Outsider page 130
Added 2018-05-01 06:33:01 +0000 UTCStill needs some cleanup, obviously, particularly in the diagrams. I will attend to it shortly.
Can't believe it's May already.
[edit 5/2/18]: Cleanup has been done.
Comments
Clearbrook is the frigate that the shuttle is heading towards rendezvous with.
Arioch
2018-05-04 16:03:44 +0000 UTCConsidering the communikation lag of lightspeed transmissions Clearbrook obviusly started to run för it at the first sign of trouble, when the first enemy ship's begun to enter the system, it is not a reaction to the deep jumping ships, unless the Highlander are very close to Clearbrook by now. In any case, do not interrupt your enemy when he make mistakes. If the second force really lost "half their ships", it's a plus but the survivors do get a good tactical position.
Michael Pettersson
2018-05-04 11:09:54 +0000 UTCI feel a bit confused. Who is clearbrook? The last few panels I wasn't sure who is talking to whom...
2018-05-04 07:14:15 +0000 UTCMany thanks, love the updats
Michael
2018-05-02 01:46:33 +0000 UTCThe diagrams make perfect sense if you read this: <a href="http://well-of-souls.com/outsider/forum_ftl_tech.html" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://well-of-souls.com/outsider/forum_ftl_tech.html</a>
Robin
2018-05-01 15:56:07 +0000 UTCloving all the new Pages, Thanks Arioch! Indeed you're on a roll! And upping my pledge! (though I might lower it again after a couple months of no pages)
Robin
2018-05-01 15:43:18 +0000 UTCWhat are WE doing...?!? Running the hell away...what's it look like !!! :)
Sunphoenix72
2018-05-01 08:00:44 +0000 UTCI swear you are on a roll man. Keep it up.
Joshua Samuel Lapple
2018-05-01 07:06:45 +0000 UTC(the diagrams don't look like they need work, particularly the ones explaining jumps and space travel...those are well-timed asides for the reader, right? or quickly-jotted-down explanations for the human? either way works)
Anthony Docimo
2018-05-01 06:59:35 +0000 UTCexcellent inkwork and conversings.
Anthony Docimo
2018-05-01 06:57:55 +0000 UTC"what're we doing? running towards! why, whats it look like?" :)
Anthony Docimo
2018-05-01 06:57:41 +0000 UTC
