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A bulkhead is the condition a crewmember suffers from when he/she forgets to lower his/her head when passing from one compartment to another on board of a ship. Symptoms are: lumps, bruises, cuts and a lot of swearing.
Draikhyan
2022-03-10 22:16:41 +0000 UTCCan't wait to see this page finished - I love the design of the hardtroops!
Alfred Broda
2022-03-03 08:35:05 +0000 UTCDon't ships have "bulkheads", rather than "walls"? But what do I know; my Dad was in the air force.
Canopus
2022-02-27 06:04:36 +0000 UTCThanks for the feedback.
Arioch
2022-02-19 20:26:44 +0000 UTCBit of a pronoun reference in that first line -- "splattered against it;" what does 'it' refer to? the wall or the hardtroop? Obviously it becomes clear after a second read, but it might be worth rewording the passage to make it a little more clear.
S. Fish
2022-02-19 16:39:22 +0000 UTCFireblade has lots of anger issues... especially with the Bugs that undoubtedly lay waste to her home planet & her family....
Kclcmdr Kai
2022-02-02 15:32:08 +0000 UTCAfter been tied down with this obnoxious human for so long Fireblade really knows how take out her frustration on the umiak crew... ๐
Michael Pettersson
2022-02-02 11:21:26 +0000 UTC"Fireblade" ...'nuff said!
Classical Salamander
2022-02-02 03:37:53 +0000 UTCAlex, a word of advice? When you're finally married to Fireblade, don't tick her off...
JasonAW3
2022-02-01 19:10:03 +0000 UTCYeah, well compared to say psychokinetically moving a brain around in a skull, which might have been the method of killing these bugs...
GhostlyYorick
2022-02-01 17:40:47 +0000 UTCSo in retrospect, that time she pushed Jardin out of the way in the elevator she was actually being relatively gentle with him.
Shane Wegner
2022-02-01 15:55:18 +0000 UTCItโs a feature.
Shane Wegner
2022-02-01 15:54:35 +0000 UTCBlack, per the previous page
ESP
2022-02-01 13:14:30 +0000 UTCwhat gives you that impression? :D
Anthony Docimo
2022-02-01 12:38:24 +0000 UTCsuperb work on dialogue and art.
Anthony Docimo
2022-02-01 12:37:33 +0000 UTCWOW! Now imagine, Alex, if Fireblade had feelings for you - she wouldn't let any bug anywh....oh my. :)
Anthony Docimo
2022-02-01 12:37:19 +0000 UTCWhat a buggy, bloodbath! Yes Fireblade! Rain down psychokinetic destruction on thy enemies!
Snoofman
2022-02-01 11:16:23 +0000 UTCWhat colour is their blood?
THE_R3X
2022-02-01 08:01:56 +0000 UTCSomeone is obviously letting out some steam.
Dragoongfa
2022-02-01 07:51:34 +0000 UTC
