[TWS] Chapter 151 – Deeper Connections [HIDDEN]
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You should write----Asterios nodded, as he pondered the recent event. “Yeah. I still considered some other options, but things were getting quite obvious, already. I guess I have started accepting and embracing it.”
Dutch Palmer
2022-05-20 13:57:02 +0000 UTCMinor grammar tweaks needed. Instead of---Asterios nodded, also pondering over the recent event. “Yeah. I still considered some other options but things are getting quite obvious already. I guess I started accepting and embracing it.”
Dutch Palmer
2022-05-20 13:56:21 +0000 UTCHmmm. It was around the usual size. As usual, I wrote to the point where it felt right without stepping into what would make it a double-sized chapter. Sometimes it means a chappy ends up as 4k words, sometimes 3k. I try not to pay attention to that too much since it can affect the whole chapter. Perhaps it feels short since not that much happened besides exploration and a short revelation.
Saileri
2022-03-06 19:56:24 +0000 UTCI agree it was really short, maybe a bit rushed so some things were skipped? Over all I really hope you get some rest and life gets less hectic for you.
Jonathan
2022-03-06 17:44:03 +0000 UTCOoooooooo!!!! Talk about a setup for the next one! Great job as always Saileri!
2022-03-06 08:34:16 +0000 UTCToooooooooo short. But thank you for the chapter.😁👍
David Cohen
2022-03-06 03:50:07 +0000 UTCThis is almost unfair
2022-03-06 01:49:42 +0000 UTCCLIFF----KUUUUUUJUUUUUUN!!!!!!!!
shifter1987
2022-03-06 00:55:10 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, but what a doozy of a cliffhanger!
Tanner Lovelace
2022-03-06 00:23:57 +0000 UTC
