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[Requesting Feedback!] New writing style...

For those of you who've watched the Karin video, I was wondering what you think about the "different" writing style. I was leaning more into banter/dialogue between the girl and the viewer to try to make it feel a little more immersive. Any and all feedback is appreciated, even if it doesn't directly pertain to this topic! Thanks.


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