INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 31, Young Lust
Added 2025-12-07 14:10:04 +0000 UTCThis chapter starts with Pa-Ho's POV so if you're not a fan of Pa-Ho, just skip the first scene. You'll miss out on some funny shit like Matt stepping into Pa-Ho's part via the snarky narrator, but you won't lose track of the story. Pa-Ho is just cool to write and he carries much symbolism. If you're not into symbolism, just move to the second scene, which still has Pa-Ho in it, but from Caydee's POV. As always, let me know how I'm doing.
Comments
It's late here, almost 2am. I am yet again thinking about learning poetry better as I reread and move into book 8. Then I get jarred. Cover of book 8, pedal is backwards, and no stomp switches. Minor detail, but now it is stuck in my head like a hangnail. Too late, it's published I know. Do you want edit comments on the older stuff? I've always assumed no, but thought I would ask
Whicked
2025-12-08 07:48:41 +0000 UTCDefinitely looking forward to future stories with Caydee and Caydee-isms; she’s written so well. The scene with Pa-Ho was fun to read. Hopeful for a successful TSF concert, but I have my doubts. Thanks for the latest installment.
SteveZ
2025-12-07 21:41:41 +0000 UTC
