The Demon Queen's Daily Life 1 (Please read it from right to left)
Added 2021-11-02 01:55:55 +0000 UTCHi, I finished this first short comic that is more elaborate than before, this is the first short comic this November so it will be available to all Tiers ($2,$5,$15).
=> Please read it from right to left and top to bottom.
I also prepared Japanese version, Chinese version, and No text version. (I used google translate).
I have set up a page to make it easier for people in Japan who want to support me : https://nyagato.fanbox.cc/
About the next short comics : I'm planning to do short comics about Azur Lane, Hololive or other...
Don't forget to hit the "like button" if you like it, it helps me to know if people like the genre or not to continue it in the future. Finally, I hope you enjoy it, thanks. ^_^
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This comic has been updated on the folder link monthly(Artworks), please check it.
For new supporters, please send me a message, and I will send you the folder link monthly.
Comments
Thanks for the mention Darren! I believe you described everything in detail perfectly, on how the partial concealment of her together with the emotive words really accentuates how immense she feels. Also, never knew something like the demon queen undressing in front of the hero's party could feel so hot and powerful at the same time 💦, I am not too sure but I think this is the first time Nyagato has done something like this so that's definitely a plus 👍 "Fitting" size indeed 😆. Now that you mentioned it, I wonder if she would do the classic way of visiting them in her usual size, or would she shrink down to blend into their society, only to cause chaos when she grows out of their cities later? 🤔 Oh! Wanted to reply to your previous comment but I procrastinated for too long >.< , no worries about taking a while to write your commentary, always appreciate the amount of polish and effort required to write these ^‿^
Flan98
2021-11-07 10:29:34 +0000 UTCThis was a strong start, if this is the level of work, we can expect to see delivered on a more regular basis then switching to pay per month was not only worthwhile but the best move possible! ( ´ ω ` ) Side note: I think it's an excellent idea that you're releasing this in multiple languages, not only does it allow others to enjoy your work but can only lead to an ever-growing community. It's good to see that you've utilized the long scroll again here, it really sells just how massive she truly is while in equal measure you’re slowly coming to appreciate all her assets and curves. You know exactly how to how dial up the raw sex appeal of your characters, the act of not fitting her breasts in the panel is a testament to their sheer size and heft. This does an amazing job of emphasizing just how huge they are (─‿‿─) I can see a lot of work was put into this as the use of emotive words such as “Rumble” and “Pulls” helps depict and describe motion in what otherwise is still image along with more emotional cues such as "Sleepy" and "Boring" to heighten and exaggerate the feelings of the character. Both their placement and use were masterfully executed, even just simple palette changes in the colour of the words helps demonstrate their association with what they’re describing. For instance, I felt that the pink shading did well to tie them to the actions and descriptors associated with her breasts movements whereas the darker brown tones of the “Rumble” tied it to a more general movement. Every placement was well thought out and there was not a single sign of overuse or waste throughout this piece. I further found myself enjoyed the "uncupping" of the clothes she was wearing, and the emphasis drawn out on the word "streeetch" to visually represent the action with words alone. Your eye is drawn along the word and you’re already imagining the action by the time you reach the actual “cup” pull on the far side of the panel. It was a brilliant execution of guiding the viewers eye through the image and gave the illusion of the action taking place. I'd be dumbfounded to believe that this was your first comic. I knew how much story you could pack into a single image in your past works so I had no doubts that when given the chance to tackle a comic with its longer format and freedom from restraint of a single image that your works would take on an entirely new dimension. It's amazing to see what you can do with the extra room allowed by this medium. The story itself and the panel flow was crafted excellently. Your use of close ups to mask her full presence was a great choice as the imagination is incredibly powerful and this kick starts it into overdrive, the lack or "absence" of certain pieces makes our brain try to fill in the “gaps” to try and comprehend the scale of the threat and ultimately makes it that much more intimidating or in this case “large”. Horrors for instance always drag the ultimate reveal as we’re just that good at scaring ourselves better than the creators ever could~ I look forward to the using this technique more in the future! I love the scale of the size difference between the Hero's Party and the Demon Queen. Her tits alone completely dwarf them (¯▿¯) Always thankful when you go big with your characters ( ‾́ ◡ ‾́ ) You've hooked me immediately and I'd certainly love to see a follow-up, perhaps a visit to the human realm is in order, as Fran has mentioned. Though perhaps at a more "fitting" size (¬‿¬ ) Honestly, stellar work! (o_ _)ﾉ彡☆
Darren van der Valk
2021-11-06 10:45:11 +0000 UTCThank you, I made a mistake so I corrected it to read from right to left 😄
NyaGato
2021-11-03 00:40:45 +0000 UTCit's good work but are you sure we read it from left to right ? seems like the opposite to me
aurexo
2021-11-02 16:08:20 +0000 UTC
