INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 21, The Deposed
Added 2025-10-17 20:41:28 +0000 UTCThis was the hardest chapter I've written in quite some time. The first half I wrote in about eight hours. The second half, several days and multiple rewrites and extensive research. I do that to myself sometimes, planning scenes without taking into account how much I need to know in order to write it. Let me know how I did.
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It is not to the plaintiff's advantage to bring the matter up officially.
Al Steiner
2025-10-22 05:12:17 +0000 UTCI wonder why Drew didn't mention the incident before he got in the building... seems kind of important
Russ Wideman
2025-10-22 04:35:42 +0000 UTCThat would be a spoiler if I told you that. PP has his role to play is all I will tell you.
Al Steiner
2025-10-22 00:24:29 +0000 UTCI just re-read this chapter, and a niggling question popped into my head. When does Paul Peterson get his revenge for using his words without his permission? It seems unlikely he comes right out and burns The Watcher regarding the New Zealand part of the story, as they are his bread and butter. But does he slide in the fact that they made up the "quotes" from him in their rebuttal article?
HamBarca22
2025-10-21 20:32:21 +0000 UTC
