The Subordinate Epilogue
Added 2025-08-22 16:56:08 +0000 UTCHere we are! The very end, and one last twist of the knife. This part is a little more gratuitous than it is narratively essential, but I felt like there was a little room to explore Olive's new status quo after the climax... and to be honest, I also had an idea I wanted to be a huge sicko about. If The Subordinate has been giving you butterflies in your stomach, I'm pretty confident you'll get a kick out of it too :)
So, that's a wrap! Thank you all for reading - this story has been a ton of fun, and I'm very pleased with the reception it has received. Enjoy~
Comments
I was half anticipating that Ivy had managed to get away with drugging olive's mom, once she started talking to her. gods. this whole situation is a singularity, swallowing up anyone who might be able to save Ivy's victims. olive's sister knows something is up,, but she's already in Ivy's sights. she could investigate and do something. but that will just result in her fate being similar to luna's. though there's a good chance it will be anyway, that Ivy will order olive to drug her sister no matter what.... a delightfully devilish Situation you have crafted
LadyVirtue
2025-10-14 22:33:54 +0000 UTCcan i keep the knife , it doesn't need to be pulled out of me..
LadyVirtue
2025-10-14 22:26:25 +0000 UTCAh, thank you for catching those! You're quite right about them, and I'll be sure to rectify them for the compiled version of the story I'll be posting sometime soon. And beyond that, thank you for enjoying the ride. I'm glad it hurt <3
Kallie
2025-08-28 15:02:16 +0000 UTCHey this knife has been so mean to me, I will be missing the cavity it dug out for weeks! I have two small problem with the current upload though. "Ivy Robinson stands between my new wife and I, a greater presence," "iβve never seen her so happy as when I slipped the engagement ring on her finger, daydreaming about what her cheating partners might think of it." There are two I's in the improper case. Afaik Olive wasn't allowed to use the upper case I. I can't wait to see how deep/where you stab next.
KnightsRequiem
2025-08-28 05:23:31 +0000 UTCThank you so much!!! I'm glad it had a few lines that stuck out, I was really proud of that one in particular haha
Kallie
2025-08-23 02:32:21 +0000 UTCThis story has been my absolute favorite - sad to see it end, but what a way to go! There's about a billion tiny details in this short piece that I adore, but the line about Luna being a 'dark star' takes the cake for me. Beautifully written and scorching hot.
Veronica
2025-08-22 23:59:39 +0000 UTC
