kind of dialogue between her and the disembodied dick-and-hands, and whether or not there should be some action lines or something along those lines, maybe implying some rubbing or motion. The top right of the page feels empty, but I don't know if i should just crop it tighter or add something, or leave it.
Any feedback from yall is appreciated! Don't be a stranger.
-Moblie
Comments
Looks good to me! The background characters gives it a "stealthy public sex" feel. Some dialogue could be nice, but I think the scene has plenty going on.
Jackiez
2024-07-27 01:05:44 +0000 UTC
