Chapter 281 – Worries, Leadership, Rewards, and Gratitude
Added 2025-06-10 21:31:40 +0000 UTCComments
I left a negative comment about one character in particular recently and while my thoughts on that one character specifically are still the same I just want to +1 this. Very good at conveying emotion in moments like that in general.
tonright
2025-06-11 02:46:49 +0000 UTCI absolutely loved the daughter moment. When you write emotional moments you always do it so naturally and it doesn't hinder the flow of the chapter, it enhances it. Please more on the feelings and relationships of these characters as they progress, you're doing an awesome job!
Josh
2025-06-10 23:48:44 +0000 UTC
